BigBubba Posted August 6, 2012 Share Posted August 6, 2012 I agree with cohenj about the caps. You should use the current road cap for the primaries. On the road, I would remove the white outlines on the script/numbers/NOB. They're unnecessary and muddle down the look, especially for the NOB. Also, the alternate logo (the tiger head) uses a different shade of orange than everything else, so you should fix that. That aside, it's a nice concept, and great way to inject some orange into their identity. Nobody cares about your humungous-big signature. PotD: 29/1/12 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Philsphan Posted August 6, 2012 Share Posted August 6, 2012 Perfect. I love the alts and you didn't harm the team's "classic look" yet you made them look sleek and modern. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
16kid Posted August 6, 2012 Share Posted August 6, 2012 Those Tiger roads are gorgeous, well done! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kevinmets Posted August 6, 2012 Author Share Posted August 6, 2012 I agree with cohenj about the caps. You should use the current road cap for the primaries. On the road, I would remove the white outlines on the script/numbers/NOB. They're unnecessary and muddle down the look, especially for the NOB. Also, the alternate logo (the tiger head) uses a different shade of orange than everything else, so you should fix that. That aside, it's a nice concept, and great way to inject some orange into their identity.I didn't notice the color difference, thanks for pointing that out. There's a few of these concepts I'd like to go back and update, I suppose. I kept the white outline on the roads because I wanted to keep some elements of the Tigers' current identity. Also, with the added orange, I didn't want them looking too similar to the Mets. I agree that triple outlines can often look muddy, but I think in this case it keeps the orange & grey from blending together, as is my one picky criticism of the current Mets' set.Many thanks to everyone for the comments! They keep me motivated to make more of these! I'm hoping to finish all 30 by the end of the season... What team do y'all wanna see next? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
16kid Posted August 6, 2012 Share Posted August 6, 2012 Wouldn't mind seeing what you can do with the Angels if that's allright. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cohenj21 Posted August 6, 2012 Share Posted August 6, 2012 Would love to see Minnesota, Cleveland, or the Angels next, but looking forward to whatever is posted next! "Those who believe in telekinetics, raise my hand." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dsaline97 Posted August 7, 2012 Share Posted August 7, 2012 I think that an all blue cap should be kept at least for the home to tie in with the traditional home set. Great job. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kevinmets Posted August 11, 2012 Author Share Posted August 11, 2012 16. California AngelsChanges:"California" name change & road scriptNavy caps/belts/socksInverted home scripts - this actually happened by accident and I loved it so I kept it.Yellow haloOne shade of red (no 2-tone/3D)New primary logo (California outline) / sleeve patchNew alt logo (inverted A)New piping (inspired by 70s/80s uniforms) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dsaline97 Posted August 11, 2012 Share Posted August 11, 2012 Something about the way the leg of the R is connected to the rest of the letter looks really goofy to me, but I can't think of how it should be fixed... Other than that, these look great. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SFGiants58 Posted August 11, 2012 Share Posted August 11, 2012 The script on the road uniforms and alternates look a little too jammed with the double outlines. On the road uniform, I'd suggest simply removing the white outline; while on the alts, I'd replace the red and blue outlines with white (on the red and blue alts respectively). Other than that, this is probably the best Angels concept I've seen, especially the "California" script. MLB: Project 32 (Complete), MLB: The Defunct Saga (Complete) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cohenj21 Posted August 11, 2012 Share Posted August 11, 2012 Overall, I love this set, really nice job combining the new Los Angeles Angels (or whatever they're calling themselves these days) with the old California Angels. I am a big fan of that new shade of red, and the home alt in particular looks fantastic. Only a couple things I would do. First one is minor, try adding a second cap, maybe a solid blue or red one, to the set. Like the Tigers set, I feel like the diversity of the set merits another cap design in the mix, even if is only used for the home or road alt. Secondly, as SFGiants58 said, I feel like the scripts on the two road jerseys get lost in the double outlines. Personally, I would just try a single outline and see how it looks, especially on the road alt. overall, though, great job on this one. "Those who believe in telekinetics, raise my hand." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
16kid Posted August 11, 2012 Share Posted August 11, 2012 The Angels look really good my only complaint is on the red alternates the script doesn't really pop. It reminds me o the ones they were now, as being hard to see the script. I really do love what you done here and the whole series! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
16kid Posted August 16, 2012 Share Posted August 16, 2012 Bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sportstar1212 Posted August 16, 2012 Share Posted August 16, 2012 BumpWhy are you bumping this? It's not even your thread.Don't bump it unless you have something to contribute. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kevinmets Posted August 18, 2012 Author Share Posted August 18, 2012 17. San Francisco GiantsChanges:Eliminated gold trim/drop shadow from all scriptsNew simplified primary & secondary logosNew road scriptNew white alt w/ orange cap & inverted scriptOrange alt now has SF chest logo, black-white-black piping, & name on backNo sleeve patch on home jersey Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
raysfan24 Posted August 18, 2012 Share Posted August 18, 2012 I think the SF on the orange hat needs a white outline so it stands out a bit more. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SFGiants58 Posted August 18, 2012 Share Posted August 18, 2012 This is easily my favorite Giants concept of the ones that I've seen. Apart from the road script, which does look a little too distorted (it's understandable, though, considering the script you based it on was vertically arched), I really like the inverted color home alt and the cleaned up roundel. Good job, and I can't wait for more! MLB: Project 32 (Complete), MLB: The Defunct Saga (Complete) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cohenj21 Posted August 18, 2012 Share Posted August 18, 2012 I like this set alot. The new alt hats look really good, as do the new logos. The new road script looks great, I love that it is based on the home script and it is a massive improvement on the boring script they currently use. The only thing I would suggest would be to see how the orange jersey looks without the white outline on the numbers and the SF, I just think the white outline looks a little strange on the SF logo. Really nice job here overall. "Those who believe in telekinetics, raise my hand." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sportstar1212 Posted August 18, 2012 Share Posted August 18, 2012 I love that new road script! I'm not crazy about the orange cap, I don't really think it's needed. Everything else looks fine though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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