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Updating my personal Logo (Thanks JimmyN64)


johnrafael

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I started to update my personal logo. after subsequent failures, I asked Jimmy Nutini to help me. He told me to do something and look for C&C here. Here is my old personal brand

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and here, my attempt at a new logo.

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I hope you can help me. Any C&C will be apreciated

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I see a lot of potential in the new logo.

I really like the symmetry in it, but the R is kind of lost.

try moving the point on the top of the J up a bit and possibly making it a little thicker, then do the same for the R. (only flipped, obviously)

That way its still symmetrical, but is more legible.

Even as it is now, it is still miles ahead of your previous logo.

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I would definitely work on the notches on the actual logo... maybe curve it differently or SOMETHING, because it looks very... phallic. Particularly the one on the right hand side due to the curvature.

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I would definitely work on the notches on the actual logo... maybe curve it differently or SOMETHING, because it looks very... phallic. Particularly the one on the right hand side due to the curvature.

Haha, wow. I didn't notice that before, but now it's all I can see when I look at it.

You probably want to fix that.

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Siempre hay que ser un Argentino... Mierda (Perdoname, Chiste BrasileƱo)

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The First version was not Phallic (#alok). Is the Thicker Line that makes it seems like a d*ck. anyway, the d*ck is STRAIGHT

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  • 1 month later...

I feel like you should just clean up the original and keep it.

And you say this as a joke?

What he has now, despite looking like two male reproductive organs, is miles ahead of the design he originally had.

It was way way to busy to be effective as a personal logo.

... and, Johnny, If you are worried about your logo looking too phallic, just try changing the end of the J and R a bit, or even just round the end off.

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