JayJaxon Posted September 25, 2012 Share Posted September 25, 2012 Here is the drawing in the early stages. Give me some feedback so I can turn this into a good template. There WILL be a back. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
johnrafael Posted September 25, 2012 Share Posted September 25, 2012 Please, share.By the way, you can start adding some shadow. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JayJaxon Posted September 25, 2012 Author Share Posted September 25, 2012 I just wanted to get some feedback on the initial design before I moved on with the project. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nbryant Posted September 25, 2012 Share Posted September 25, 2012 Very clean JJ, love the throwback touch. Can't say that it needs much especially knowing that you will put some serious effort into making it a great template like the other work you have done.Semper Fi! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
drdougfresh Posted September 25, 2012 Share Posted September 25, 2012 Reading is fun Love it, Jay. I would suggest maybe adding some texture (ribs, maybe?) to the stirrups/high socks, because they look a little bare right now in comparison. Also, I'd suggest a long pant version, as well, just for options (though that can really be added in the digital stage). If we're being real picky, you should definitely add a button to the top of the hat, and maybe light seams (since you have them on the jersey and pants).Can't wait to see the back of this. Again, nice work! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JayJaxon Posted September 25, 2012 Author Share Posted September 25, 2012 Thanks. Yep, a cap button will be added, as will seams. I will experiment with sleeve and pant length when it gets to the digital stage. Thanks and I look forward to hearing more. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JayJaxon Posted September 25, 2012 Author Share Posted September 25, 2012 Let me know if there is anything else I need to include here. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ESTONES6 Posted September 25, 2012 Share Posted September 25, 2012 Not bad. Not bad at all. The problem with baseball templates is that the style of the uniform is on the front of the shirt and the side of the pants. Without grossly skewing logos, its nearly impossible to show bot the piping on the pants and shirt at the same time with out adding some sort of cut out or window. I like that the player seems to be upright instead of slouching or leaning to one direction. It helps maximize the amount of space for numbers and wordmarks, as well as piping. I think you first template of the player leaning on the bat gave the best attempt at showing the pants side and jersey front. I think a big part that would help improve your template - and hopefully your book - is adding a rear view. It may seem minor, but when you think about the addition of the American flag patch, teams having or not having names on the jersey, number/name color (sometimes different than the front of jersey), the use of a name plate, as well as the MLB logo with each teams colors, adds a lot of variety. I think it would help the completeness of the concept. SAINT IGNATIUS WILDCATS | CLEVELAND BROWNS | CLEVELAND CAVALIERS | CLEVELAND INDIANS | THE OHIO STATE BUCKEYES Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gfonk04 Posted September 25, 2012 Share Posted September 25, 2012 If the template version looks anything like the sketch it will be probably the best template I've ever seen. I think the more options you can include on the digital version the better: high socks, low pants cuffs, stirrups, short sleeves for old timey concepts, vest, etc. oh and maybe pinstripes. If you include them with your template, then the concepts people make using that template will look better. I also agree on the ribbing on the socks being needed, and I think there needs to be some way to show piping on the pants too. Also I think the guy' eyes look a little small and far apart. But that's obviously super nitpicky. But it looks awesome in the initial sketch for sure. I can't wait for the final product! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NDwas Posted September 25, 2012 Share Posted September 25, 2012 Beautiful work, JJ. My only comments pertain to the proportions. The arms are fine, and the glove size is too, but the sleeves and the upper torso look a tad bit short in my opinion. Maybe give him a few more pounds, too.(BTW, this is ridiculous for the "early stages." I'd be lucky if I ever come close to something like that.) Tomorrow's just your future yesterday. