kevinmets Posted July 19, 2011 Share Posted July 19, 2011 Just always thought their current primary, while "classic", needed some cleaning up.Updated to include stitching! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jahgee Posted July 19, 2011 Share Posted July 19, 2011 I would add stitches to the Baseball, other than that, nice job. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The_Admiral Posted July 19, 2011 Share Posted July 19, 2011 I've had the same idea. I agree. No sense in keeping the old Dodger script around. ♫ oh yeah, board goes on, long after the thrill of postin' is gone ♫ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
McCall Posted July 19, 2011 Share Posted July 19, 2011 The old script works better within the logo. If you're gonna use the new script, at least skew it so the letters are a little more erect (giggity) to similar to the old way. As is now, it looks like you simply cut and paste the current script over the old one. And as mentioned, any "updating" would probably necessitate stitches on the ball. Not too detailed, but stitching nonetheless. https://dribbble.com/MakaioCall Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
9erssteve Posted July 19, 2011 Share Posted July 19, 2011 Looks great! You've made some real improvemnts to it. The only two things I'd tweak personally would be to Split the cap D from the rest of the word, as the flow of writing a Script D like that wouldn't actually allow for a ligature there, and secondly I'd disconnect the tail of the s from the r and use it to initiate the underline as it was on the old one, but I'd do it slightly differently by having the tail of the s loop through itself to form the underline rather than just have it appear out the front like on the original.9erssteve Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kevinmets Posted July 19, 2011 Author Share Posted July 19, 2011 As is now, it looks like you simply cut and paste the current script over the old one.The main update here is the red lines under/around the Dodgers script. That part clearly wasn't cut and paste. That is the part of the original logo that needs the updating the most.I updated it to add stitching on the ball, but I think the script is perfect the way it is. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fox Posted July 19, 2011 Share Posted July 19, 2011 Great update. I don't know what could be improved Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BBTV Posted July 20, 2011 Share Posted July 20, 2011 The old script works better within the logo. If you're gonna use the new script, at least skew it so the letters are a little more erect (giggity) to similar to the old way. As is now, it looks like you simply cut and paste the current script over the old one. And as mentioned, any "updating" would probably necessitate stitches on the ball. Not too detailed, but stitching nonetheless.Right - the new script should be italicized a bit like the old one was. I know that it doesn't exactly match the jersey in that case, but it's more of an acceptable difference than having two totally different scripts all together. "The views expressed here are mine and do not reflect the official opinion of my employer or the organization through which the Internet was accessed." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lightning25 Posted July 20, 2011 Share Posted July 20, 2011 Looks great with the update. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jaha32 Posted July 20, 2011 Share Posted July 20, 2011 The old script works better within the logo. If you're gonna use the new script, at least skew it so the letters are a little more erect (giggity) to similar to the old way. As is now, it looks like you simply cut and paste the current script over the old one. And as mentioned, any "updating" would probably necessitate stitches on the ball. Not too detailed, but stitching nonetheless.Right - the new script should be italicized a bit like the old one was. I know that it doesn't exactly match the jersey in that case, but it's more of an acceptable difference than having two totally different scripts all together.Agreed, it would look better more italicized. Most scripts look strange if they are tilting backwards which is what you have done. I have always liked the Dodgers simplistic logo, but a few tweaks could make it better, and your stitching on the ball here is a nice update. DesignsByHahn.com Behance Dribbble Instragram Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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