jamdawg1 Posted August 21, 2011 Share Posted August 21, 2011 George Ashburn - My Website Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
drdougfresh Posted August 21, 2011 Share Posted August 21, 2011 Too busy. I think you were focused too much on adding 'everything', and not so focused on making something that could actually look good. What's with the collar? Why are there 3 logos on the pants? The collar may look okay on it's own, but not with those shoulder stripes. You should also look at the TV numbers, they're too far forward. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jamdawg1 Posted August 21, 2011 Author Share Posted August 21, 2011 Too busy. I think you were focused too much on adding 'everything', and not so focused on making something that could actually look good. What's with the collar? Why are there 3 logos on the pants? The collar may look okay on it's own, but not with those shoulder stripes. You should also look at the TV numbers, they're too far forward.Okay. The collar is a bit busy.As for the TV Numbers. The Shoulder Yoke itself is forward in the drawing. I would also bring back the bigger 4-inch TV NumbersAs for the pants. The two logos on the belt/waist would be more subtle.Thanks for the input. George Ashburn - My Website Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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