hugevolsfan Posted February 4, 2013 Author Share Posted February 4, 2013 It does not look pewter to me by any stretch of the imagination but if you read on I did lighten the gold some. My Fictional Football League Version 3 My Fictional Football Leagues WebsiteMy Church Website Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silver_Star Posted February 5, 2013 Share Posted February 5, 2013 Here is the final Cincinnati I like this the more & more I see it.Still looks the same to me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hugevolsfan Posted February 5, 2013 Author Share Posted February 5, 2013 Here is the final Cincinnati I like this the more & more I see it.Still looks the same to me.It is lighter not a whole lot but by comparison here is Tampa Bay Pewter, San Fran Gold, & SaintsLooks much different from Tampa Bay & is closer to the Saints on both computer screens I use.I believe I will leave it alone because I already have 49er gold with KC. My Fictional Football League Version 3 My Fictional Football Leagues WebsiteMy Church Website Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FrankTheMighty Posted February 13, 2013 Share Posted February 13, 2013 I Love the Bombers concept, it looks so flawless. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hugevolsfan Posted February 16, 2013 Author Share Posted February 16, 2013 I have been working on several of the last logos but just not sure how to finalize one set so not sure what will be next.I hope to have something this weekend though.I Love the Bombers concept, it looks so flawless.Yes it is one of my favorites for sure it was also my first concept I completed which makes it even more special to me. My Fictional Football League Version 3 My Fictional Football Leagues WebsiteMy Church Website Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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hugevolsfan Posted February 22, 2013 Author Share Posted February 22, 2013 Yeah I am in a creative funk right now. I was hoping it was just going to be for a few weeks but its been about a month now.I am thinking about posting Tampa Bays & Torontos logos for some C & C just to see if I have any creativity left.I am really struggling with the colors right now.Most of the time when I get like this I can read through this thread & get inspired or by some other thread but just has not happened this time. My Fictional Football League Version 3 My Fictional Football Leagues WebsiteMy Church Website Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
THEANGEL&THEGAMBLER Posted February 22, 2013 Share Posted February 22, 2013 Whats your creative process? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hugevolsfan Posted February 22, 2013 Author Share Posted February 22, 2013 Whats your creative process?Not even sure I have a process to be honest since I started I have never struggled this much.I usually just work on what I feel & then I will research the logos I am trying to accomplish until boom I am done.I think I will post the logos & get some C & C then go from there. My Fictional Football League Version 3 My Fictional Football Leagues WebsiteMy Church Website Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hugevolsfan Posted February 22, 2013 Author Share Posted February 22, 2013 Here is the Toronto Rhinos Logo give me some C & C please. My Fictional Football League Version 3 My Fictional Football Leagues WebsiteMy Church Website Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NCCoachArete Posted February 22, 2013 Share Posted February 22, 2013 I would recommend posting what you have, and letting us give you ideas/critiques...not sure if this would work for you, but it might be worth a try???I like the Rhino logo but not sure you need the circle. I'm also not a fan of the bright red, especially with the gray background. How about a purple/orange,gray package that the Pittsburgh Maulers used? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
St Louis Cardinals Posted February 22, 2013 Share Posted February 22, 2013 erase the little gray speck on the top left, and then change the way the eye looks because it looks old now. other than that i like it! #9 LSU vs. TCU Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dsaline97 Posted February 22, 2013 Share Posted February 22, 2013 Make the space behind the rhino red with a grey outline to make the rhino stand out more. Maybe make the red a little darker too, its really bright as it is. Â Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
apate93 Posted February 22, 2013 Share Posted February 22, 2013 The rhino doesn't look very ferocious. It looks like it's sad. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Midway Posted February 22, 2013 Share Posted February 22, 2013 The rhino doesn't look very ferocious. It looks like it's sad.I hate to use this overused expression but *facepalm*This whole ferocious animal logo = good logo nonsense has to stop. Contrast. You need to work on detailing your uniforms more effectively by distributing your colors properly so that similar tones don't bleed into each other as is seen with your Rhinos logo and whole Cincinnati set. Your color schemes are quite inventive but some of them lack enough contrast to really sell the ideas you've created. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
satansgoalie Posted February 22, 2013 Share Posted February 22, 2013 i don't really have anything in the way of constructive criticism... but man, that atlanta primary logo is seriously awesome! the secondary mark reminds me too much of the calgary flames but it's still pretty nice. good work. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dan O'Mac Posted February 22, 2013 Share Posted February 22, 2013 As far as the rhino goes, I would try and make it look like it's charging, maybe push the nose forward, curving the horn back, which may cause more of a streamline.And I'm not feeling the circle on it. What I could see is it set over a more soccer style "shield"As far as colors go... I think the red is to bright compared to the gray. I'd bring it back to a maroon, or go towards a rust orange color I like this. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hugevolsfan Posted February 22, 2013 Author Share Posted February 22, 2013 I appreciate all of the C & C.I think it has got me going a little with more ideas.One thing I really am still struggling with is the colors.Remember this is the only team representing Canada in the top Football league so I am thinking of going with a blue, red, & silver package think maybe like the Winnipeg Jets.Also as a secondary I had in mind using a T like in the Toronto Flag except with the sides of the T coming to a point like a horn.What do you think? My Fictional Football League Version 3 My Fictional Football Leagues WebsiteMy Church Website Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AlexWilson Posted February 22, 2013 Share Posted February 22, 2013 I appreciate all of the C & C.I think it has got me going a little with more ideas.One thing I really am still struggling with is the colors.Remember this is the only team representing Canada in the top Football league so I am thinking of going with a blue, red, & silver package think maybe like the Winnipeg Jets.Also as a secondary I had in mind using a T like in the Toronto Flag except with the sides of the T coming to a point like a horn.What do you think?I like the sound of that a bunch, but if you can, incorporate horns into the striping. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hugevolsfan Posted February 25, 2013 Author Share Posted February 25, 2013 Here is an update using some C & C.Let me know what you think & also what other color could I use the gray for the helmet but the logo kinda gets lost.The blue just did not work in my plans for the uniform. My Fictional Football League Version 3 My Fictional Football Leagues WebsiteMy Church Website Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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