Perfect Zero Posted May 29, 2012 Share Posted May 29, 2012 This looks much better. Perhaps you can expand a bit more and add some home and road jerseys. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cshookemHORNS Posted May 29, 2012 Author Share Posted May 29, 2012 Thanks for all the feedback guys I'm happy yall enjoy my concept! As for Homes and Aways I am most likely going to make some it could be between this Thursday or Sunday before I get them up so stay tuned! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cshookemHORNS Posted June 1, 2012 Author Share Posted June 1, 2012 Hey I'm back! I decided to take a different route on the home and do something kind of different. I took the 1975-1993 wordmark and kind of "mixed" it with the italicized wordmark from the 90s. So here it is.C&C! I will make the road uniform based on y'alls response.EDIT: Once again I have no clue why the NOB is wrong please ignore. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
UnclearInitial Posted June 1, 2012 Share Posted June 1, 2012 On the alt, I don't like the use of the Padre style placket piping. Regular placket piping would suffice. I also don't like how the star is double outlined and the number and nob only have one outline. I love the script for the home ( except for the r being too thin), and really like the assimetrical sleeve striping, but the placket piping is hard to make out (is it orange or orange and navy?) and I don't like how the pants striping clashes with the sleeve striping and placket piping. You have 3 different patterns, so you have to choose one. And again, script is not outlined but the number is. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cshookemHORNS Posted June 1, 2012 Author Share Posted June 1, 2012 On the alt, I don't like the use of the Padre style placket piping. Regular placket piping would suffice. I also don't like how the star is double outlined and the number and nob only have one outline. I love the script for the home ( except for the r being too thin), and really like the assimetrical sleeve striping, but the placket piping is hard to make out (is it orange or orange and navy?) and I don't like how the pants striping clashes with the sleeve striping and placket piping. You have 3 different patterns, so you have to choose one. And again, script is not outlined but the number is.Thanks for the comments and regarding the Padre style piping I did that on purpose because I thought it looked better and not so plain. The double outlined star looks better against the navy rather than only a Navy outline. I will fix the piping and outline problem in the next update, thanks for noticing that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cshookemHORNS Posted June 3, 2012 Author Share Posted June 3, 2012 Buuuuump. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cshookemHORNS Posted June 4, 2012 Author Share Posted June 4, 2012 UPDATE 1 on home. I tried to do most of what anythinglogos said above, it looks a lot better and "flows" together better.C&C please! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
loogodude90 Posted June 4, 2012 Share Posted June 4, 2012 UPDATE 1 on home. I tried to do most of what anythinglogos said above, it looks a lot better and "flows" together better.C&C please!The color scheme is decent, but I don't dig the wordmark. It's almost as if you made it look even more 80s than it originally was.I actually think they need a brand new wordmark. The thing is that a team with an identity like the Astros should have kind of a cutting-edge identity. All of their identities look dated. The color scheme is fine but they should come up with something brand new wordmark-wise. WIZARDS ORIOLES CAPITALS RAVENS UNITED Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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