yauger72 Posted July 15, 2011 Share Posted July 15, 2011 I made this Winnipeg Jets logo in AAA Logo. I took the rumored CAF theme and replaced the rumored two-toned grey with a powder blue. C+C appreciated. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
drdougfresh Posted July 15, 2011 Share Posted July 15, 2011 Really awkward. The plane looks thrown on top, and the leaf inside the roundel should be just that, inside. The leaf pulls you in one direction, the plane in another. And that blue really does not fit this scheme at all. I don't like this, sorry. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yauger72 Posted July 15, 2011 Author Share Posted July 15, 2011 Really awkward. The plane looks thrown on top, and the leaf inside the roundel should be just that, inside. The leaf pulls you in one direction, the plane in another. And that blue really does not fit this scheme at all. I don't like this, sorry.Thanks for looking anyways. What all would you suggest to fix this? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
seancarter Posted July 15, 2011 Share Posted July 15, 2011 I like see more modern design for winnipeg jets logo Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
drdougfresh Posted July 15, 2011 Share Posted July 15, 2011 Really awkward. The plane looks thrown on top, and the leaf inside the roundel should be just that, inside. The leaf pulls you in one direction, the plane in another. And that blue really does not fit this scheme at all. I don't like this, sorry.Thanks for looking anyways. What all would you suggest to fix this?Pretty sure that was a whole list of things to fix/look at, no?That, or start from scratch. It's a little too clip-arty. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Corvus Posted July 16, 2011 Share Posted July 16, 2011 I think you need more of a fighter-jet plane shape. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bayne Posted July 16, 2011 Share Posted July 16, 2011 Maple leaf and jet are too small in relation to the size of the circle. I'm also not a fan of the 'speed' stripes behind the jet - I think that makes it look a little amateur. Also the shape of the jet, particularly the nose end of it doesn't look intimidating at all. I would make it a pointed nose and prehaps outline it with a white and navy blue line to make it pop out a bit from the leaf. Overall its a good concept, but I think the logo could be put together a bit better. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yauger72 Posted July 16, 2011 Author Share Posted July 16, 2011 I have three new versions of the logo going with the suggestions of drdougfresh and Bayne. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Djarnis Posted July 16, 2011 Share Posted July 16, 2011 Why not incorporate the maple leaf into the tail end of the jet? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DelayedPenalty Posted July 16, 2011 Share Posted July 16, 2011 Your plane looks more like a cruise missile. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
drdougfresh Posted July 17, 2011 Share Posted July 17, 2011 Do you know what a fighter jet looks like? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
YessSir32 Posted July 17, 2011 Share Posted July 17, 2011 Make the fighter jet look like a fighter jet. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
andrew. Posted July 17, 2011 Share Posted July 17, 2011 I don't remember the original Jets ever saying that by 'Jets' they meant fighter, not jumbo, but still, I doubt many fans would want a fat airbus as their team's logo if they could have an F-16 or something. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
missouri tigers Posted July 17, 2011 Share Posted July 17, 2011 How is that plane even capable of flight... Its wings are puny.You could have just googled fighter jet and found a good overhead view of a plane to base it on, although I'm not sure this concept is going anywhere. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dicebaseball Posted July 23, 2011 Share Posted July 23, 2011 pretty damn close ay Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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