johnrafael Posted August 17, 2011 Share Posted August 17, 2011 I started to update my personal logo. after subsequent failures, I asked Jimmy Nutini to help me. He told me to do something and look for C&C here. Here is my old personal brandand here, my attempt at a new logo.I hope you can help me. Any C&C will be apreciated Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ldswoosh33 Posted August 19, 2011 Share Posted August 19, 2011 I dont really c ur "R" in the new one... Maybe bring that out Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
johnrafael Posted August 21, 2011 Author Share Posted August 21, 2011 No More?or is very good, and nobody saw anything wrong, or is very bad and nobody liked it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
missouri tigers Posted August 21, 2011 Share Posted August 21, 2011 I see a lot of potential in the new logo.I really like the symmetry in it, but the R is kind of lost.try moving the point on the top of the J up a bit and possibly making it a little thicker, then do the same for the R. (only flipped, obviously)That way its still symmetrical, but is more legible.Even as it is now, it is still miles ahead of your previous logo. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
johnrafael Posted August 21, 2011 Author Share Posted August 21, 2011 Thanks Adam. Thicker lines, details set on Initials and a clean presentation in Update of Update.Better? Worse? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JTernup Posted August 21, 2011 Share Posted August 21, 2011 Much better I really like it, you could probably still move the point up a little bit. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
johnrafael Posted August 21, 2011 Author Share Posted August 21, 2011 Much better I really like it, you could probably still move the point up a little bit.I do not plan switch the most basic form, because it probably will look more like an S. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nash61 Posted August 21, 2011 Share Posted August 21, 2011 Big improvement. Consider adding more to the stems or the J and R Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mania Posted August 21, 2011 Share Posted August 21, 2011 I would definitely work on the notches on the actual logo... maybe curve it differently or SOMETHING, because it looks very... phallic. Particularly the one on the right hand side due to the curvature. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
missouri tigers Posted August 21, 2011 Share Posted August 21, 2011 I would definitely work on the notches on the actual logo... maybe curve it differently or SOMETHING, because it looks very... phallic. Particularly the one on the right hand side due to the curvature.Haha, wow. I didn't notice that before, but now it's all I can see when I look at it.You probably want to fix that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
johnrafael Posted August 21, 2011 Author Share Posted August 21, 2011 Siempre hay que ser un Argentino... Mierda (Perdoname, Chiste BrasileƱo)------------------------------------------------------------------------The First version was not Phallic (#alok). Is the Thicker Line that makes it seems like a d*ck. anyway, the d*ck is STRAIGHT Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rayman Posted August 25, 2011 Share Posted August 25, 2011 what i would do if i were u is to tilt the logo more to the left so the logo can look more like an S and then change your name to studios instead of design Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
oaklandhusker Posted October 4, 2011 Share Posted October 4, 2011 I feel like you should just clean up the original and keep it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
missouri tigers Posted October 4, 2011 Share Posted October 4, 2011 I feel like you should just clean up the original and keep it.And you say this as a joke?What he has now, despite looking like two male reproductive organs, is miles ahead of the design he originally had.It was way way to busy to be effective as a personal logo.... and, Johnny, If you are worried about your logo looking too phallic, just try changing the end of the J and R a bit, or even just round the end off. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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