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JayJaxon Posted September 25, 2012 Author Share Posted September 25, 2012 be as nitpicky as you like. That's exactly why I wanted to show it in the most simple form first. Some of you may notice that this isn't my drawing style. I'm actually getting help on this one because I want to make sure it is done right. I think you will like the results. I can tell you that these features will absolutely be included in the new design:-long pants-all cap types-All types of stirrups-minor details such as stitching and logos -options to change the length of the sleeves and adding sweatbands and other accessories.-pinstripes for both jersey types will be added.-pre-set skin tones There will be plenty more to come. Any suggestions are welcome. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gfonk04 Posted September 25, 2012 Share Posted September 25, 2012 There will be plenty more to come. Any suggestions are welcome.Maybe the most dangerous thing you could've said. I'm going to go continually hit refresh on my browser until this project is done. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GeorgesL Posted September 25, 2012 Share Posted September 25, 2012 I may be able to use this, once it's completed. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MattD1972 Posted September 26, 2012 Share Posted September 26, 2012 be as nitpicky as you like. That's exactly why I wanted to show it in the most simple form first. Some of you may notice that this isn't my drawing style. I'm actually getting help on this one because I want to make sure it is done right. I think you will like the results. I can tell you that these features will absolutely be included in the new design:-long pants-all cap types-All types of stirrups-minor details such as stitching and logos -options to change the length of the sleeves and adding sweatbands and other accessories.-pinstripes for both jersey types will be added.-pre-set skin tones There will be plenty more to come. Any suggestions are welcome.Sounds great.Go with it. Better View Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ESTONES6 Posted September 26, 2012 Share Posted September 26, 2012 be as nitpicky as you like. That's exactly why I wanted to show it in the most simple form first. Some of you may notice that this isn't my drawing style. I'm actually getting help on this one because I want to make sure it is done right. I think you will like the results. I can tell you that these features will absolutely be included in the new design:-long pants-all cap types-All types of stirrups-minor details such as stitching and logos -options to change the length of the sleeves and adding sweatbands and other accessories.-pinstripes for both jersey types will be added.-pre-set skin tones There will be plenty more to come. Any suggestions are welcome.I like it. What about eye black/sun glasses? Round bill vs. flat bill? .I really like the idea of varying the sleeve length to show sweat bands (wrist and forearm) and wrist tape SAINT IGNATIUS WILDCATS | CLEVELAND BROWNS | CLEVELAND CAVALIERS | CLEVELAND INDIANS | THE OHIO STATE BUCKEYES Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JayJaxon Posted September 26, 2012 Author Share Posted September 26, 2012 I had thought about eye black and glasses but not the different types of bills. I will add that to the list. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DomTheAthlete29 Posted September 26, 2012 Share Posted September 26, 2012 As a fan of your work, I think this is very excellent. Can't wait to see the digital form. Someone be a World Champ, please!Fantasy Football Keeper League.....PM me if you want to join!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
McCall Posted September 26, 2012 Share Posted September 26, 2012 My only "quibble" is the that the length of the the upper body seems smaller, proportionally of course, to that of the lower body. Just throwing me off a bit. And other than the bill of the cap not being to visible, which is probably due to the forward facing, that's it. I think the facial features are fine considering they won't be the focal point. I think as long as there's a rear view, a simple window box will suffice for showing pant piping when necessary. You may not even need to include that. The user can whenever needed. Because on plain pants and pinstripes, the front and back alone will suffice.Awesome stuff. https://dribbble.com/MakaioCall Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
zpqmaowl Posted September 27, 2012 Share Posted September 27, 2012 Jersey piping? What format will this template be in? .psd? the worst helmets design to me is the Jacksonville jaguars hamlets from 1995 to 2012 because you can't see the logo vary wall Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HarperK Posted September 28, 2012 Share Posted September 28, 2012 If not i have no problem converting it to psd if he would allow me to i already converted his old one for my personal use!http://s198.photobucket.com/albums/aa221/315design/ELB%20Uniforms/?albumview=slideshow ʎɐqǝ uo pɹɐoqʎǝʞ ɐ ʎnq ı ǝɯıʇ ʇsɐן ǝɥʇ sı sıɥʇ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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