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Well I have been very unactive on the forums as these past few months have limited the free time that I have. Anyways, I have been always wanting to make an ultimate frisbee league and decided to go a head and do it. The first team I have to present to you is the Cincinnati Comets. I did take inspiration from the Houston Comets logo. This is one of my first logos I have ever created. Please give some comments on what can be improved on this and my works in the future. Thanks!

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Make the c more c like its kinda oblong and weird now and maybe only use it for one word

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Ok, I updated it show the "C" had the shadow and was only used for the Comets portion. I couldn't decide a placement for the Cincinnati portion to go. Any thoughts?

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Ok so I have created another team, the Buffalo Renegades. This is my only second actual try at a logo. I can't quite get the wordmark with the logo to look right. Any thoughts?

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I think the logo looks really good, especially for someone who has only tried twice. I hand draw all of my concepts so I don't work with fonts, so I can't give you any advice. Sorry. Keep up the good work.

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Yeah thanks man, I attempted on creating a custom font using photoshop but it didn't work out too well so I just edited a font I thought looked good.

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I'd work on the shape of the hat, it kind of looks like a top hat right now.

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That and there is no motion in the logo but heaps in the text, an maybe something with serifs?

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Have you ever looked at the ultimate frizbee logos for some colleges and universities? They can really be out there.

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Thanks for thee feedback, I am a novice on creating logos as you can see. I worked on the logo and I think it looks a bit better. Any thoughts on how it can be improved?

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That looks great, a definite improvement on the previous one. I feel like the nose on the logo is really wide, maybe it's just me. Maybe that's what you were looking for but I just wanted to point that out. I love the new script!

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Thanks man, yeah I now that I look on it the nose does look quite wide. I'll try and improve it, and see how it comes out.

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The hat still needs work. Shorten and taper the crown. Not only will it look more like what you're going for, it will work with the new wordmark better, too.

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Ok I took your advice on shorting the hat, and it does look better. The face seems to be boring to me. I am trying to add shadows with a darker shade of the tan but can't quite to get it to my liking. Any suggestions?

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The hat looks better :D

Maybe use the shade you have as the dark shade, for the viewer's right side of the face, and then use a lighter shade than you have for the actual complexion.

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Ok so I added shadows to the face and also pupils to the eyes. I think it looks a lot better but If anyone has any suggestions that would be great! I am trying to get this logo almost perfect before moving on to the next team.

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looks much better. I still think you should make the nose a little narrower but other than that nice job.

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