Sidney Posted July 28, 2013 Share Posted July 28, 2013 Hey! this is my firts post...I decided to redesign a famous logo which is Chicago Blackhawks, to me the current logo looks like a cartoon, so I done something more simplist.Tell me what you think, every criticisms are welcome Sorry for my english I am french. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JCRGraphix Posted July 28, 2013 Share Posted July 28, 2013 Not bad. You could use more shading around the brow and bridge of the nose.Très bon. Vous pouvez utiliser plus d'ombrage autour du front et du nez. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
thepjguy Posted July 28, 2013 Share Posted July 28, 2013 All this needs is more shading! Its great! Two thumbs way up. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
abqryan Posted July 28, 2013 Share Posted July 28, 2013 It is certainly less cartoon-ish than the current logo. I, for one, appreciate an effort to modernize their look without throwing away the Native American component all together. To me it looks like very good work but it feels too vertical somehow, not sure why that is or how to fix it or if it even needs to be fixed. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sidney Posted July 28, 2013 Author Share Posted July 28, 2013 Thanks for your feedbacks I'll try to put shading to see the difference. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sidney Posted July 29, 2013 Author Share Posted July 29, 2013 OK I worked on this, I can say that the problem of verticality is resolved. But what about shading? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LogoMark Posted July 29, 2013 Share Posted July 29, 2013 I love the update, the shading looks great and the horizontal/vertical adjustment is good and somehow it seems to give more attention to the feathers. Very nice Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sidney Posted July 29, 2013 Author Share Posted July 29, 2013 Thank you buddy. I appreciate Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kbaker19 Posted July 29, 2013 Share Posted July 29, 2013 The update is awesome. Very nice work Sidney! Thanks Dolphins91 for the jersey avatars. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sidney Posted July 29, 2013 Author Share Posted July 29, 2013 Thank you mate Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TShaw528 Posted July 29, 2013 Share Posted July 29, 2013 I like it, though I think the lips could use a little work. He looks like hes kissing as of now Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kbaker19 Posted July 29, 2013 Share Posted July 29, 2013 I like it, though I think the lips could use a little work. He looks like hes kissing as of nowKissing the Cup. ...no I'm not a Blackhawks fan. Thanks Dolphins91 for the jersey avatars. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Windell918 Posted July 29, 2013 Share Posted July 29, 2013 I am a Blackhawks fan I'll give you what I think is good bad awesome and terrible:Good- the design as a whole. Taking out any connection to the team and just looking at the design its a really good concept.Bad- the facial consistency. You did a great job on the eye and making it look fierce. The lips and forehead however look to be very neutral.Awesome-that you kept the same logo and just made it better. When the old logo that is used everywhere still (with the black circle) got changed to the current, they did a really good job of taking indian and just modernizing it. The concept isnt and never has been broken you did a fine job staying true to that.Terrible-this isnt your fault. There are a handful of pro teams out there with left facing mascots (bluejays, indians). I hate this. And especially hate that my blackhawks are in this group. Its a pyscholical thing. If you want your franchise to move forward you face the logo forward. Now in the blackhawks case right now its ok to look back but come October face the logo to the right! (I used this space to vent on a personal qualm because there is nothing terrible about your concept) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sidney Posted July 29, 2013 Author Share Posted July 29, 2013 Ok for the lips I'll try something ASAP thanks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SiLeNt WaVe Posted July 29, 2013 Share Posted July 29, 2013 Turn it blue, and you have yourself an Avatar. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sidney Posted July 29, 2013 Author Share Posted July 29, 2013 HMMMMMMM.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sidney Posted July 29, 2013 Author Share Posted July 29, 2013 I've tried to change the mouth, what you think? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
camly Posted July 29, 2013 Share Posted July 29, 2013 The mouth looks much better. i think the nose still needs a little work. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sparkychewbarky Posted July 29, 2013 Share Posted July 29, 2013 Hi Sidney...Your english is fine, and your logo is very fine!I'm only being nit-picky here, because this is so good and you're so close.The second lip treatment is better, but I don't think that you need the extra little black zig-zag that you've put in.I'd try making the eyebrow and eye unit bigger, and maybe slide it up and to the front a tad.I think that the nose is OK, and the hair and feathers are perfect.Great job. *The Battle of Seattle Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Funkatron101 Posted July 29, 2013 Share Posted July 29, 2013 1. Lips are better2. Keep refining the shape3. Reduce the colors. I count 11. (light tan, dark tan, charcoal, black, yellow, red, different red, green, blue, brown, white)That is way too many. Do more with less and eliminate one of the tan colors, charcoal, one of the red colors, and brown.In fact, If I were you, I would make it black and white to start and see how far you can push that before incorporating color. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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