OliverP Posted July 15, 2013 Share Posted July 15, 2013 Hey forum, me again! Today I will be bringing you a hockey concept for a Croatian team from Zagreb, which officially became a member of the Kontinental Hockey League (the strongest hockey league in Europe). Their current logo looks washed up and when i saw it get uploaded in to the database of this page I said ''This looks really bad.''I'll post some jerseys later, right now I am waiting for speedy to send me the templates of his 5th generation reebok jerseys. If anyone has them on their computer can you please send them to me (oliverpetrovic@hotmail.com). Thanks!This is my concept:C&C would be cool. Dribbble Behance Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JCRGraphix Posted July 15, 2013 Share Posted July 15, 2013 I like your idea, but I think the bear looks a little too skinny especially in his snout. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wildwing64 Posted July 15, 2013 Share Posted July 15, 2013 The bear needs some work - right now it sorta looks more like a hybrid between a monkey and a lion - but other than that it's looking great so far. PotD: 24/08/2017 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
worcat Posted July 15, 2013 Share Posted July 15, 2013 make the snout and mouth wider. the eyes need to be moved apart and the forehead looks strangly large. Bleeding Blue since 1986 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OliverP Posted July 15, 2013 Author Share Posted July 15, 2013 Here is a quick update thanks for the C&C.When I was drawing the head something was off but I couldn't put my finger on it. Dribbble Behance Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JCRGraphix Posted July 15, 2013 Share Posted July 15, 2013 Much much better. This has a lot of potential. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OliverP Posted July 16, 2013 Author Share Posted July 16, 2013 What do you guys think about adding yellow to the design? Yellow is their official color as well. Dribbble Behance Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
untvar Posted July 16, 2013 Share Posted July 16, 2013 You're right that their logo looks like an n-th photocopy. But I like the composition and 'weight' of their bear better than yours.Would you be interested in updating their bear instead of drawing a brand new bear? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OliverP Posted July 16, 2013 Author Share Posted July 16, 2013 You're right that their logo looks like an n-th photocopy. But I like the composition and 'weight' of their bear better than yours.Would you be interested in updating their bear instead of drawing a brand new bear?If you commented earlier Id do something. I might update it tomorrow and to make it look 'heavier' I'll make the bear's neck.Here are the home and away jerseys, later on I will make alts. What do you guys thinks should I go oldschool or modern for the alts.The font is based of of classic block numbers with slight changes.Enjoy! Dribbble Behance Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Edubdesign Posted July 17, 2013 Share Posted July 17, 2013 Besides the white pants, and the fact that Kristan doesn't play for Medvescak anymore, it's very good.Try smoothing out the stripes on the waist. Don't straighten them out, but just smooth them out so they aren't exactly the same shape as the hem. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JCRGraphix Posted July 18, 2013 Share Posted July 18, 2013 I'm not sure about the white pants! Other than that, solid work. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OliverP Posted July 18, 2013 Author Share Posted July 18, 2013 Besides the white pants, and the fact that Kristan doesn't play for Medvescak anymore, it's very good.Try smoothing out the stripes on the waist. Don't straighten them out, but just smooth them out so they aren't exactly the same shape as the hem.Yeah I knew that Kristan doesn't play there anymore but I just wanted to honor him in a way. By far my favorite player on the team.Anyway here are some updates of the stripes and pants you guys said I needed to fix.Next up the alternates! Dribbble Behance Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JCRGraphix Posted July 19, 2013 Share Posted July 19, 2013 Very Nice. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KCScout76 Posted July 20, 2013 Share Posted July 20, 2013 I like the "Z" on the bear paw. Kansas City Scouts (CHL) Orr Cup Champions 2010, 2019, 2021 St. Joseph Pony Express (ULL) 2023 Champions Kansas City Cattle (CL) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OliverP Posted July 21, 2013 Author Share Posted July 21, 2013 Thanks man i thought people would like it. Dribbble Behance Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OliverP Posted August 23, 2013 Author Share Posted August 23, 2013 It's good to be back forum I was on a long, great summer trip and now I am back to finish this thread. You voted for a modern approach to the alt jersey. Hope this isn't to reminiscent to the 90's. Here's the jersey: Dribbble Behance Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ColeJ Posted August 24, 2013 Share Posted August 24, 2013 i LOVE the alternate jersey. that looks amazing. great job. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TorinK92 Posted August 24, 2013 Share Posted August 24, 2013 Looks great, by great I mean it would hurt the opponent teams eyes, thats a good thing though because it would let this team score easier.That was actually a compliment, like what you've done with them. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OliverP Posted August 24, 2013 Author Share Posted August 24, 2013 Wow, thanks for the awesome comments. I thought it was going to be too much, looks like I was wrong. Dribbble Behance Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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