sparkychewbarky Posted July 1, 2011 Share Posted July 1, 2011 Thanks to all for your input.Brandn, I liked your 'tribe' theory.I didn't realize I was that smart.Anyway, I wasn't feeling the love for the primary Jets logo,so I tried a script version...I cleaned up the squadron logo too.Here's the aways...Homes to follow.(I've got the shoulder patches a little too big) *The Battle of Seattle Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
knnhrvy16 Posted July 1, 2011 Share Posted July 1, 2011 You've got a winner of a primary logo right there, LOVE the design of that. I think the only complaint I have is that the numbers on the jersey don't need to be italicized - as they are now, I don't think it really "goes" with the identity, if you know what I mean. Straighten 'em up, and you'll be on your way. Great work! The opinions I express are mine, and mine only. If I am to express them, it is not to say you or anyone else is wrong, and certainly not to say that I am right. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CS85 Posted July 1, 2011 Share Posted July 1, 2011 Wow. Win. I love that primary and that polar bear secondary is fantastic as well. The numerals are kind of plain but it fits. Well done. Quote "You are nothing more than a small cancer on this message board. You are not entertaining, you are a complete joke." twitter Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JQK Posted July 1, 2011 Share Posted July 1, 2011 That primary is very, very good."If there's a way to make the J look a little bit more like a J" I think is the only nitpick i have about this. Otherwise, it's very, very good. Stay Tuned Sports Podcast Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Magnus Posted July 1, 2011 Share Posted July 1, 2011 Yeah, the contrail pointing straight up might do the trick for the J to look more like a J. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Somppi Posted July 1, 2011 Share Posted July 1, 2011 This is the best Jets concept yet Auburn University Alum Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Frenchie Posted July 1, 2011 Share Posted July 1, 2011 OUTSTANDING, eh?I would even try the W-Bear logo without the 9th squadron on it, make it "implied"....LOVE IT!!! @Frenchie_TO Owner of the Rochester Americans of the MLH Owner of the Toronto Frenchies of the GCFHL6 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Drakonius26 Posted July 2, 2011 Share Posted July 2, 2011 Thanks to all for your input.Brandn, I liked your 'tribe' theory.I didn't realize I was that smart.Anyway, I wasn't feeling the love for the primary Jets logo,so I tried a script version...I cleaned up the squadron logo too.Here's the aways...Homes to follow.(I've got the shoulder patches a little too big)Wow, now that is beautiful. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
andrewharrington Posted July 2, 2011 Share Posted July 2, 2011 Great primary. I think it works much better when it's centered within the circle like on the jersey. I still don't have a website, but I have a dribbble now! http://dribbble.com/andyharry [The postings on this site are my own and do not necessarily represent the position, strategy or opinions of adidas and/or its brands.] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sparkychewbarky Posted July 2, 2011 Author Share Posted July 2, 2011 Rotated the 'Jets' a tad.Cleaned up the secondary...Home...Away...Thanks guys. *The Battle of Seattle Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bayne Posted July 2, 2011 Share Posted July 2, 2011 Reminds me of wendys or some kind of icecream store logo.. I'm Danny fkn Heatley, I play for myself. That's what fkn all stars do. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NorthStar74 Posted July 2, 2011 Share Posted July 2, 2011 I like that... simple yet really something to see... I'm not sure about that red circle in the road jersey but it's good.. as for that secondary logo, wow that hybrid bear-wing thing reminds me a bit of something similar to the grand rapids griffins logo.. however that secondary logo is a good one to use for alternate jersey if so? Ice Hockey International Winnipeg Braves (Bobby Hull Division 18-3-0 1st place as of March 14, 2011)2010-11 O'Brien Trophy for Bobby Hull Division championship & Jack Riley Cup for top team in league regular season Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
north dakota Posted July 2, 2011 Share Posted July 2, 2011 It's a great logo but I think the numbers ruin the jersey. Woah! You think I'm Cody? My name is Carl Scott Simone and we just happen to share a birthday. BIG DEAL. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
altosax29b Posted July 2, 2011 Share Posted July 2, 2011 The numbers should match the 9 in the alternate logo. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BrandMooreArt Posted July 2, 2011 Share Posted July 2, 2011 great job here. i really like everything. maybe ad a gold stroke to the primary's circle so it matches the "jets". GRAPHIC ARTIST BEHANCE / MEDIUM / DRIBBBLE Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Crash Posted July 3, 2011 Share Posted July 3, 2011 I love the primary, I love the secondary. I'd like to see the circle appear on the dark jerseys, too, though. I think it would look great, even without a color switch. On the jerseys, just because of personal taste and taking nothing away from what you've done, I'd really like to see a revival of the full sleeve shoulder yoke/stripe, like this. I think it's a sharp look, but it also prevents the straight lines from interfering with the round logo.I agree with the person above that suggested un-italicizing the numbers. As it stands, there are too many angles, none of them matching. Vertical numbers would solve that.But if the jerseys came out exactly as you have them? I'd buy one the first day. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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