csura999 Posted September 20, 2011 Share Posted September 20, 2011 Miami Marlins:I used bits and pieces from around the templates provided and combined them. So credit goes to the wonderful members who made my concepts possible. Thank you very much. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nachos Rule Your Soul Posted September 20, 2011 Share Posted September 20, 2011 The hat's really boring, we need a logo, and I imagine them having some kind of patch on one of their sleeves, but the uniform itself is great. I would be totally happy if they ran out onto the field opening day in these. It's great for a team called Marlins and from Miami, not to mention it couples them with the Dolphins which is something I always enjoy cities doing. Follow my attempts to rid the world of the evil that is Laura Dern @LDisadirtbag.My dog Folsom has a Twitter that's nothing but pictures of him pooping and sharing what he likes @folsomcanpoop.If that's not enough, I have my own Twitter @DieZombieScum. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
elijas Posted September 20, 2011 Share Posted September 20, 2011 Looks pretty good! On top of what NRYS said, I would also recommend having one less hat. But nice job! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
irishted122 Posted September 20, 2011 Share Posted September 20, 2011 It's pretty nice. The Marlins have said they won't be using the teal, so that's unfortunate. The cap logo is a bit plain. For a team that won't be adopting a classic look, i think an 'M' with a minimalistic Marlin in the background would be a better cap logo. I dig the gray jersey with the pink accenting in it. Very Miami and very unique without being too outlandish. Nice. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mbannon92 Posted September 20, 2011 Share Posted September 20, 2011 I love those uniforms. The colors look great together, and they scream Miami. The font and the two-tone effect look really good as well.I agree with the others that a marlin-related logo would help the overall look. Nike + CFL 2015 | 2015-16 NBA Concepts | Complete College Football Redesign Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BBTV Posted September 20, 2011 Share Posted September 20, 2011 1. Work on your vertical arching, especially on the home jersey. The "S" in MARLINS is not arched.2. Double piping makes it look more like a fashion jersey. I think that single piping would work best here... because...3. The wordmarks are (keeping in mind what we're all expecting the jerseys to look like) pretty good. But they're so "fancy" (with all the treatments" that the double-piping detracts from them. Always go fancy on top of plain, not fancy on top of fancy (or plain on top of fancy). It'll make them stand out even more.4. At first glance I like the effects on the letters (the two-tone, the orange outline with red shadow) but if actually produced in fabric I think it'd look too much. I'm not sure that I'd get rid of anything, but maybe make the red shadow a little more subtle (it'd be one of those details that looks really cool up close, but wouldn't make it look too busy when viewed from afar - like the SF Giants shadow) and tone down the two-tone a little bit (just make the colors a little closer together, so again, it's more subtle.)5. Lose the effects on the NOB. You've got enough going on with the numbers - a simple NOB would enhance that instead of just making all the effects look like too much.6. Make the hat M the same as the jersey M, or something totally different style (like a cursive or something totally different, but that somehow ties in to the overall package, which we haven't seen since there are no logos.) Having stiles that are different but not too different just creates a clash, and it's not really good design.7. Also, I'd probably go simpler on the hat. I know what you're trying to do here, but I think that simplifying in certain areas would make the fancy areas stand out more and enhance the professionalism of the set as a whole. "The views expressed here are mine and do not reflect the official opinion of my employer or the organization through which the Internet was accessed." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kevinmets Posted September 20, 2011 Share Posted September 20, 2011 The font/"logo" is really boring. (Notice i put "logo" in quotes...)BUT the color scheme is spot on. Caps, jerseys, wordmarks, everything, screams "Miami". Nice job on that.(Too bad they've emphatically stated teal won't be a part of the new look.) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
piratesfan16 Posted September 20, 2011 Share Posted September 20, 2011 Boring fonts, but incredible use of colors! That two tone dropshadow is epic. Just add a little more contrast to it, and I could easily see that on a baseball uniform. Great job. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
csura999 Posted September 21, 2011 Author Share Posted September 21, 2011 I appreciate the comments and criticism guys. I'll be sure to update my Miami Marlins concept once I get the time to. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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