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Hey guys, kinda stuck on these two concepts, not really sure where to go with them. I'm trying to make them feel "complete" which neither of them do to me yet.

Any ideas would be helpful for me to learn!

Thanks guys!

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I actually really like the fish. I can't really think of anything else to add to it.

As for the logo on the right, something doesn't seem right about the mouth to me.

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I really like the fish but it seems to be missing something on the cheek area. I feel like it needs some detail there although I'm not exactly sure what.

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Does the mouth look any better here?

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I would tighten up the stroke around the mouth right now it seems a little uneven and that might be throwin it off. These are sweet btw, I really dig your style.

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The fish one looks great! The cat(?) one is a really good idea but I think the black outline is a bit too thick, mainly around the fangs(teeth?). I think thinner outline would make it look more...agile, catlike, sharp! Both overall are very solid concepts. Would love to see more!

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i would recess the upper lip a bit to better accentuate the nose. not much but just enough so that the front face isnt' one continuous line. I'd also bring the outline further into the mouth between the top and bottom teeth. as it is right now, the entire front face has little depth.

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the really thick outline on the cat's left ear is something I just noticed. seems too thick. Also I liked the other color scheme better

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Lookin any better, guys?

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Yes, it does,but the old color scheme was much better, IMO

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I think you'd see a big improvement if you gave the mouth some love (tongue, more white space). That's where it still looks a little off to me? other than that, this is a vast improvement from the first draft.

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Underbite!

Move the chin back out, but maybe open it more to achieve the white space.

I think I achieved a good amount of white space, because this isnt a 100% profile logo. It's slightly 3/4s. There needs to be a bit of the far cheek showing to give off that image.

Working on the underbite though!

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With the underbite I feel that it should have longer fangs like a Sabertooth, I don't know if you've thought about going that route just an observation. Really like the fish and where the cat is heading.

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it's coming along nicely! i agree with what everyone has said about the mouth. move the jaw out more and clear out a little more of the black in the mouth area. also the top right ear has way too thick of a black outline. slim it down and it'll be a great logo.

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Updated: Eye and shading. New color scheme, Panthers?

Still working on the jaw, and making it look right.

Debating drawing out the top two fangs/teeth to make it look like a sabretooth of sorts, predators?

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I love the new colors and I dig the work that you've done to it, I think now it would benefit from having the sabretooth front teeth and the underbite won't look as profound.

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