BigBubba Posted December 20, 2011 Share Posted December 20, 2011 The waist and pant stripes are waaaayyyyy too thin. Honestly, you should just ditch the idea of a black jersey altogether because there's no way to fix the abomination they have now. Unless your intent was to stay with what they have and try to make it look decent. In that case, take my C&C mentioned before. Nobody cares about your humungous-big signature. PotD: 29/1/12 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OhioSportsMan61 Posted December 20, 2011 Author Share Posted December 20, 2011 The waist and pant stripes are waaaayyyyy too thin. Honestly, you should just ditch the idea of a black jersey altogether because there's no way to fix the abomination they have now. Unless your intent was to stay with what they have and try to make it look decent. In that case, take my C&C mentioned before.yup, thats what i was going for. i honestly think that a black isles jersey could have potential, but they completely botched a great opportunity. here is an update! My Behance Portfolio --- Follow @Steinosaur19 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
StevenGrant94 Posted December 20, 2011 Share Posted December 20, 2011 Much better with the thicker hem stripes, but the pants would probably be better with either no stripes or some blue added. Also I think the outlines on the shoulder patch could be thicker. This is already much better than what the Islanders did. stevengrantdesign.blogspot.com - Twitter: @StevenGrant94 - Instagram: @stevengrant94 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wildwing64 Posted December 20, 2011 Share Posted December 20, 2011 Now THAT is how to make the Islanders look good in black. Nice work. PotD: 24/08/2017 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Morgan33 Posted December 20, 2011 Share Posted December 20, 2011 Also I like that you brought back the flaming horse. A logo many love to hate, but I think it looks greatAgreed.While it never worked as a main crest, it looked great on the shoulders and added some much needed yellow to the overall look. Works well on this alternate too. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tigerslionspistonshabs Posted December 21, 2011 Share Posted December 21, 2011 You mispelled Ovechkin on your All star jersey. Just don't want you to submit it into a contest like that. Nice job on those.Not a fan of the Isles in black period, but this is way better than the piece of trash they unveiled.On that note, it boggles my mind how teams pay millions and millions to design firms or whoever, to come up with in some cases- (*cough* Isles, Panthers alt, etc *cough*)- total pieces of crap. All they have to do is scour a message board such as this, and see many concepts light years ahead of the stuff they eventually end up with. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brian E Posted December 21, 2011 Share Posted December 21, 2011 in the same gentle correction direction of tigerslionspistonshabs, kyle okposo is number 21. just FYI.as far as my C&C on the isles black jersey, i would love to see how that jersey would look if you played with the colors on the crest a little bit. i'm thinking either white out everything but the blue background or maybe just eliminate the white and go for a different looking orange and blue? i don't know. i just think the colors on the circular crest look weird against a black jersey. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OhioSportsMan61 Posted January 3, 2012 Author Share Posted January 3, 2012 sorry its been a while....heres an avalanche conceptAvalanche: My Behance Portfolio --- Follow @Steinosaur19 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BigBubba Posted January 3, 2012 Share Posted January 3, 2012 Go with the mountain range striping (or some new pattern inspired from that) instead of the Penguins pre-Edge/Isles third/Ducks(?) pattern. Nobody cares about your humungous-big signature. PotD: 29/1/12 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fouhy12 Posted January 4, 2012 Share Posted January 4, 2012 I've been looking at your concepts, and they are excellent! Better than anything I could do!I made these jerseys. Could you try making a better version of them? Thanks! fouhy12's NFL Concepts 2020 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BigBubba Posted January 4, 2012 Share Posted January 4, 2012 ^Post that in the concepts section. It's actually not a bad start. Just change the font; it's the same as the Canucks. Nobody cares about your humungous-big signature. PotD: 29/1/12 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fouhy12 Posted January 4, 2012 Share Posted January 4, 2012 ^Post that in the concepts section. It's actually not a bad start. Just change the font; it's the same as the Canucks.I would post it in its own thread, but I can't start one for some reason! I was going to change the font, I didn't like it anyway. fouhy12's NFL Concepts 2020 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DolphinManatee Posted January 4, 2012 Share Posted January 4, 2012 ^Post that in the concepts section. It's actually not a bad start. Just change the font; it's the same as the Canucks.I would post it in its own thread, but I can't start one for some reason! I was going to change the font, I didn't like it anyway.You have to post one or two more times before you have the ability to start your own thread. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fouhy12 Posted January 5, 2012 Share Posted January 5, 2012 ^Post that in the concepts section. It's actually not a bad start. Just change the font; it's the same as the Canucks.I would post it in its own thread, but I can't start one for some reason! I was going to change the font, I didn't like it anyway.You have to post one or two more times before you have the ability to start your own thread.Ohhhhhhhhhh! Ok thanks! fouhy12's NFL Concepts 2020 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OhioSportsMan61 Posted January 5, 2012 Author Share Posted January 5, 2012 updated the avs based on the c&c...what do you guys think? My Behance Portfolio --- Follow @Steinosaur19 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Midway Posted January 5, 2012 Share Posted January 5, 2012 Fantastic! This is the first Avs concept I've seen in a while that takes the mountain striping and improvises on it correctly! Props! I'd like to see what the away version would look like Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BigBubba Posted January 5, 2012 Share Posted January 5, 2012 MUCH better than I expected! Bravo! This is better than anything they've ever worn - and I love their 90s set. Nobody cares about your humungous-big signature. PotD: 29/1/12 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nash61 Posted January 5, 2012 Share Posted January 5, 2012 New Avs is AMAZING! On September 20, 2012 at 0:50 AM, 'CS85 said: It's like watching the hellish undead creakily shuffling their way out of the flames of a liposuction clinic dumpster fire. On February 19, 2012 at 9:30 AM, 'pianoknight said: Story B: Red Wings go undefeated and score 100 goals in every game. They also beat a team comprised of Godzilla, the ghost of Abraham Lincoln, 2 Power Rangers and Betty White. Oh, and they played in the middle of Iraq on a military base. In the sand. With no ice. Santa gave them special sand-skates that allowed them to play in shorts and t-shirts in 115 degree weather. Jesus, Zeus and Buddha watched from the sidelines and ate cotton candy. POTD 5/24/12, POTD 2/26/17 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sportstar1212 Posted January 5, 2012 Share Posted January 5, 2012 That Avs jersey is sick! Make a matching road and send it in to HJC! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
StevenGrant94 Posted January 5, 2012 Share Posted January 5, 2012 That Colorado jersey is Awesome. I wish they could wear something like this, instead of the reebok template they wear now. You should make this the home jersey and make a matching road. stevengrantdesign.blogspot.com - Twitter: @StevenGrant94 - Instagram: @stevengrant94 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Recommended Posts
Archived
This topic is now archived and is closed to further replies.