dgnmrwrw Posted May 9, 2012 Share Posted May 9, 2012 I really like the recent updates, and the Prowlers concept. I think three tweaks could make the Prowlers better: 1) Just eliminate the gray. There's so little of it and it's placed such that it really isn't necessary. 2) Try to eliminate any unnecessary strokes. Especially look at the bottom left of the jaw. 3) A more consistent line weight would help. It doesn't have to be exactly the same throughout, but there are a few places (the stripes, the teeth, the top of the nose) where things get a little sketchy.But in general, this is coming along nicely. HURRICANES | PANTHERS | WHITE SOX | WOLFPACK Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jimmy1 Posted May 9, 2012 Share Posted May 9, 2012 Nice Prowlers logo. The only thing I don't like about it is the gray on the logo.BTW, are you going to have an Australian team like you originally planned when you announced the expansion teams? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
oaklandhusker Posted May 9, 2012 Share Posted May 9, 2012 I love the new team, I love your new logo (though not the colors. The colors from your original are nicer), I can't wait for the games to come back so that I can keep rooting for New York. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Julius Seizure Posted May 9, 2012 Author Share Posted May 9, 2012 I really like the recent updates, and the Prowlers concept. I think three tweaks could make the Prowlers better: 1) Just eliminate the gray. There's so little of it and it's placed such that it really isn't necessary. 2) Try to eliminate any unnecessary strokes. Especially look at the bottom left of the jaw. 3) A more consistent line weight would help. It doesn't have to be exactly the same throughout, but there are a few places (the stripes, the teeth, the top of the nose) where things get a little sketchy.But in general, this is coming along nicely.My goal with the grey was to impart a little value, but if it overshadows the logo, away it goes.Here's an update:-I cleaned the bottom jaw a bit-Tweaked the nose area-Got rid of the grey-made the bridge of the nose wayyy smoother, which I think looks a lot betterHope this is better Founder and Commissioner, World Gridiron  Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
svb2815 Posted May 9, 2012 Share Posted May 9, 2012 Love that ^^Just went through most of the pages and I must say that you are very talented Julius! All of the logos are great! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brian in Boston Posted May 10, 2012 Share Posted May 10, 2012 While I really like the Prowlers team name and overall design of this latest version of the mark, I'd return the Grey to the logo. It was by no means egregious... and I thought it added depth and definition to the design. I'd also be interested in seeing the prowler/tiger's ear downsized a bit, even if very slightly. As it is now, I think it makes the animal look a bit too much like a lynx. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cooleyvol Posted May 10, 2012 Share Posted May 10, 2012 Is it just me or is there something inherently wrong about a Moscow logo with an Eagle in it?All this stuff is sick, btw. Nice work! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Fixer Posted May 10, 2012 Share Posted May 10, 2012 cool logo. downgrade on the 2nd prowlers logo. I like the gray in there. I think it pulls it together and puts it over the top. and your old mark is better too.Your work is a great inspiration to me! great logos and I'm working on being able to whip stuff out like you. Thanks Thomas! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Raymie Posted May 10, 2012 Share Posted May 10, 2012 New logo much needed: I couldn't read your old one for nothing. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gatek99 Posted May 10, 2012 Share Posted May 10, 2012 oh my goodness, this is my favorite logo. It is simply amazing Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gatek99 Posted May 14, 2012 Share Posted May 14, 2012 what one did you decide to go with? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Julius Seizure Posted May 14, 2012 Author Share Posted May 14, 2012 I'm going to fix the ear today to get rid of the bobcat/lynx effect, Then I'll put up 3 or 4 versions with the grey values for you guys to pick. I have class until 1pm today, so it will be up by this evening! Founder and Commissioner, World Gridiron  Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Midway Posted May 14, 2012 Share Posted May 14, 2012 Ya know, I want to like that Prowlers logo as much as everyone else but something about the snout throws it off for me. It seems almost canine when I think of tigers usually having round, ruffed out faces. But surely a few ear modifications and perhaps a pink muzzle could bring this together. Outstanding work so far JS!Btw did you ever go through with the action poses idea? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Varsity Blue Posted May 15, 2012 Share Posted May 15, 2012 The Viper logo reminds me of FAMU. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Julius Seizure Posted May 15, 2012 Author Share Posted May 15, 2012 @Midway: The poses are still an idea, I've just been so bust with school that free time is very very scarce.I have some mods to my Prowler logo for you guys to look at. I got some mixed reviews on the grey values, so I added some in various places.The ear is more tiger-ish as well. Take your pick and throw down some more c&c! Founder and Commissioner, World Gridiron  Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Whittier S Posted May 15, 2012 Share Posted May 15, 2012 a). I think the grey really works. Â Â Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Julius Seizure Posted May 16, 2012 Author Share Posted May 16, 2012 Here's one with a better, more cat-like schnozz:And an updated realignment with expansion teams in tow! (excuse the old personal logo) Founder and Commissioner, World Gridiron  Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gatek99 Posted May 16, 2012 Share Posted May 16, 2012 My vote is D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
oaklandhusker Posted May 16, 2012 Share Posted May 16, 2012 So does the redone division alignment mean we'll see a return of the scoreboards?And is there any chance of Israel receiving a team in a future expansion? Tel Aviv, perhaps? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gatek99 Posted May 17, 2012 Share Posted May 17, 2012 any chance we can get an update on all the logos?all the old ones are in different identity packages, and what did you ever decide for the Dragons? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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