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tomjmerrill

Boston Bruins Alternate Logo/Patch Concept

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I like it! I don't think the bear is quite there yet (the white mouth and black teeth is really bothering me), but I love the overall idea.

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I was having a hard time with the colors also seeing how there is only 3 to choose from. Ill try switching some and see what I come up with, Thanks for the feedback!

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I was having a hard time with the colors also seeing how there is only 3 to choose from. Ill try switching some and see what I come up with, Thanks for the feedback!

Should be able to pull of a black mouth with yellow outilines & white teeth I believe

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love it! i'm with illwauk though, the mouth is a little awkward

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don't mess with bruins logo

He said this was for an alternate logo. Calm down.

@tom: Now you got it. One of the best Bruins concepts I've seen. If anything, I'd like to see how the bear would look without the wheel behind it.

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Great job! At the moment it looks pretty good but it doesn't look like a finished product to me. The mouth looks good but the shape of the head doesn't seem right. It looks a little too narrow. Also the absence of an ear seems off. For some perspective, here’s a picture of a bear I think will help you get the shape right.

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P.S. That color of yellow you’re currently using looks very “mustard-y.” Try this:

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Thanks Ill try that color, when I export the image my gold does turn kinda "mustard" yellow. I had an ear on the right but it just threw off everything cause it was just sticking out. I am going for a really simplistic look with sharp lines.

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right now the lines around the mouth area are too thin & throwing off the logo overall also an ear shape would improve & the bear is a little out of center

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Maybe just the bear, because now it looks a little crowded

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right now the lines around the mouth area are too thin & throwing off the logo overall also an ear shape would improve & the bear is a little out of center

Agreed. I like this quite a bit but the thin lines around the mouth need to be thicker and more confident. Even the black outline around the bears' head should really almost (but not quite) be as thick as the lines in the background part of the logo.

Right now the head is a little bottom right corner, so it needs to go towards the top left a bit. This might mean that the nose overlaps the circle, but I think that would be a good thing.

Definitely keep the white teeth and black mouth. A white/yellow mouth looks too much like a negative.

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The head looks more like a gorilla than a bear, but that's probably because the ears are missing. The whole "roar" idea is awesome. I'm excited to see it once it's dialed in.

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Thanks everyone for the feedback, as I stated this is my first submission to the sports logos forums. This community is awesome! Ill take what you have all said and do some more tweaking today. Thanks again.

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