OhioSportsMan61 Posted March 12, 2012 Author Share Posted March 12, 2012 Blues:this is based off of Ryan from HJC winning entry into the blues redesign competition. with his permission, i went ahead and made some alterations to the alternate sweater. i really think that set is what the blues should be wearing right now (great job ryan). My Behance Portfolio --- Follow @Steinosaur19 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BigBubba Posted March 12, 2012 Share Posted March 12, 2012 The primaries are perfect, but the alt needs a lot of work. That number font isn't workingThe arched wordmark was never a good lookThe note should be light blue because as of now, it's invisibleMake the hem stripes thicker and make them straight Nobody cares about your humungous-big signature. PotD: 29/1/12 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
StevenGrant94 Posted March 12, 2012 Share Posted March 12, 2012 The primaries are perfect, but the alt needs a lot of work. That number font isn't workingThe arched wordmark was never a good look (if you really want to do it, at least switch the font)The note should be light blue because as of now, it's invisibleMake the hem stripes thicker and make them straightMake the collar yellowI'm not sure if that's supposed to be yellow piping or not, but if it is, ditch itI think you might be talking about Ryan's concept, which OhioSportsMan61 based his concept off of. But I don't really think any of those changes you suggested would be an improvement.Also OhioSportsMan61, I really like the hidden Gateway Arch on the back of the jersey. stevengrantdesign.blogspot.com - Twitter: @StevenGrant94 - Instagram: @stevengrant94 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OhioSportsMan61 Posted March 12, 2012 Author Share Posted March 12, 2012 The primaries are perfect, but the alt needs a lot of work. That number font isn't workingThe arched wordmark was never a good look (if you really want to do it, at least switch the font)The note should be light blue because as of now, it's invisibleMake the hem stripes thicker and make them straightMake the collar yellowI'm not sure if that's supposed to be yellow piping or not, but if it is, ditch itI think you might be talking about Ryan's concept, which OhioSportsMan61 based his concept off of. But I don't really think any of those changes you suggested would be an improvement.Also OhioSportsMan61, I really like the hidden Gateway Arch on the back of the jersey.yep, he must not have read the part in my post where i said it was based off of ryan's third. my concept is the first one posted, and ryan's is the second one. My Behance Portfolio --- Follow @Steinosaur19 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BigBubba Posted March 12, 2012 Share Posted March 12, 2012 Nonetheless, I still stand by my first 4 points. Hockey stripes were meant to be straight. I still don't like the number font, and the note on the front is near invisible. Also, Blues fans hate how the current navy thirds doesn't have yellow numbers, which is another point. I actually don't see how any of these wouldn't be an improvement. Nobody cares about your humungous-big signature. PotD: 29/1/12 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
StevenGrant94 Posted March 12, 2012 Share Posted March 12, 2012 I respect you opinion, but this is why I think the concept works the way it is.-I think the number font is unique and works well for this concept. It's just for an alternative jersey, why not try something different.-This might be an unpopular opinion, but I actually like arched wordmarks, espicially on a team like St. Louis, that doesn't have a lot of logos that work as primaries.-If the note was light blue it would stick out like a sore thumb. There's no light blue anywhere else on the jersey, so in my opinion it wouldn't match the jersey at all.-Also I don't think all hockey jersey need traditional hem-stripes (also probably an unpopular opinion). I think the thin curved striping looks very good on this concept.One minor change I would suggest would be to remove the yellow at the very end of the sleeves. I don't think it works on the concept. stevengrantdesign.blogspot.com - Twitter: @StevenGrant94 - Instagram: @stevengrant94 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DasNordlicht91 Posted March 12, 2012 Share Posted March 12, 2012 The Blues set is perfect as it is, in my view. (Especially the alternates) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OhioSportsMan61 Posted March 22, 2012 Author Share Posted March 22, 2012 here is my Sarnia Sting third jersey contest entry...C&C always welcomeSting: My Behance Portfolio --- Follow @Steinosaur19 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Morgan33 Posted March 23, 2012 Share Posted March 23, 2012 Looks great aside from the pit stains. I like the honeycomb pattern. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kw11333 Posted March 23, 2012 Share Posted March 23, 2012 Wow, a yellow jersey I like. Well done. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chris85ca Posted March 23, 2012 Share Posted March 23, 2012 I lurk a lot, don't post much. But I've gotta say that I love most of what you're putting out there. There aren't a lot of current jerseys I don't like, and I think most of your work would actually improve most teams. Great job! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
VancouverFan69 Posted March 23, 2012 Share Posted March 23, 2012 here is my Sarnia Sting third jersey contest entry...C&C always welcomeSting:Very nice look. I would prefer using a yellow helmet instead of a black one. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
VancouverFan69 Posted March 23, 2012 Share Posted March 23, 2012 here is my Sarnia Sting third jersey contest entry...C&C always welcomeSting:If Hamilton ever got an NHL team, I would go with this look, minus the armpit trimming. I would go with "Steelers" because Hamilton is Canada's Steel City. The silver with the yellow and black is a nice touch. I cannot do one, but if someone likes the idea of the "Hamilton Steelers", I would love to see a concept! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BigBubba Posted March 23, 2012 Share Posted March 23, 2012 This looks great! I would however, ditch the pit stains. Keep the black helmet, because a yellow helmet would look extremely odd and with the exception of white helmets, the pants should always match the helmet. Nobody cares about your humungous-big signature. PotD: 29/1/12 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OhioSportsMan61 Posted April 27, 2012 Author Share Posted April 27, 2012 sorry its been over a month since anything new has been posted...i just havent had any time lately and i dont see that changing.anyways, here is a jets concept. it is loosely based off of one Tim E. created on his website (similar striping/pants) but i put my own touches on it.C&C? My Behance Portfolio --- Follow @Steinosaur19 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BigBubba Posted April 27, 2012 Share Posted April 27, 2012 I'm really digging the striping patters and the Jet streak down the pants. I would suggest adding red to the collar and something to the waist, as it's rather plain as it. Good work, though. Nobody cares about your humungous-big signature. PotD: 29/1/12 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
StevenGrant94 Posted April 27, 2012 Share Posted April 27, 2012 I don't really like those pant-stripes, especially with the jet red when it's normally silver. I also think it needs something at the hem, it's just too much blue the way it is.Other than that it's really good. stevengrantdesign.blogspot.com - Twitter: @StevenGrant94 - Instagram: @stevengrant94 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Morgan33 Posted April 27, 2012 Share Posted April 27, 2012 This doesn't address the problem with the non-contrasting logo.. and why no hem stripes? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TimEOBrien Posted April 27, 2012 Share Posted April 27, 2012 Wow, this is really damn close to my concept, haha.That being said, obviously I like it, haha. I think the contrail leaving the wings not just the tail on the pants striping is an improvement on my concept, but I agree that the hem needs something.Also, I still think those actual Jets logos suck, i like my red-jets much better, but they even still could use some tweaking.Good work, but keep playing with these. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OhioSportsMan61 Posted May 17, 2012 Author Share Posted May 17, 2012 well, again its been a while. i know i did not update the jets, just havent had the time.anyways,ive had this idea in my head ever since Tim E came up with his rebrand of the CBJ a few months ago, but i finally put it all together today in a concept, so here goes nothing. i give to you, the new and improved.......Columbus Generalsc&c always welcome, but dont expect any, if at all, changes because of how little time i have to work on this kind of fun stuff.-credit Tim E with the original shoulder patches My Behance Portfolio --- Follow @Steinosaur19 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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