fouhy12 Posted January 25, 2012 Share Posted January 25, 2012 Here are some Bruins concepts that I made. C&C fouhy12's NFL Concepts 2020 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brass Posted January 25, 2012 Share Posted January 25, 2012 The logos are extremely pixelated. Might want to address that. On 4/10/2017 at 3:05 PM, Rollins Man said: what the hell is ccslc? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fouhy12 Posted January 25, 2012 Author Share Posted January 25, 2012 The logos are extremely pixelated. Might want to address that.Thanks, I'll change that now! fouhy12's NFL Concepts 2020 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fouhy12 Posted January 25, 2012 Author Share Posted January 25, 2012 Here are my updates! Please C&C! fouhy12's NFL Concepts 2020 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brass Posted January 25, 2012 Share Posted January 25, 2012 Still pretty pixelated. Are you shrinking the logos found on Chris' site? What program are you using to make the logos smaller? On 4/10/2017 at 3:05 PM, Rollins Man said: what the hell is ccslc? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fouhy12 Posted January 25, 2012 Author Share Posted January 25, 2012 I was shrinking Chris's logos... it was the highest quality I could find... I did the design in PaintOverall though, how are the uniforms? fouhy12's NFL Concepts 2020 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Stampman Posted January 25, 2012 Share Posted January 25, 2012 I was shrinking Chris's logos... it was the highest quality I could find... I did the design in PaintOverall though, how are the uniforms?Shrink them in Word, and then copy & paste them into Paint. Comic Sans walks into a bar, and the bartender says, "Sorry, we don't serve your type here." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Midway Posted January 25, 2012 Share Posted January 25, 2012 The uniforms aren't bad at all but the spoked B shouldn't be replaced by the secondary no matter how amazing it may be. Also the white space in between the sleeve stripes and the black cuffs is not present in the hem stripes so you've got to choose how you're going to make the striping consistent. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fouhy12 Posted January 25, 2012 Author Share Posted January 25, 2012 Update #3 fouhy12's NFL Concepts 2020 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fouhy12 Posted January 25, 2012 Author Share Posted January 25, 2012 Update #4. I haven't had many comments, please add some! fouhy12's NFL Concepts 2020 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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FGWB Posted January 26, 2012 Share Posted January 26, 2012 First comment. Don't bump a thread after 2 hours. Second comment. I don't like the sleeve stripes. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fouhy12 Posted January 26, 2012 Author Share Posted January 26, 2012 First comment. Don't bump a thread after 2 hours. Second comment. I don't like the sleeve stripes.Sorry, I'm new to this site. What should I change on the sleeves? fouhy12's NFL Concepts 2020 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FGWB Posted January 26, 2012 Share Posted January 26, 2012 Well first, make sure they're the same width. Maybe try adding some alternating color stripes instead of plain white. Or try different striping patterns.It's your concept. Do everything. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JamieRose Posted January 26, 2012 Share Posted January 26, 2012 Get rid of the random white line on the sleeves of the yellow jerseys. Personally, I would have made that uniform black, as the sleeve striping could be more consistent (yellow-black-yellow on whites and yellow-white-yellow on blacks)Overall the concept is improving as you go along, which is nice to see among the newbies. Keep at it, you'll have a really solid concept in no time. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fouhy12 Posted January 28, 2012 Author Share Posted January 28, 2012 Okay, I made some more updates based on what you guys said. fouhy12's NFL Concepts 2020 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JamieRose Posted January 28, 2012 Share Posted January 28, 2012 Only thing left I can suggest is to try and clean up the letters on the nameplate, and maybe add some small details like sleeve numbers and/or shoulder patches. Other than that you've got yourself a solid design. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brass Posted January 28, 2012 Share Posted January 28, 2012 I agree 100% with JimmyN64; clean up the name plate a little. Not sure where you're getting your numbers and/or if it's the format you're saving it in, but they look "scrunched" together.Also, thank you for taking the advice given, not blaming the computer program you're using and for not being an overall douchebag. It's the little things that go a long way on this board. On 4/10/2017 at 3:05 PM, Rollins Man said: what the hell is ccslc? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fouhy12 Posted January 28, 2012 Author Share Posted January 28, 2012 Thanks! What sould I use as the shoulder patch? I will get the letters fixed soon and add sleeve numbers. fouhy12's NFL Concepts 2020 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JamieRose Posted January 28, 2012 Share Posted January 28, 2012 The walking bear logo always makes a good looking shoulderpatch. And to add with brass, thank you for putting in the effort! It really does make all the difference in the world, and more people will be willing to help you grow as a designer. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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