Patchey13 Posted May 24, 2011 Author Share Posted May 24, 2011 Great update. I would now:-Thicken the blue line in between the head and the body-still thicken the white line-retrace it all using as little anchor points and big (and not sharp) curves just so it looks a little be more natural.-and MAYBE try to make it consistent and not have any red touch the white. So put a blue outline inside the wing so it goes: redwing/ blue outline/ white outline.-I'd like the see the F in again tooBut the design is great, its a really solid and well designed logo. It just needs a little cleaning Once again, thank you for your comments. I'm looking into some of the things you said, but I notice that as soon as I start to get any thicker with the white outline, the logo starts to lose its shape. That is REALLY sharp. I think the outer line of the wing should be kept, though, or at least some sort of definition on the wing to give it a little more depth. Seriously though, if I found that logo on a hat, I'd wear it.Thanks, it's definitely a cool feeling knowing somebody would actually wear something you made. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Patchey13 Posted May 26, 2011 Author Share Posted May 26, 2011 Anybody else? I made a few tweaks to the primary, but still figuring out how to work in some detail on the wings. Adding details onto the secondary is killing me as well. I'd like to post an update for you guys tonight. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Fixer Posted May 26, 2011 Share Posted May 26, 2011 as a total cop out to not knowing how to add detail to the secodnary- you can always throw initials on top of it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Patchey13 Posted May 26, 2011 Author Share Posted May 26, 2011 as a total cop out to not knowing how to add detail to the secodnary- you can always throw initials on top of itHahaha, good idea. I really want to test myself though, I've just had trouble finding a top down view of a Falcon for reference. I've been toying around with re working the wings for both logos. I think they are the main weakness with both logos. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Le Québécois Posted May 26, 2011 Share Posted May 26, 2011 It looks good but as somebody said before, no matter what colors scheme you use, it's too much old Capitals logo to me... sorry! Le QUÉBÉCOIS Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Patchey13 Posted May 26, 2011 Author Share Posted May 26, 2011 Well, I updated the Primary logo. I tried to tighten it up a bit. The main changes are to the Wings and the Feet. I'll get to vectorizing it in the morning, but I figured I'd post up the progress. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NEW.ERA Posted May 26, 2011 Share Posted May 26, 2011 Looks a lot better in the Blue and Gold.Good work man! Â JETS|PACK|JAYS|NUFC|BAMA|BOMBERS|RAPS|ORANJE| Â Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
untvar Posted June 9, 2011 Share Posted June 9, 2011 Yes, changing the legs/feet was a huge improvement. Why does the tail now have a 'hump'? The original tail was better IMO. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Patchey13 Posted August 21, 2011 Author Share Posted August 21, 2011 I recently decided to come back to this, trying to update it for my CHL franchise. The colour scheme will be Black and Yellow with some red incorporated. It's just a sketch so far, but I wanted to know if it's an improvement. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
crashcarson15 Posted August 21, 2011 Share Posted August 21, 2011 YES. That's really, really nice. I love how the wings form a "W" too. Although, I feel like the maple leaf looks awkwardly tall still... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Patchey13 Posted August 22, 2011 Author Share Posted August 22, 2011 YES. That's really, really nice. I love how the wings form a "W" too. Although, I feel like the maple leaf looks awkwardly tall still...Tall? Looks about right to me, if I made it any smaller vertically, the sides would be too big and it would be out of proportion Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Patchey13 Posted August 22, 2011 Author Share Posted August 22, 2011 Nobody else? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Patchey13 Posted August 23, 2011 Author Share Posted August 23, 2011 Drew up a quick sketch for a Primary logo. No colour yet. Wondering what you guys thought Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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