Spectre Posted June 17, 2011 Share Posted June 17, 2011 Did a little doodling today and came up with this. Very early stages, and very simple, but I'm just looking for some criticism to see where else I might go with it. Maybe some beveling inside the W?This probably wouldn't be strong enough for a primary mark, but probably more of a tertiary logo.Anyway... thoughts? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
habsfan1 Posted June 17, 2011 Share Posted June 17, 2011 Your concept ain't showing. There's just a red X. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spectre Posted June 17, 2011 Author Share Posted June 17, 2011 Fixed. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chickenfish13 Posted June 17, 2011 Share Posted June 17, 2011 I think the W is too curvy. Maybe try to make the W a little more straight edged, and have the jet shoot diagonally from the top right of the W. Just an idea, it might be one that I think sounds good but doesn't render too well, just an idea. I like the basic idea of this though. dribbble Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spectre Posted June 17, 2011 Author Share Posted June 17, 2011 Not 100% sure on what you're saying, but is this anything close? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fumbler Posted June 17, 2011 Share Posted June 17, 2011 The curvy first post would suit a caligraphy style woordmark.Try seperating the W and the tail of the plane slightly RICHMOND TIGERS Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
YessSir32 Posted June 17, 2011 Share Posted June 17, 2011 The curvy first post would suit a caligraphy style woordmark.Try seperating the W and the tail of the plane slightlyI agree, I think it would make the plane more distinct. Detroit Falcons (NABL) | Detroit Gears (UFL) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chickenfish13 Posted June 17, 2011 Share Posted June 17, 2011 Yeah the first one is what I meant, although now that I see it I'm not so sure if it's better. I'd say go with what you think looks better, because either way could work. dribbble Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rcb05 Posted June 17, 2011 Share Posted June 17, 2011 I like the more straight-lined W. The original looked way too "Washington Nationals-esque" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Drakonius26 Posted June 18, 2011 Share Posted June 18, 2011 Definitely separate the W and the Jet, not to mention I get the feeling this seems like more of a baseball cap logo than hockey logo. Is the red oval supposed to be a hockey puck? If so, you might want to establish that with a bit more detail. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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