curswine Posted April 16, 2013 Share Posted April 16, 2013 Your combination of a textured shirt and illustrated shorts and socks is very off putting to the whole presentation, aside from that everything is generally ok, the Fire crest on the shirt still looks like it's got some blue in it, the shorts and sock styles could use some varying up as well and more detail also.Yeah its kinda awkward. I really like the jersey PSD template but cant find any shorts and sock PSD template.Good catch on the Fire crest I missed that.I don't think their is one, that template was created specifically to display just the shirts in the Football Manager. FootballShirtCulture.comDesignFootball.com Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Atom Posted April 16, 2013 Author Share Posted April 16, 2013 I don't think their is one, that template was created specifically to display just the shirts in the Football Manager.I know I've looked across FM forums, someone used to make a full kit but all the links are dead. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pluggerplugger1 Posted April 17, 2013 Share Posted April 17, 2013 That Vancouver third is amazing! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chromatic Posted April 17, 2013 Share Posted April 17, 2013 Vancouver looks great. Especially the third. It reminds me of a cold tequila sunrise. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Atom Posted April 17, 2013 Author Share Posted April 17, 2013 Complete redesign for the Revolution. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Whittier S Posted April 17, 2013 Share Posted April 17, 2013 The detail on the NE logo is much too small. As the logo appears on my screen, it's about the same size as it would appear if I were wearing it, and the text is completely illegible. Beyond that, I generally like the uniforms, though don't quite get the little half-ellipses at the edges of the sleeves. Â Â Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bleuet Posted April 17, 2013 Share Posted April 17, 2013 Your Revs logo is much much better then what they currently got. Congrats. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BigRed618 Posted April 17, 2013 Share Posted April 17, 2013 Agreed with Whittier. I'd just use the secondary logo on all their shirts. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nas1787 Posted April 17, 2013 Share Posted April 17, 2013 Hey Atom,If you're interested, I have a template for textured shorts and socks that I think will go much better with your jersey. Here's the download link:http://www.mediafire.com/?w509yt85ycapbhvLiking the series so far, BTW Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
curswine Posted April 17, 2013 Share Posted April 17, 2013 I think this is a best concept I have seen for a Revs logo, very good job there. You know how I feel about the kits already though.^^^ Those shorts and socks would fit better, but I think having a shirt matching the short and socks style would tie in a whole lot better with the overall presentation. FootballShirtCulture.comDesignFootball.com Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Atom Posted April 18, 2013 Author Share Posted April 18, 2013 Hey Atom,If you're interested, I have a template for textured shorts and socks that I think will go much better with your jersey. Here's the download link:http://www.mediafire...w509yt85ycapbhvLiking the series so far, BTWOMG youre my hero. Ive looked everywhere for something like this. Thank you.I think this is a best concept I have seen for a Revs logo, very good job there. You know how I feel about the kits already though.^^^ Those shorts and socks would fit better, but I think having a shirt matching the short and socks style would tie in a whole lot better with the overall presentation.Thanks man, I agree about the vector vs raster issue definitely gonna correct it now that I got some shorts and socks. It might take a while though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dan O'Mac Posted April 18, 2013 Share Posted April 18, 2013 The Revolution needed a new logo... and that is great. It fits their identity, and, to me, feels soccer. I like this. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Atom Posted April 18, 2013 Author Share Posted April 18, 2013 New version of Revolution crest Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Atom Posted April 20, 2013 Author Share Posted April 20, 2013 Originally I wasnt going to do a team for New Orleans because of how awesome pcgd's design was but I had an idea today so I made this real quick looking for some constructive criticism. It is heavily (perhaps too heavily?) based on the New Orleans water meter cover which people think is beautiful and steal from the street. I am calling the team Lagniappe for now because it means a little something extra and I didnt plan on doing NOLA at first. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Atom Posted April 20, 2013 Author Share Posted April 20, 2013 New Version of Vancouver Third Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BigRed618 Posted April 20, 2013 Share Posted April 20, 2013 Vancouver's third is looking beautiful. Your New Orleans crest is okay, the moon and stars are a nice touch, but the crest is awfully wordy, if you know what I mean. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GeauxColonels Posted April 21, 2013 Share Posted April 21, 2013 Originally I wasnt going to do a team for New Orleans because of how awesome pcgd's design was but I had an idea today so I made this real quick looking for some constructive criticism. It is heavily (perhaps too heavily?) based on the New Orleans water meter cover which people think is beautiful and steal from the street. I am calling the team Lagniappe for now because it means a little something extra and I didnt plan on doing NOLA at first.I like the idea, but it's a bit busy. Also I would lighten up the purple a shade or two to make it look less like black. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Atom Posted May 3, 2013 Author Share Posted May 3, 2013 Thanks for the New Orleans Crest critique.Now that my semester is over I am back to getting to work on my redesigns. Since I have been gone it has seemed that the next New York team will not be the Cosmos and will be New York F.C. so i started to work on a crest for them. Looking for some C&C. The blut and white hoops, the crown and the flowers are based on the Flag of Queens with the Pentagon representing the five boroughs. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
svb2815 Posted May 3, 2013 Share Posted May 3, 2013 That Vancouver 3rd kit is beautiful. Good work!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MarkEightThree Posted May 3, 2013 Share Posted May 3, 2013 FC New York has a similar concept:Not a fan of the overall design, but maybe a stronger font will improve it. Excellent job on Vancouver by the way. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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