Windell918 Posted March 10, 2014 Share Posted March 10, 2014 Ive Cracked the Code!sorry took me a little bit on the last part Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kevsim1 Posted March 10, 2014 Author Share Posted March 10, 2014 There ya go Windell! The silver medal! Anyone still taking a shot, we'll give you a while. Easy, eh Peam? I can fix that. We can keep this going with the Jacksonville Citrus' Unis. Home and Road only today, but an alt will come. Also, Alternate logo will indeed be on the shoulders, but that was left off at today's unveiling.I went Tampa-esque here, with the wordmark on the road, but just the main logo on the home. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ujju2 Posted March 10, 2014 Share Posted March 10, 2014 Lovely! Only change world be to put the wordmark on the home, just the orange by itself looks... abnormal. Great work! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kevsim1 Posted March 10, 2014 Author Share Posted March 10, 2014 Thanks Ujju! I wasn't sure how the whole wordmark vs non-wordmark was going to go. I'm curious to see what others' opinions are, but I've definitely noted that. Thanks! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ujju2 Posted March 10, 2014 Share Posted March 10, 2014 It's just because of the shape of the logo, the space above the logo seems empty... Maybe if it was a full orange it would look better on the jersey, but as a logo, I like this one. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jaxon#08 Posted March 10, 2014 Share Posted March 10, 2014 Love the striping for Jacksonville Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ujju2 Posted March 10, 2014 Share Posted March 10, 2014 Also: I recommend not putting "Citrus" under the logo. Move it above the logo or get rid of it. If the name was longer, it might work, but a short name like Citrus looks weird beneath the logo.Love the striping for JacksonvilleI totally agree! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ThePeam Posted March 11, 2014 Share Posted March 11, 2014 I say put the word Jacksonville under the slice in an arc. No Citris. Â Â Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JoHyphenE Posted March 11, 2014 Share Posted March 11, 2014 I think the home needs some more white to separate the colors. There is not enough contrast which creates tension on the eyes and makes it a little hard to look at. I would recommend switching the orange with some white for the striping. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ujju2 Posted March 11, 2014 Share Posted March 11, 2014 I say put the word Jacksonville under the slice in an arc. No Citris.Sorry, but I disagree. I like Jacksonville above the arc, as it fills the empty space there.I think the home needs some more white to separate the colors. There is not enough contrast which creates tension on the eyes and makes it a little hard to look at. I would recommend switching the orange with some white for the striping.I think black might work better than white, but I think it's good at it is. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JoHyphenE Posted March 11, 2014 Share Posted March 11, 2014 Black doesn't really fit the color palette. White instead of orange on the striping for both jerseys is the way to go I'd say. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kevsim1 Posted March 11, 2014 Author Share Posted March 11, 2014 Thanks for the great C+C everyone. That's what I like to hear. Honestly, I think both what Ujju and ThePeam are saying would work. I could, on both jerseys, keep Jacksonville on tp and then ditch the Citrus on the bottom. Not sure, would like to hear a few more opinions there. As for what JoHyphenE said, looking at it again, I agree. So I reconfigured the home, just inverted the Orange and White on the yoke. IMO it looks better. So still revisions to come, but V 2.0 is here! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ujju2 Posted March 11, 2014 Share Posted March 11, 2014 Love it! Maybe the sleeve stripes could be inverted (mainly orange)?What about orange numbers (maybe...?)Orange collar...? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ThePeam Posted March 11, 2014 Share Posted March 11, 2014 Love it! Maybe the sleeve stripes could be inverted (mainly orange)?What about orange numbers (maybe...?)Orange collar...?I agree. Â Â Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kevsim1 Posted March 11, 2014 Author Share Posted March 11, 2014 Option 3. Teal has turned into an accent colour, which I agree could be better. Any other thought? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ThePeam Posted March 11, 2014 Share Posted March 11, 2014 I prefer the new one. Â Â Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kevsim1 Posted March 11, 2014 Author Share Posted March 11, 2014 A few touch ups then unless there are any other opinions. Is the road OK to keep with the teal a bit more predominant? EDIT: Looking at it again, I think that the Nameplate, Numbers and Logo are a tad too far right for the logo, and left for the #s and NOB. Am I seeing things, or should I move those a few pixels? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ujju2 Posted March 11, 2014 Share Posted March 11, 2014 Teal pants, then? Maybe? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JoHyphenE Posted March 11, 2014 Share Posted March 11, 2014 Newest set looks the best and it is now easy on the eyes to see, good update. The logos and such are off center as you pointed out but I think it would help the presentation if you fixed it, especially now that you mentioned it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kevsim1 Posted March 11, 2014 Author Share Posted March 11, 2014 Thanks for the help guys! I think that this set's right. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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