OhioSportsMan61 Posted February 2, 2012 Share Posted February 2, 2012 hey all, for the past two days or so, ive been working on my first ever logo using illustrator. C&C much appreciated!2013 NHL All Star Game My Behance Portfolio --- Follow @Steinosaur19 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fouhy12 Posted February 2, 2012 Share Posted February 2, 2012 I love it! The only thing is that the font on "COLUMBUS" and "2013" looks different. Make them the same, and this is perfect! fouhy12's NFL Concepts 2020 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
walkerws Posted February 2, 2012 Share Posted February 2, 2012 I think incorporating the union of the state flag representing would be cool. The Bluejackets font needs to be a part of that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
drdougfresh Posted February 2, 2012 Share Posted February 2, 2012 If you made the star the correct proportions, I'd like this a lot more. It feels forced right now. I would also address the typeface issue on the bottom. Overall, though, I like the concept behind it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
habsfan1 Posted February 2, 2012 Share Posted February 2, 2012 I had this thought that it might look better with the whole typeface of the words "all-star game" warped around the above circle. Also, maybe if the star was reduced a little bit in size, the silver lining within might appear less forced and look better. But I don't know for sure. Just some advice you might wanna try out. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OhioSportsMan61 Posted February 2, 2012 Author Share Posted February 2, 2012 I think incorporating the union of the state flag representing would be cool. The Bluejackets font needs to be a part of that.im not sure what you mean. the two flags coming out of the side are part of the ohio flag, and the red circle with white and blue outlining is part of the flag, too. I had this thought that it might look better with the whole typeface of the words "all-star game" warped around the above circle. Also, maybe if the star was reduced a little bit in size, the silver lining within might appear less forced and look better. But I don't know for sure. Just some advice you might wanna try out.im gonna try this, and maybe a few other things later on today, so we'll see how it turns out. My Behance Portfolio --- Follow @Steinosaur19 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cody21 Posted February 2, 2012 Share Posted February 2, 2012 the star looks squashed. make it less big in width next time. In the last game against Detroit, the time from ten minutes left to one minute left was probably the longest nine minutes of my life. But from one to zero was probably the greatest time I've ever had. I didn't want the clock to run out. It was such a great feeling: people crying in the stands, people jumping up and down, people cheering. Guys couldn't even sit up on the bench. It was probably the best minute of my life.Ah, the "I'm kidding" - the universal internet excuse for saying something that others perceived as dumb. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Has2916 Posted February 2, 2012 Share Posted February 2, 2012 Great work!I'd say fix the starMake the COLUMBUS 2013 all the same font and perhaps arch it above the circle? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OhioSportsMan61 Posted February 2, 2012 Author Share Posted February 2, 2012 here is an update. thinner star and changed the 'columbus 2013'does anyone know how to upload an .ai or .svg to photobucket? i would really rather not keep exporting this as a .png bc it loses quality My Behance Portfolio --- Follow @Steinosaur19 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rbkhockey83 Posted February 2, 2012 Share Posted February 2, 2012 here is an update. thinner star and changed the 'columbus 2013'ng this as a .png bc it loses qualityAs far as I know that's not possible you have to upload the .svg/.eps/.ai file to mediafire.com or a site like that. Then you have to put the link in your post. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jared222 Posted February 2, 2012 Share Posted February 2, 2012 here is an update. thinner star and changed the 'columbus 2013'does anyone know how to upload an .ai or .svg to photobucket? i would really rather not keep exporting this as a .png bc it loses qualitySolid concept, I like it a lot , but i would make a few changes to make it work better IMO . Make the main star proportions normal not stretched wide , bump it down so it is not in the way of the Columbus 2013 and then move the NHL crest to the middle of the star above the All Star Game and you have a winner Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GO2HELL Posted February 3, 2012 Share Posted February 3, 2012 here is an update. thinner star and changed the 'columbus 2013'does anyone know how to upload an .ai or .svg to photobucket? i would really rather not keep exporting this as a .png bc it loses qualitySolid concept, I like it a lot , but i would make a few changes to make it work better IMO . Make the main star proportions normal not stretched wide , bump it down so it is not in the way of the Columbus 2013 and then move the NHL crest to the middle of the star above the All Star Game and you have a winnerAll of this Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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