skier14 Posted July 6, 2011 Share Posted July 6, 2011 I would love feedback on this. I need to fix the mouth, and I need help with the eyes as well. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Point1 Posted July 6, 2011 Share Posted July 6, 2011 Haha weird coincidence, that's what I'm working on right now. How about I comment on yours you comment on mine I haven't really done this much, but I'll give you a lot.- The nose needs to be shorter.- The outline might be too thick; it overpowers the whole design.- You might want to try a tuft of fur at the top of its head; it would make the "A" look much more natural.- Add a top row of teeth- Add whiskers. That would go a LONG way towards making it look more cat-like.- Change the head shape a bit, right now it looks like the ears take up most of its head. Do some research and look at pictures, because I'm getting more of a weasel/ferret vibe.- I would make it look a bit more fierce, instead of placated.- The eyes need... eyes. It looks kind of sunken and scary right now (but not in a good way)I like your fundamentals right now, and the colour scheme is really unique and great. If you makes this a bit more cat-like I think it could look a lot better. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Enio125 Posted July 6, 2011 Share Posted July 6, 2011 The color scheme doesn't do it for me, but if you really like it than keep it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vicious Posted July 6, 2011 Share Posted July 6, 2011 the way that you have the orange mark right where the ears meet the cheeks is making it look like the ears are in front of the cheeks. if you extend that orange mark up somehow it will look like the ears start behind the cheeks and give it more depth.I would maybe try to bring up the nose and the mouth. definitely shorten the nose. add that tuft of hair to make the A seem more natural. your outline is a bit too big as stated before.i would like to see how it would look if all the orange were that brown color, keeping it a 2 color logo perhaps.keep going, great start.-Vicious- Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
YessSir32 Posted July 6, 2011 Share Posted July 6, 2011 Haha weird coincidence, that's what I'm working on right now. How about I comment on yours you comment on mine I haven't really done this much, but I'll give you a lot.- The nose needs to be shorter.- The outline might be too thick; it overpowers the whole design.- You might want to try a tuft of fur at the top of its head; it would make the "A" look much more natural.- Add a top row of teeth- Add whiskers. That would go a LONG way towards making it look more cat-like.- Change the head shape a bit, right now it looks like the ears take up most of its head. Do some research and look at pictures, because I'm getting more of a weasel/ferret vibe.- I would make it look a bit more fierce, instead of placated.- The eyes need... eyes. It looks kind of sunken and scary right now (but not in a good way)I like your fundamentals right now, and the colour scheme is really unique and great. If you makes this a bit more cat-like I think it could look a lot better.I think you nailed it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wILL-INI Posted July 6, 2011 Share Posted July 6, 2011 The "A" on the forehead looks forced. It's too blatant and is really jarring... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rcb05 Posted July 6, 2011 Share Posted July 6, 2011 To me, the current color scheme says "skin tones." Unless your trying to make it look like a hairless bobcat, I'd consider changing the color scheme. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
untvar Posted July 11, 2011 Share Posted July 11, 2011 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Keeb13r Posted July 13, 2011 Share Posted July 13, 2011 The head looks like it is way too defined by the shape of the ears and not enough by a skull. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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