_bASHER Posted September 18, 2011 Share Posted September 18, 2011 Hey everyone, I'm new here this is my first thread. I am not new to logo design but I would def love to get much better. Here is a logo I did yesterday and I did a lot of tuning to get it here at this stage and I just wanted to know what you guys thought. This seems like a solid community to go to for that sort of thing so let me know! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
topcityhockey Posted September 18, 2011 Share Posted September 18, 2011 very awesome logo, the question I have is- what is your purpose for this logo? This works as a print logo very good but it if were to be an embroidered logo I would try to simplify your lines. Sunflower Hockey Blog Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
_bASHER Posted September 18, 2011 Author Share Posted September 18, 2011 It wouldn't be embroidered it would be a type of vinyl print. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
undead Posted September 18, 2011 Share Posted September 18, 2011 Really great job on this. It is a bit detailed but, as you said, it's for vinyl print so it works. Can't wait to see more of your work. Welcome to the boards! Portfoliobobschultz6' class="bbc_url">@bobschultz6 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Magnus Posted September 18, 2011 Share Posted September 18, 2011 It's solid, but I do have one question.Could that team beat this team?(insert Deadliest Warrior reference) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
elijas Posted September 18, 2011 Share Posted September 18, 2011 Very cool. It's clear that you put a lot of effort into this, which is great. Are you planning on using this for a concept? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ChuckDownfield Posted September 18, 2011 Share Posted September 18, 2011 Very cool. It's clear that you put a lot of effort into this, which is great. Are you planning on using this for a concept?Read the thread title, this is a concept. As for the logo it's very impressive. It's always nice to see a talented designer join the boards. The only thing I would do to improve the logo is to, as others have said, simplify the lines. Especially in the face area, some of the details are really small, so they end up getting lost.Overall, fantastic work, and I look forward to seeing more from you. GIANTS_REDSOX_CELTICS_LIGHTNING_BULLS Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
elijas Posted September 18, 2011 Share Posted September 18, 2011 Sorry, what I meant was:Are you planning to use this on a jersey? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ChuckDownfield Posted September 18, 2011 Share Posted September 18, 2011 Sorry, what I meant was:Are you planning to use this on a jersey?Much better.Just busting your balls. GIANTS_REDSOX_CELTICS_LIGHTNING_BULLS Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BengalErnst Posted September 18, 2011 Share Posted September 18, 2011 way too detailed for a sports team IMO but cool as hell anyway..the top part of the sword bothers me a lil bit however, i dont get the purpose of the 3 backward flare-outs on the sword THE Xtreme Fantasy Football League Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
elijas Posted September 18, 2011 Share Posted September 18, 2011 the top part of the sword bothers me a lil bit however, i dont get the purpose of the 3 backward flare-outs on the swordI saw that as like "wssshhh" look at how fast I'm swinging this sword. Could be wrong though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
9erssteve Posted September 18, 2011 Share Posted September 18, 2011 It's awesome work and a fantastic illustration, but it's not what I'd class a logo, well not a sports one anyway. There's just way to much detail in it for it to work much smaller than you have it displayed here. If you were to try and apply that to say a sports card then you'd really be struggling. So much of it would get lost it would be a shame.You've a ton of talent, and on a T-shirt or something this would look kick-ass. You never actually said what sport this concept is for, it might be pretty successful on say a hockey shirt, but on a football helmet I think you might be struggling.It's a great start, and in my opinion it's always easier to simplyfy something down than go back and add more detail so it's by no means a lost cause, far from it in fact, with some refinement and simplication this could turn into a very strong piece indeed.Good work and welcome to the boards.9erssteve Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
_bASHER Posted September 18, 2011 Author Share Posted September 18, 2011 Thanks for the welcomes everyone. The logo is for a traveling gaming team and will never be embroidered. It will be used on things like jerseys on which a vinyl print would be used by a sort of heat press.@Chuck: I made it for a team that continued to ask for more and more detail, which is where that came from. Now the are not going to use it haha so it remains a concept now.@Bengal: They are motion lines, just poorly done ones unfortunately.@9erssteve: These types of logos are sports inspired, and I am trying to make them more and more like sports logos. I agree the detail is too high, though it was much much lower before. The logo could use a simplifying and clean up. I basically skipped that stage.Thanks everyone, I look forward to posting more work and posting about other's works as well. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Somppi Posted September 18, 2011 Share Posted September 18, 2011 It wouldn't be embroidered it would be a type of vinyl print.Are you bASHER from the MLG community?? Auburn University Alum Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
north dakota Posted September 19, 2011 Share Posted September 19, 2011 Sweet logo, I'd just simplify it and get rid of the birds in the background. Woah! You think I'm Cody? My name is Carl Scott Simone and we just happen to share a birthday. BIG DEAL. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BengalErnst Posted September 19, 2011 Share Posted September 19, 2011 i enjoy the logo.. i really do but those dont look like swoosh likes to me THE Xtreme Fantasy Football League Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brave-Bird 08 Posted September 19, 2011 Share Posted September 19, 2011 Super, super impressive. Flawless in my book. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
_bASHER Posted September 19, 2011 Author Share Posted September 19, 2011 It wouldn't be embroidered it would be a type of vinyl print.Are you bASHER from the MLG community??Yep that is me @North Dakota: Thanks, I am thinking of redoing it and more simplified as an exercise.@Bengal: If I do redo this concept, I'll make them more "swooshy"@Brave-Bird: Thanks for the encouragement. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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