capitalcanuck Posted December 24, 2011 Share Posted December 24, 2011 i like the whole thing Great Job Five-lights.blogspot.com - my Motorsports Blog Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bmac Posted December 24, 2011 Share Posted December 24, 2011 You already know my thoughts on the whole set, but I just thought of something. Have you considered having his mouth closed? It would eliminate the whole war cry aspect but it might make it look more "fierce" or whatever you want to call it. Just a thought. https://www.behance.net/bmatukewic8043 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jstraper Posted December 24, 2011 Share Posted December 24, 2011 Never was a big fan of the open mouth, bacon face logo. I remember seeing some fans, how do you say, "exploiting" the open-mouth by adding certain "inappropriate" features. I for one would think this logo could be updated to look menacing with a closed mouth.Either eyes open and mouth closed or eyes hidden/shaded/closed and mouth open/closed. Otherwise it looks like he just saw the greatest pair of boobs.It's tricky to update since I don't think the NCAA would allow any updates to Native American logos. Just a hunch.Either way, great job. Everything looks good; nice job modernizing everything. Also, on another note, I don't think FSU is very difficult to get in to, so I think you'll get there no problem. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kevin W. Posted December 24, 2011 Share Posted December 24, 2011 It's tricky to update since I don't think the NCAA would allow any updates to Native American logos. Just a hunch.I'm sure they'd make an exception for FSU as long as the Seminole tribe permits it. Mighty Ducks of Anaheim (CHL - 2018 Orr Cup Champions) Chicago Rivermen (UBA/WBL - 2014, 2015, 2017 Intercontinental Cup Champions) King's Own Hexham FC (BIP - 2022 Saint's Cup Champions) Portland Explorers (EFL - Elite Bowl XIX Champions) Real San Diego (UPL) Red Bull Seattle (ULL - 2018, 2019, 2020 Gait Cup Champions) Vancouver Huskies (CL) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
missouri tigers Posted December 25, 2011 Share Posted December 25, 2011 Hows that AW? Perfect!forget the open eye, I really only suggested it because the closed eye you had before just wasn't working at all.However, the new rendering looks great. The cheek definition helped a lot too.I still feel like you should play around with the jawline though. Try making the curve less "dramatic" if you know what I mean. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
raysox Posted December 25, 2011 Author Share Posted December 25, 2011 Yeah, I get the jaw line now, Ill tweak it a little more and make it not as sharp.Also, Jstraper! I got accepted! My sig and avatar are already updated! @MichaelDanger19Â | Dribbble Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jstraper Posted December 26, 2011 Share Posted December 26, 2011 Also, Jstraper! I got accepted! My sig and avatar are already updated!Cool man, Tally's a fun place! AJ's is a fun time, gorgeous chicks everywhere, and there's even Whataburger in town.So much better than Gainesville in my opinion. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
raysox Posted December 26, 2011 Author Share Posted December 26, 2011 I think I'm done!Also, i did this because everytime I saw the face I would say this @MichaelDanger19Â | Dribbble Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OrangeBalloonCoast Posted December 26, 2011 Share Posted December 26, 2011 To me, there's still something about the logo that makes it passive, as if he's snoring rather than yelling. I'd suggest rotating the logo a little clockwise and tweaking the eye some more. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JPDesign Posted December 26, 2011 Share Posted December 26, 2011 Flipping the line on top of the eyelid to bend from high to low, instead of how it is now, may make it appear more aggressive,. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BJ Sands Posted December 26, 2011 Share Posted December 26, 2011 To me, there's still something about the logo that makes it passive, as if he's snoring rather than yelling. I'd suggest rotating the logo a little clockwise and tweaking the eye some more.I agree. It's rendered quite well but it looks like he's about to sneeze. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CS85 Posted December 26, 2011 Share Posted December 26, 2011 Quality of it is excellent, there's just not enough in there for it to look like a battle cry. It looks like he's getting a really good (you figure it out) from a squaw. Quote "You are nothing more than a small cancer on this message board. You are not entertaining, you are a complete joke." twitter Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
henburg Posted December 26, 2011 Share Posted December 26, 2011 As others have already said, great job on this. Everything is rendered very well, but I think making it less yellow and more gold will really improve it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sidney Posted August 4, 2013 Share Posted August 4, 2013 Hey! somebody gave me your link, because I am working on the same logo! I saw what you did and it's not bad at all, take a look on mine to help you if it does. Mine is more futuristic lol http://boards.sportslogos.net/topic/94096-florida-state-seminoless-new-logo/page-3feel free to ask me anything Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NoleYourRole Posted August 7, 2013 Share Posted August 7, 2013 I think I'm done!Also, i did this because everytime I saw the face I would say thisLoving the direction you're headed. And the Based God picture cracked me up, instantly the first thing I thought of when I saw the closed eye update. Looks like the Chief is praying, fantastic haha Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KCScout76 Posted August 7, 2013 Share Posted August 7, 2013 Really nice work - great concept, I like the updated logo much better than original.  Kansas City Scouts (CHL) Orr Cup Champions 2010, 2019, 2021     St. Joseph Pony Express (ULL)  2023 Champions   Kansas City Cattle (CL) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Soarindude Posted August 7, 2013 Share Posted August 7, 2013 I really think you should stick with the gold versus the yellow. FSU prides itself on being 'Garnet and gold', instead, you turned there color scheme into Arizona State. Try an FSU gold and see what it looks like. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
raysox Posted August 8, 2013 Author Share Posted August 8, 2013 I didn't realize how long it's been since I did this logo! Almost two years, whoa.Anyway, this is the last time I updated it if y'all were interested. @MichaelDanger19Â | Dribbble Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jlog3000 Posted August 15, 2013 Share Posted August 15, 2013 Wanna talk about re-branding the uniforms? How about changing the number and letter font by using the style it was used on the 2009 Nike Pro Combat Uniforms. And use the Seminole feather as the stripes on the pants, as well as on the part on the shoulders (something similar to the 2007 San Diego Chargers jersey design). If I had a drawing, I could had shown what I'm talking about. Florida State Seminoles fan for life (mostly on football, basketball and baseball)! 2011-12 ACC men's basketball conference tournament champions; 2012, 2013 & 2014 ACC football Atlantic Division champions; 2012, 2013 & 2014 ACC football regular season champions; 2012, 2013 & 2014 ACC football conference bowl tournament champions; 2014 NCAA D-I FBS BCS national champions! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PhightingPhilyFan Posted August 16, 2013 Share Posted August 16, 2013 I'm Raysox #1 Fan, seriously I LOVE YOUR CONCEPTS Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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