Jabel777 32 Posted May 9, 2015 I haven't looked at this thread in a while, but great job! These concepts are all amazing and very well put together! 0 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Windell918 291 Posted May 9, 2015 Heres the latest installment out of the land of Taiwan. If you haven't seen a magpie from this part of the world make sure you look one up because they are some glorious birds. While you're at it check out the taiwan five race flag. The colors between the two really married well for this concept. Here are the Taiwan Magpies! 0 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
jmoe12 498 Posted May 9, 2015 I feel like there's too much going on here. The quadruple outline should be cut to two at most, and I would eliminate the sun behind the bird, maybe use it as a secondary? 0 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
PSUcelticsWON95 98 Posted May 9, 2015 I like it except I do agree that the quadruple outline is a little much. 0 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Windell918 291 Posted May 9, 2015 Ok. That was a late add. I went back and forth on it. I will get rid of it. 0 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
ujju2 115 Posted May 9, 2015 So much better. Love the new one. However, looking at pictures, the tail could extend a bit longer. Nice work! 0 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Jabel777 32 Posted May 9, 2015 Both are good, but I actually like the first version better. I think the red and blue outlines give it more color and make it pop. The sun behind it was great too. 0 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
PSUcelticsWON95 98 Posted May 9, 2015 I like the new version better except I liked the sun behind it. Looks sharp, though! 0 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Windell918 291 Posted May 9, 2015 hehe is it possible the sun is still there? guess well see on the jerseys! 0 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
jmoe12 498 Posted May 9, 2015 Nailed it with the update, pumped for the jerseys 0 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
ujju2 115 Posted May 10, 2015 I have to say, sorry, but the sun in the first version made it seem like the New York Rangers Lady Liberty logo, but with a bird. Prefer the second one. 0 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
JTswag187 67 Posted May 10, 2015 The bird looks like he's wearing a ski mask. However the colors are great 0 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Whittier S 533 Posted May 10, 2015 I prefer the first version of the magpie as well. The second is just a bird; the first brings in more distinctly Taiwanese symbolism. 0 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Windell918 291 Posted May 10, 2015 Seems like were fairly split on version 1 and 2 so maybe Ill try a balance between the twoTake 3? 0 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
PackerFan98 91 Posted May 10, 2015 That looks pretty good. The blue body seems too big, I don't know if magpies have big bodies, just what I think. 0 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
sleuthpanther 790 Posted May 10, 2015 I think we found a winner! The one without the sun just looks like a generic bird logo, the sun adds something for taiwan 0 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Jabel777 32 Posted May 10, 2015 That is better than the second version, but I still like the first more. Both are definitely good though! 0 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Whittier S 533 Posted May 10, 2015 What if it were a red outline instead of yellow, to match up with the secondary mark? 0 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
