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Fictional Ultimate Frisbee League


Ragone

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Well I have been very unactive on the forums as these past few months have limited the free time that I have. Anyways, I have been always wanting to make an ultimate frisbee league and decided to go a head and do it. The first team I have to present to you is the Cincinnati Comets. I did take inspiration from the Houston Comets logo. This is one of my first logos I have ever created. Please give some comments on what can be improved on this and my works in the future. Thanks!

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That looks great, a definite improvement on the previous one. I feel like the nose on the logo is really wide, maybe it's just me. Maybe that's what you were looking for but I just wanted to point that out. I love the new script!

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The hat still needs work. Shorten and taper the crown. Not only will it look more like what you're going for, it will work with the new wordmark better, too.

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Ok I took your advice on shorting the hat, and it does look better. The face seems to be boring to me. I am trying to add shadows with a darker shade of the tan but can't quite to get it to my liking. Any suggestions?

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The hat looks better :D

Maybe use the shade you have as the dark shade, for the viewer's right side of the face, and then use a lighter shade than you have for the actual complexion.

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Ok so I added shadows to the face and also pupils to the eyes. I think it looks a lot better but If anyone has any suggestions that would be great! I am trying to get this logo almost perfect before moving on to the next team.

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