YessSir32 Posted May 22, 2011 Share Posted May 22, 2011 I have been working on this for a while and wanted to get some C&C. The logo on the jersey was made by me and I have posted it on here before. This is my first ever hockey concept so please give some C&C, I want to know how I did. So without further a do, here it is.] Detroit Falcons (NABL) | Detroit Gears (UFL) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nuordr Posted May 22, 2011 Share Posted May 22, 2011 I have been working on this for a while and wanted to get some C&C. The logo on the jersey was made by me and I have posted it on here before. This is my first ever hockey concept so please give some C&C, I want to know how I did. So without further a do, here it is.]For someone that hates the Red Wings...I think the concept looks great; anything different for the Red Wings is great in my book. I am so sick of their boring uniforms. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
YessSir32 Posted May 22, 2011 Author Share Posted May 22, 2011 I have been working on this for a while and wanted to get some C&C. The logo on the jersey was made by me and I have posted it on here before. This is my first ever hockey concept so please give some C&C, I want to know how I did. So without further a do, here it is.]For someone that hates the Red Wings...I think the concept looks great; anything different for the Red Wings is great in my book. I am so sick of their boring uniforms.Thanks, that's why I wanted to give them an alternate. They need something new to wear every once in a while. Detroit Falcons (NABL) | Detroit Gears (UFL) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Coast2CoastAM2006 Posted May 22, 2011 Share Posted May 22, 2011 I have been working on this for a while and wanted to get some C&C. The logo on the jersey was made by me and I have posted it on here before. This is my first ever hockey concept so please give some C&C, I want to know how I did. So without further a do, here it is.]For someone that hates the Red Wings...I think the concept looks great; anything different for the Red Wings is great in my book. I am so sick of their boring uniforms.Thanks, that's why I wanted to give them an alternate. They need something new to wear every once in a while.good concept but my only suggestion is to make the front and back stripes consistent. i'd like to see a colored version of this too. Spoilers! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nash61 Posted May 22, 2011 Share Posted May 22, 2011 The jersey itself is a bit too similar to the home jersey (with the off colour sleeves) Try a unique striping pattern. On September 20, 2012 at 0:50 AM, 'CS85 said: It's like watching the hellish undead creakily shuffling their way out of the flames of a liposuction clinic dumpster fire. On February 19, 2012 at 9:30 AM, 'pianoknight said: Story B: Red Wings go undefeated and score 100 goals in every game. They also beat a team comprised of Godzilla, the ghost of Abraham Lincoln, 2 Power Rangers and Betty White. Oh, and they played in the middle of Iraq on a military base. In the sand. With no ice. Santa gave them special sand-skates that allowed them to play in shorts and t-shirts in 115 degree weather. Jesus, Zeus and Buddha watched from the sidelines and ate cotton candy. POTD 5/24/12, POTD 2/26/17 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lancebridwell Posted May 22, 2011 Share Posted May 22, 2011 I'd shrink the whole logo down a tad, because it just looks too broad and widespread horizontally. After that, I'd suggest bringing the crest up quite a bit. Otherwise, I love the concept! I don't think, because thinking implies uncertainty. Therefore, I KNOW. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
YessSir32 Posted May 23, 2011 Author Share Posted May 23, 2011 Any more C&C before I try to update? Detroit Falcons (NABL) | Detroit Gears (UFL) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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