29texan Posted February 19, 2013 Author Share Posted February 19, 2013 Alright, 3rd draft (sort of). I've got 3 variations of the bolt. Also, I've reduced the hair lines, got rid of the light blue because it did feel like overkill, and fixed the mouth a little. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gr3g3 Posted February 19, 2013 Share Posted February 19, 2013 A Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest darkpiranha Posted February 19, 2013 Share Posted February 19, 2013 I like A or C, but I think the awkwardness I'm still having is that there's just so much hair. It's overpowering the logo and it's essentially just a big blob of yellow, and not something interesting on its own. The lightning bolt should feel more dominant. You could maybe try putting the whole thing in a roundel where the line of the curve from the C version of the bolt continues down and leads into the shape of the hair. Cropping it by putting it in a roundel will help with the 'blobby' nature of the hair, and also suggest Basketball a bit more. And it's now an "O" for OKC. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
29texan Posted February 21, 2013 Author Share Posted February 21, 2013 Alright, my 4th draft. Respect to darkpiranha, but I feel like the hair is just as much important as the bolt (to give it the "warrior god" look), so I just made the bolt bigger, while still making it flow with the helmet.Just so you know, the Thor look will only be the main focus of the logo. I'm trying to decide on either a roundel or the shield OKC currently uses as a backdrop. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bravo96 Posted February 21, 2013 Share Posted February 21, 2013 Thin up his neck a bit, and perhaps make the bolt a little rounder and less jagged. Click the Banner - Join the Movement! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
29texan Posted February 21, 2013 Author Share Posted February 21, 2013 The lightning bolt is one jag too long. The neck is too big compared to his head. Speaking of the head, his eye is too far up. Yes, you can have some creative input to make it your own, but anatomy is something most people instinctively recognize if something is off. I find the hair is too long and the hair lines that are closest to the bottom should just connect to the outline. The area between the two is so small it's pointless not to have them connect. And finally bold lines and shapes mixed with some definition should help you out.From this point, I'm probably just gonna make a few small changes here and there (like the lines in the hair, the eyes, the neck, maybe make the lines a little more bold, etc.), but for the most part, I'm comfortable with the way it's set up at the moment and then decide on whether or not to put it in a roundel or keep the shield.Also, will start on the secondary and tertiary logos.But thanks for the input. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BigRed618 Posted February 21, 2013 Share Posted February 21, 2013 I'd go with a shield, personally. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
29texan Posted February 23, 2013 Author Share Posted February 23, 2013 Ok, so with the small changes suggested by some of you, and the shield shape the Thunder uses for their logo, here's the 5th draft.May make one or two small additions before I continue with the other logos. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
29texan Posted February 25, 2013 Author Share Posted February 25, 2013 Secondary Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hugevolsfan Posted February 25, 2013 Share Posted February 25, 2013 what does the light blue rectangle represent seems kinda of just there? My Fictional Football League Version 3 My Fictional Football Leagues WebsiteMy Church Website Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TaylorMade Posted February 25, 2013 Share Posted February 25, 2013 what does the light blue rectangle represent seems kinda of just there?It's Thor's hammer Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
29texan Posted February 25, 2013 Author Share Posted February 25, 2013 what does the light blue rectangle represent seems kinda of just there?It's Mjölnir..... maybe I should re-position it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
29texan Posted March 6, 2013 Author Share Posted March 6, 2013 Alternates. Which looks better? A. B. C. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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