GameCock82 Posted June 15, 2004 Share Posted June 15, 2004 ok Ive been working on these for a few days. I have these three plus a wordmark. tell me which ones you like better.1.2.3.Here is the wordmark. -s82.designs.webpage-Brilliams!Ownership -CFA: South Beach Sharks -NCFA: 2007 Beantown Bowl Champions; BNE Co-Champions Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GameCock82 Posted June 15, 2004 Author Share Posted June 15, 2004 come on (good or bad) comments I dont care. I want to know what you guys think. -s82.designs.webpage-Brilliams!Ownership -CFA: South Beach Sharks -NCFA: 2007 Beantown Bowl Champions; BNE Co-Champions Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gordie Posted June 15, 2004 Share Posted June 15, 2004 I like it. I don't see a huge difference between the three, but if I had to pick, I'd say I prefer the first one.There isn't a lot of contrast between the main colour and the highlight colour. If you lightened one or darkened the other, the highlights might show up better. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lucky Posted June 15, 2004 Share Posted June 15, 2004 Yeah I'd vote for the first one as well. I like the all-white fangs vs. the red gradient and I would keep the funky neck pattern over number 3. Another personal preference - I'd bring the wordmark out from under the mouth, maybe just by placing it below the logo entirely. That aside, this is very nice indeed. Yeah do that. Do exactly THAT Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phil Posted June 15, 2004 Share Posted June 15, 2004 A solid effort GameCock!- I'd go with all white fangs and no neck at all. I find the neck unnecessary, and I don't know if there's a way to do it 'right'... if it's straight cut, it looks boring, and almost as if the head is a mounted hunter's trophy... if it's crinkle cut, it gets too busy and takes away from the face.- Also, the highlight above the eyes looks like clown makeup... maybe try something different there. - In order to make it look a little more pro, I'd thicken the blue lines and accentuate the features even more to minimize the amount of blank space around his face.- I'd try a font other than the Bucs, and find a bit of a different way to incorporate it with the face... obscuring the "re C" makes it a little tough to read.Some great work so far! I especially like the geometric angles that make up the area from his eyes through to his nose. Keep up the good work! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GameCock82 Posted June 15, 2004 Author Share Posted June 15, 2004 Also, the highlight above the eyes looks like clown makeup... maybe try something different therethank you for your comments I will use these and edit my work so it looks better.syphi whould it help making the face darker instead of getting rid of the definition in its fore head? -s82.designs.webpage-Brilliams!Ownership -CFA: South Beach Sharks -NCFA: 2007 Beantown Bowl Champions; BNE Co-Champions Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shmee Posted June 15, 2004 Share Posted June 15, 2004 I'd go with numero uno. The white fangs look better than the gradient IMHO. There's one reason I'd avoid number 3 entirely right now, and I'll try to state it without offending anyone. Given the choices here, you have two that appear to have a long mane coming around, and one with a straight neck. I'm not sure if it works the same on this type of cat as it does elsewhere, but have you ever looked at a pack of lions? Male lions have thick necks and also have a large mane, while female lions are thinner, and have no mane. Based on that, I'd say the more rugged neck here looks more "manly" and thus more imposing. I'd go with that one. The world's foremost practitioners of professional tag-team wrestling. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GameCock82 Posted June 15, 2004 Author Share Posted June 15, 2004 syphi is this what I should have done? -s82.designs.webpage-Brilliams!Ownership -CFA: South Beach Sharks -NCFA: 2007 Beantown Bowl Champions; BNE Co-Champions Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gordie Posted June 15, 2004 Share Posted June 15, 2004 It's the triangular shape of the highlights over the eyes that makes them resemble clown makeup. Instead of bringing the point straight up, try bringing the top line of those highlights from the corner of the eyes (where you have them already) towards the ears.I think if you make the outline of the upper eyelids thicken as they go outwards, it might give the eyes more depth.I'm beginning to like the gradient on the fangs. It makes them kind of look bloodstained and they're curving in at the points. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phil Posted June 15, 2004 Share Posted June 15, 2004 This latest version is getting better. The larger contrast between the facial colours is good. The thicker outlines are good, although the lines of the eyes, nose, and fangs could still use some added weight.Still looks a little like clown makeup. I'd recommend trying Gordie's suggestion, although beyond that I don't know what you could do. Anybody else got ideas? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GameCock82 Posted June 15, 2004 Author Share Posted June 15, 2004 I dont know If you'll like this font ill change it if you dont -s82.designs.webpage-Brilliams!Ownership -CFA: South Beach Sharks -NCFA: 2007 Beantown Bowl Champions; BNE Co-Champions Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lopernv Posted June 16, 2004 Share Posted June 16, 2004 These are good, especially how you used the hair under the head. That font looks really Sabre-ish to me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chapi Posted June 16, 2004 Share Posted June 16, 2004 that's awesome. i like the last set you posted very much. good work. ain't that the t-wolves font?? good choice !!nice colors too www.dap-studio.pl Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
leafs4ever Posted June 16, 2004 Share Posted June 16, 2004 i think the head above the wordmark has the best shape to it http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v355/dave123/leaf1-sm.gif Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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