aawagner011 Posted July 3, 2011 Share Posted July 3, 2011 Try making the legs more straight (with the correct orientation of course as noted by the poster previously) so that you may place the ball in the center. If you look at the current crest, the legs are more straight with a more minimal arch. If you replicate that here, I feel like you'll have enough space to center the ball better.Or if you find you cannot center it properly and not make it look forced, perhaps come up with a stylized way to include the date of the club to fill the space. Looks great either way, though! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mfoster Posted July 18, 2011 Share Posted July 18, 2011 As a 30+ year fan of NCFC (great-great-great-great-great-great-great-grandfather was mayor of Norwich in the 17th century), I think this is fantastic work! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-kj Posted July 23, 2011 Author Share Posted July 23, 2011 I let this go for a copule of weeks, but I decided to come back to it tonight. Thanks for the tips and compliments above; and an OTBC to you, mfoster! After looking it over and getting some other opinions as well, I decided on a few things:- Straightening the legs made the stance look a bit wobbly and unbalanced, so I decided to stick with more of the perched stance.- I liked the feet of the straightened version better than those on the crouched version.- The perspective of the tail was off; while we were looking at the bird from a low 3/4 profile, we were looking at the top/back of the tail.So, I gave a go at fixing these things. I'm not sure I solved the tail problem here, but the more I look at it, the more I like it. Buy some t-shirts and stuff at KJ Shop! KJ Branded | Behance portfolio POTD 2013-08-22 On 7/14/2012 at 2:20 AM, tajmccall said: When it comes to style, ya'll really should listen to Kev. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-kj Posted July 24, 2011 Author Share Posted July 24, 2011 Alright... I fixed my file mixup up there. I had something fun here, but since I based it off of the wrong file, this post ends up being a pointless bump. Sorry, all....but I could still use some C&C on this one. Buy some t-shirts and stuff at KJ Shop! KJ Branded | Behance portfolio POTD 2013-08-22 On 7/14/2012 at 2:20 AM, tajmccall said: When it comes to style, ya'll really should listen to Kev. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gordie_delini Posted July 24, 2011 Share Posted July 24, 2011 Kevin, at this point, i'd just nitpick the flow of your curves a bit more. The shape and everything is about as solid as you can make it. Well done my friend! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-kj Posted July 24, 2011 Author Share Posted July 24, 2011 Thanks, Gordie.I re-did the earlier "stitched" version, now that I based it off of the right file: Buy some t-shirts and stuff at KJ Shop! KJ Branded | Behance portfolio POTD 2013-08-22 On 7/14/2012 at 2:20 AM, tajmccall said: When it comes to style, ya'll really should listen to Kev. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JamieRose Posted July 24, 2011 Share Posted July 24, 2011 I've loved watching this concept evolve since the beginning. You've turned Norwich City FC's crest into a great Premier League identity. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
oaklandhusker Posted July 24, 2011 Share Posted July 24, 2011 it's... it's... it's beautiful! Been watching from the beginning, you've improved so much! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-kj Posted July 26, 2011 Author Share Posted July 26, 2011 Yeah, I know... I just can't keep well enough alone:Mostly minor curve tweaks, tweaks to the legs, and a change in the bottom of the ball that started bothering me. Buy some t-shirts and stuff at KJ Shop! KJ Branded | Behance portfolio POTD 2013-08-22 On 7/14/2012 at 2:20 AM, tajmccall said: When it comes to style, ya'll really should listen to Kev. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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