Oakland Moneyballers

[AlMagz 0]

So this is my first ever concept, ever. First one I decided to make in paint with the help of awesome copy and pasting of the template. Its very simple. Obviously this is a play on Moneyball and in response to the A's clinching the AL West earlier today. Billy Beane strikes again, I think there will be a sequel Moneyball2k12 (working title).

Im already going to assume there are a billion and one things that can be improved on this but I would like to know what peoples opinion are. Im calling it the Oakland Moneyballers, but this could easily be transitioned into the San Jose Moneyballers if necessary.

[TorinK29 28]

Overall looks good.

But on the front of the jersey, it's way to much yellow. Also, why is there teal on the front and green with the numbers and NOB. (correct me if it's a movie reference)

I've never made a baseball concept before but I would try making the script green with a white outline.

Also, try making the belt green and adding a striping pattern to the pants. Perhaps a double line down the side matching the front stripes?

On a positive note (I really try to not be negative about people's concept, this really does look good.) Good start and hoping to see more on this topic and possibly more concepts in the future.

[mattb6 690]

looks very incomplete. you don't have the green and white piping on the back of the jersey by the neck, and there seems to be too much empty space

[AlMagz 0]

ok here is a little update:

-added the pinstripe to the back of the jersey

-changed the font color on the front of the jersey from white to green

-added the tri-color piping to the pants and belt loops

[nino21220 100]

http://quattroprinting.spreadshirt.com/moneyball-green-A10396720/customize/color/92

Moneyball shirt

[AlMagz 0]

This is the 2nd alternate that could be worn both home and away