Patchey13 Posted August 24, 2011 Share Posted August 24, 2011 Well, it's been 3 days with the other topic, and only ONE reply. I guess I must have something contagious. Anyways I figured the updates are drastic enough for a thread of there own, as it's pretty much an entirely new concept. I think I have an even better base to build upon with these sketches than the last set.PrimarySecondary Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
walkerws Posted August 24, 2011 Share Posted August 24, 2011 Nice touch with teh bird and leaf. I like hte head but something seems a little "weak". More like he's saying "hi neighbor, want some coffee?" Not "get near my puck and you're going into the boards. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Patchey13 Posted August 24, 2011 Author Share Posted August 24, 2011 I agree with the Head. I'll sharpen it up a bit. Thanks for the comment, been waiting days to hear something Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Patchey13 Posted August 25, 2011 Author Share Posted August 25, 2011 Update will be posted up tonight. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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Patchey13 Posted August 26, 2011 Author Share Posted August 26, 2011 I finally get a reply, and it's this ? What the hell.Heres the update, as promised. I made the falcon a little more anatomically correct. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NorthStar74 Posted August 26, 2011 Share Posted August 26, 2011 hey man I like that falcon look but make the eye area more intimidating?? That might capture the spirit good enough.. keep up the good work! Ice Hockey International Winnipeg Braves (Bobby Hull Division 18-3-0 1st place as of March 14, 2011)2010-11 O'Brien Trophy for Bobby Hull Division championship & Jack Riley Cup for top team in league regular season Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Patchey13 Posted August 26, 2011 Author Share Posted August 26, 2011 Any suggestions to make it look more intimidating? I think it looks fine as is, and is ten times better than the droopy eyes in the first rendition. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Xodius Posted August 26, 2011 Share Posted August 26, 2011 Perhaps elongate it, while making it slightly narrower. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sparkychewbarky Posted August 26, 2011 Share Posted August 26, 2011 Patchey...It's progressing nicely.Maybe try a thick-thin oval shape;(i.e.- thicker at the ends)Make the eye on the falcon bigger. *The Battle of Seattle Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
walkerws Posted August 26, 2011 Share Posted August 26, 2011 I finally get a reply, and it's this ? What the hell.Heres the update, as promised. I made the falcon a little more anatomically correct.Much more intimidating look there. I like that this is not just in a circle too. Great update Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
walkerws Posted August 26, 2011 Share Posted August 26, 2011 Try this to help with the eyes Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Patchey13 Posted August 27, 2011 Author Share Posted August 27, 2011 Thanks for all the great comments guys. Unfortunately I can't do an update until tomorrow. I think I'm pretty close to vectorizing these. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Patchey13 Posted August 29, 2011 Author Share Posted August 29, 2011 I made some slight tweaks based on what you guys said. The eye is bigger as well as more intimidating, and I tried to vary the stroke thickness of the oval like Sparky said. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sparkychewbarky Posted August 30, 2011 Share Posted August 30, 2011 Each time out it gets better, patch.The eye though, looks more like a cat's eye.Have a good look at the reference that walker-texas ranger sent you.The falcon's eye is a large dark orb with a yellowish outline. You're gettin' there and maybe it's time to vectorize it.Should be good. *The Battle of Seattle Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Patchey13 Posted September 5, 2011 Author Share Posted September 5, 2011 Thanks for the comments guys. I've been painting my house the past week so I haven't got much time to work on this. I'm having a :censored:ty time trying to get the oval right on inkscape, my skills are pretty raw at the moment. Also the way the red cuts off on the bottom of the Falcon has been bothering me. Expect an update soon. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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