DawgPacPBH Posted July 14, 2012 Share Posted July 14, 2012 Hey guys, kinda stuck on these two concepts, not really sure where to go with them. I'm trying to make them feel "complete" which neither of them do to me yet. Any ideas would be helpful for me to learn!Thanks guys! peteschwadel.comTwitter: @peteeeeE-Mail: peteschwadel@gmail.comDribbble! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dbroalexander Posted July 14, 2012 Share Posted July 14, 2012 I actually really like the fish. I can't really think of anything else to add to it. As for the logo on the right, something doesn't seem right about the mouth to me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
joshhockey Posted July 14, 2012 Share Posted July 14, 2012 I really like the fish but it seems to be missing something on the cheek area. I feel like it needs some detail there although I'm not exactly sure what. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DawgPacPBH Posted July 15, 2012 Author Share Posted July 15, 2012 Does the mouth look any better here? peteschwadel.comTwitter: @peteeeeE-Mail: peteschwadel@gmail.comDribbble! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fifty8_Black O Posted July 15, 2012 Share Posted July 15, 2012 Does the mouth look any better here?I would tighten up the stroke around the mouth right now it seems a little uneven and that might be throwin it off. These are sweet btw, I really dig your style. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Green27 Posted July 15, 2012 Share Posted July 15, 2012 The fish one looks great! The cat(?) one is a really good idea but I think the black outline is a bit too thick, mainly around the fangs(teeth?). I think thinner outline would make it look more...agile, catlike, sharp! Both overall are very solid concepts. Would love to see more! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EasleyK Posted July 15, 2012 Share Posted July 15, 2012 i would recess the upper lip a bit to better accentuate the nose. not much but just enough so that the front face isnt' one continuous line. I'd also bring the outline further into the mouth between the top and bottom teeth. as it is right now, the entire front face has little depth. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DawgPacPBH Posted July 15, 2012 Author Share Posted July 15, 2012 Lookin any better, guys? peteschwadel.comTwitter: @peteeeeE-Mail: peteschwadel@gmail.comDribbble! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dbroalexander Posted July 15, 2012 Share Posted July 15, 2012 the really thick outline on the cat's left ear is something I just noticed. seems too thick. Also I liked the other color scheme better Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Green27 Posted July 15, 2012 Share Posted July 15, 2012 Lookin any better, guys?Yes, it does,but the old color scheme was much better, IMO Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DawgPacPBH Posted July 15, 2012 Author Share Posted July 15, 2012 peteschwadel.comTwitter: @peteeeeE-Mail: peteschwadel@gmail.comDribbble! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DawgPacPBH Posted July 16, 2012 Author Share Posted July 16, 2012 Old and Updated next to each other. peteschwadel.comTwitter: @peteeeeE-Mail: peteschwadel@gmail.comDribbble! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
drdougfresh Posted July 16, 2012 Share Posted July 16, 2012 I think you'd see a big improvement if you gave the mouth some love (tongue, more white space). That's where it still looks a little off to me? other than that, this is a vast improvement from the first draft. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DawgPacPBH Posted July 16, 2012 Author Share Posted July 16, 2012 Still working on getting a tongue in there looking like it makes sense, but here's where I'm at! peteschwadel.comTwitter: @peteeeeE-Mail: peteschwadel@gmail.comDribbble! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JPDesign Posted July 16, 2012 Share Posted July 16, 2012 Underbite!Move the chin back out, but maybe open it more to achieve the white space. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DawgPacPBH Posted July 17, 2012 Author Share Posted July 17, 2012 Underbite!Move the chin back out, but maybe open it more to achieve the white space.I think I achieved a good amount of white space, because this isnt a 100% profile logo. It's slightly 3/4s. There needs to be a bit of the far cheek showing to give off that image.Working on the underbite though! peteschwadel.comTwitter: @peteeeeE-Mail: peteschwadel@gmail.comDribbble! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OchentaYOcho88 Posted July 17, 2012 Share Posted July 17, 2012 With the underbite I feel that it should have longer fangs like a Sabertooth, I don't know if you've thought about going that route just an observation. Really like the fish and where the cat is heading. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
worcat Posted July 17, 2012 Share Posted July 17, 2012 it's coming along nicely! i agree with what everyone has said about the mouth. move the jaw out more and clear out a little more of the black in the mouth area. also the top right ear has way too thick of a black outline. slim it down and it'll be a great logo. Bleeding Blue since 1986 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DawgPacPBH Posted July 17, 2012 Author Share Posted July 17, 2012 Updated: Eye and shading. New color scheme, Panthers?Still working on the jaw, and making it look right.Debating drawing out the top two fangs/teeth to make it look like a sabretooth of sorts, predators? peteschwadel.comTwitter: @peteeeeE-Mail: peteschwadel@gmail.comDribbble! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CityOfWalrus Posted July 18, 2012 Share Posted July 18, 2012 I love the new colors and I dig the work that you've done to it, I think now it would benefit from having the sabretooth front teeth and the underbite won't look as profound. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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