svb2815 Posted June 5, 2011 Share Posted June 5, 2011 decent for my first try I'd like to think... im still learning illustrator so its pretty toughand I would like some stuff I should change, but I won't be fixing it. I just wanna see what I need to work on next time and everything, so feedback would be great! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Patchey13 Posted June 5, 2011 Share Posted June 5, 2011 This is a great start. I would try toning down the detail a bit (fewer feathers mostly) reduce the number of colours, and thicken those strokes up. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
svb2815 Posted June 5, 2011 Author Share Posted June 5, 2011 yeah i realized that after i finished. i may acutally go over and do another eagle one in a few days.is there a way to flatten the paths in the layer so you can like stroke it before you flatten it, then put a different stroke around it after you flatten it you do it again? idk if that makes sense how im asking it though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
vikmurphy Posted June 5, 2011 Share Posted June 5, 2011 i would raise the brow on the bird to give it a more intimidating look. Also i would add a line to separate the top and bottom of the beak. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
raysox Posted June 5, 2011 Share Posted June 5, 2011 Hah! I almost used the same picture to make a logo earlier.I'd reduce the number of colors, and take out all the outlines. Say the red is the "base layer", then the white and yellow details should be separated by the red outline. Also, look at other bird logos for the eye. I get caught on the eye every logo I make. @MichaelDanger19 | Dribbble Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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