TheGiantsFan Posted April 21, 2014 Share Posted April 21, 2014 Lotta good concepts here and there. I really like how well Edmonton's colors go together. I noticed that the font you used for Indianapolis reminds me a bit of the Brooklyn Nets. But that doesn't really degrade the great design you have for them.Well done! BEHANCE | PORTFOLIO Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Naoned Pride Posted April 22, 2014 Author Share Posted April 22, 2014 I don't like to up topics (not sure bout that, but that's what we say in France, to "up" topics), but it's like the third time in a row I post for nothing. Where do I come from ? Who do I support ? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JoHyphenE Posted April 22, 2014 Share Posted April 22, 2014 Indy: If you are going to make black and white the main colors I would make the statue black with gray color because it clashes with the checkers right now. I know you were trying to keep blue as it tiies in with Indiana well, but I'm not sure it works that well here. So then you'd either have to make the clash red or gray because blue would be out of the palette. I'd also pick a different font for IndianapolisFC because it is so thin that at any distance it would be hard to read.NJ: I like the colors here and the sponsor works very well on the kits, which are excellent. As for the crest, I don't think that the fonts work well together. You have a bold, stencil font and a skinnier, serif, typing font. Someone who knows more about fonts could probably give you better advice on as to how you could make them work better together. Simplify the NJ shape, right now it has too many details and soccer crests are better off simpler, IMO. Lastly, give the 1882 the curved treatment that "Liberty and Prosperity" received, it looks a little unfinished as of right now.OKC: I don't like the font choice of the OKC in the middle of the crest, in fact I don't think it needs to be there at all since you have "Oklahoma City Football Club" at the top. Maybe try and put in some common Oklahoman imagery like a dreamcatcher or something in its place. Those kits are mighty fine looking, by the way. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Naoned Pride Posted April 22, 2014 Author Share Posted April 22, 2014 Thanks for the feedback.Indy: I don't find it as annoying as you do, on the contrary, I believe keeping the statue blue puts it in the foreground better than if it was melted in it. I tried this one out, let's compare to the current one:NJ: Haha, I think I just forgot to round the 1882, I wanted to do so at first. Here's a new version, with a simplified NJ. Concerning the font, I don't think it's an issue imo, NJA stands out as the name of the team, while the motto is just an detail, hence the lighter font. But if somebody provides me some good fonts, I'll give it a try.OKC: Thank you for the tip, I really had trouble finding some good image that could symbolize either the team or the state. I don't know how I missed the dreamcatcher, I mean it's on the State flag for god's sake ! I went with OKC as a last option.Here are two versions, I found this dreamcatcher pretty fitting, but I thought maybe adding a little touch with the soccer ball. Which one do I pick ?(A stroke is needed, I know, the borders get lost in the background of the site) Where do I come from ? Who do I support ? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest darkpiranha Posted April 22, 2014 Share Posted April 22, 2014 I'd clearly go with the soccer ball. Something else to experiment with, a minor thing, but the frame of the dreamcatcher has some small white triangle shapes in them that very closely resemble the soccer tile shapes. Maybe play off of that a bit more. Maybe make the three prongs that extend out bend inward (making a pseudo-pentagon) rather than go straight out. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tannerk_15 Posted April 22, 2014 Share Posted April 22, 2014 I've considered the color scheme problem on the kits and came up with three brand new for Portland.One problem with FC Portland- The women's professional team that plays in Portland is already called the Thorns. They play in the NWSL. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Naoned Pride Posted April 22, 2014 Author Share Posted April 22, 2014 Yeah well it's not a fantasy league for nothing It means I've spotted the city's identity right ! Where do I come from ? Who do I support ? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ujju2 Posted April 23, 2014 Share Posted April 23, 2014 Now THAT is a perfect look for Edmonton. Great work.Everything else is nice too. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Naoned Pride Posted April 27, 2014 Author Share Posted April 27, 2014 Orange County UnionOttawa FC Where do I come from ? Who do I support ? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheGiantsFan Posted April 27, 2014 Share Posted April 27, 2014 Solid sets! My only problem is that I don't really like the font "Union" is in on OC Union's crest. It just looks out of place, even if you could be trying to evoke the sun rays. However, the rest of the OC Union crest is solid! BEHANCE | PORTFOLIO Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
VictoriaGooner Posted April 27, 2014 Share Posted April 27, 2014 Agree with the above post, the Union font that is used doesn't really fit the crest. I can see you tried to do a setting Sun motif but I don't think you pulled it off. Nice try though THE SHORT FUSE | ARSEBLOG Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Naoned Pride Posted May 1, 2014 Author Share Posted May 1, 2014 I've reworked on my Orange County crest, tell me what you guys think.Edit: I've realized just after posting that with white borders it gets completely lost in the background of the site. I kept the same shape as previously, I don't really have time putting borders on right now.And here are two new additions.Pittsburgh AFCRaleigh-Cary FC Where do I come from ? Who do I support ? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fullarmor Posted May 1, 2014 Share Posted May 1, 2014 Raleigh-Cary is one of my favorite so far! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Naoned Pride Posted May 2, 2014 Author Share Posted May 2, 2014 Still no other comment ? Where do I come from ? Who do I support ? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
VictoriaGooner Posted May 2, 2014 Share Posted May 2, 2014 I am a fan of the Pittsburgh crest and home kit with the fortress on the lower half of the shirt...nice done. Beautiful crest of Raleigh-Cary...nice blending! THE SHORT FUSE | ARSEBLOG Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Naoned Pride Posted May 4, 2014 Author Share Posted May 4, 2014 Richmond VFCRochester United Where do I come from ? Who do I support ? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
thebutkiker Posted May 5, 2014 Share Posted May 5, 2014 I like rochester, but I would think twice in the sponsor, maybe Kodak, since it's related to photography. Especially since Kodak has it's headquarters in Rochester. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Naoned Pride Posted May 5, 2014 Author Share Posted May 5, 2014 I thought of it, but I like to keep the same sponsors as irl to make it realistic. Where do I come from ? Who do I support ? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
thebutkiker Posted May 5, 2014 Share Posted May 5, 2014 I thought of it, but I like to keep the same sponsors as irl to make it realistic.I understand, but maybe something better than bimbo Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Naoned Pride Posted May 5, 2014 Author Share Posted May 5, 2014 I can still stylize it to fit the kits better. Where do I come from ? Who do I support ? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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