The Fixer Posted December 9, 2011 Share Posted December 9, 2011 So I wanted to revisit this logo.I think I'm close but that are a few things I need help with1. Colors- where and what2. Highlights- colors and where3.Other commentsalso here is a bonus. i know I like to see this kind of stuff in concepts so I included ithttp://i1184.photobucket.com/albums/z337/T11Smith/warriorimages.jpg Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Funkatron101 Posted December 9, 2011 Share Posted December 9, 2011 I think it's pretty damn solid as is. Good job. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JayJaxon Posted December 9, 2011 Share Posted December 9, 2011 Maybe some of your dark beige on the head dress? Would it be too much to paint the face a little. There is some prime real-estate there to do a bit more, but it looks incredible as-is. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Impaler Posted December 9, 2011 Share Posted December 9, 2011 I say incorporate some of the green into it. Maybe as some horizontal coloring thru the feathers and in the earing/helmet area. Looks very nice man. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GFB Posted December 10, 2011 Share Posted December 10, 2011 If you want a little more advanced criticism, here's some quick things I see.1. Originally, I thought headdress/helmet was rendered in profile perspective. It wasn't until I looked really hard at the helmet that I saw the dark shadow of the other side of the helmet above the face that I realized it is actually in 3/4 view like the face. I would add some red lines to that backside of the "beak" so we know there is depth there...2. Pick a light source point and design from there. Once you choose where on your drawing the light is coming from, it will be easier to see what parts of the design should be highlighted and which parts should be in shadow. Also, if the beak of the helmet is resting over the head and between the light source and the person's face, there will be a shadow on the forehead and brow, not a highlight. Think of it like a baseball cap: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jaha32 Posted December 10, 2011 Share Posted December 10, 2011 Right now as you have it, the face and bird "hat" takes up half of the logo and the feathers (or whatever the left side is) on the left take up the other half. Regardless of the real proportions of this kind of headware, I think it would look better if the head took up 2/3 and the feathers took up 1/3. Also the nose looks squished a little. Make it stick out a little little more. I like the angle and this logo is pretty cool. It's close to being there. DesignsByHahn.com Behance Dribbble Instragram Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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