PSUcelticsWON95 Posted December 13, 2013 Share Posted December 13, 2013 Lookin great. But, I have to ask... what is the scripture on the alt?Its the Sanskrit word for "soul"Ah okay. Clever! I normally have a huge pet peeve about home jerseys and away jerseys not being matching opposites, but here it seems to work, and the way you have them designed it wouldn't work to have the colors switched around. I think the Soul is done! But, are all the teams going to have the same pattern on the pants? I think it's fine how it is, but I was wondering if that was the plan or not. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jaxon#08 Posted December 14, 2013 Share Posted December 14, 2013 The soul is top notch. Fantastic Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Windell918 Posted December 14, 2013 Author Share Posted December 14, 2013 Yes, I've decided the pants will all be a solid color with the same format, the ankle striping on the bottom may have small variations on special occasions but for the most part the idea will be consistency. In other news the team in Hawaii has moved from Honolulu to Maui. The name Honolulu just doesn't roll of the tongue with any name like I want it too. So this is probably a good indication as to which team I plan on doing next. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ujju2 Posted December 14, 2013 Share Posted December 14, 2013 Yay! Sanskrit! LOL Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jaxon#08 Posted December 14, 2013 Share Posted December 14, 2013 Yep Honolulu just doesn't fit with any mascot. Maui is a better name or you could just go with Hawaii Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PSUcelticsWON95 Posted December 15, 2013 Share Posted December 15, 2013 I'm excited for Maui. Hawai'i has a really rich tradition so I'm sure you'll easily find an idea for the concept. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Windell918 Posted December 16, 2013 Author Share Posted December 16, 2013 Maui! Enjoy! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PSUcelticsWON95 Posted December 16, 2013 Share Posted December 16, 2013 Great concept. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jmoe12 Posted December 16, 2013 Share Posted December 16, 2013 I like it, but suggest you make a logo that focuses more on the volcano instead of the wordmark. Â Â Â Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PSUcelticsWON95 Posted December 16, 2013 Share Posted December 16, 2013 I guess one thing I do have to say is that the secondary looks a bit like the Miami Shine secondary. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kevsim1 Posted December 16, 2013 Share Posted December 16, 2013 I think that I agree with all 3 comments above! Great one. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DS729 Posted December 16, 2013 Share Posted December 16, 2013 Niiiiiiiiceeeeeeeee. Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jaxon#08 Posted December 16, 2013 Share Posted December 16, 2013 Maui is lookin fine Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ujju2 Posted December 17, 2013 Share Posted December 17, 2013 Nice, but with the volcano and everything else brown, the brown words on the primary are a little hard to read... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Windell918 Posted December 17, 2013 Author Share Posted December 17, 2013 All good points. So I made a few changes. Including a change to the scheme, adding a yellow-orange for better contrast and changing the primary by adding a Hawaiian themed pattern. I also lightened up the lighter brown a bit.Thoughts?Take 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PSUcelticsWON95 Posted December 17, 2013 Share Posted December 17, 2013 How would the primary and wordmark look with the gold that's in the secondary? or vise versa Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Windell918 Posted December 17, 2013 Author Share Posted December 17, 2013 How would the primary and wordmark look with the gold that's in the secondary? or vise versa Not sure what you mean. The "gold" is the same in all the designs. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PSUcelticsWON95 Posted December 17, 2013 Share Posted December 17, 2013 Oh I see it now. For some reason it looked darker in the "M" when I first looked at it. Sorry 'bout that! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dan O'Mac Posted December 17, 2013 Share Posted December 17, 2013 I like all the improvements I like this. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ujju2 Posted December 17, 2013 Share Posted December 17, 2013 Looks great! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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