MrWonka Posted April 22, 2014 Share Posted April 22, 2014 I'm not sure if it's been said but I'll put in my two cents. Something feels a little off about the logo as of the last update. I think what could immediately help it out is if you separated the light and navy blue so that there is a white stripe going through the buffalo. I think doing that could actually create a different perspective of seeing the two blues clash. Just an idea, not sure how it's going to look on the final though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
colinturner95 Posted April 23, 2014 Author Share Posted April 23, 2014 added the white key line between the blues, and I wasn't sure what to do about the legs so I made the left (if you're looking at the bison's a**) legs navy, which IMO adds depth to the charging beast Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Clintau24 Posted April 23, 2014 Share Posted April 23, 2014 I'm really liking that! It's such a massive difference from the previous versions! "I believe in Auburn and love it!" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LoyolaProp1 Posted April 23, 2014 Share Posted April 23, 2014 I thought the white outline would look bad, but I like it. Not sure how I feel about the eye, but overall its pretty cool. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheSoundofThrowingPennies Posted April 23, 2014 Share Posted April 23, 2014 Awesome BK! That's a winner right there! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JPDesign Posted April 23, 2014 Share Posted April 23, 2014 I think the divide between light/dark blue should be a smoother line that fits with the outline of the body. Sorry that's a little vague; I'm not sure how else to describe it.EDIT: Here's a quick mockup I did to help explain:That's probably a little too rounded by the leg, but that helps explain what I was getting at with the "smoothness" of the divide...especially on the back. It eliminates the little sliver of navy. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hugevolsfan Posted April 23, 2014 Share Posted April 23, 2014 I think the divide between light/dark blue should be a smoother line that fits with the outline of the body. Sorry that's a little vague; I'm not sure how else to describe it.EDIT: Here's a quick mockup I did to help explain:That's probably a little too rounded by the leg, but that helps explain what I was getting at with the "smoothness" of the divide...especially on the back. It eliminates the little sliver of navy.I was going to post the same thing this would really make it better My Fictional Football League Version 3 My Fictional Football Leagues WebsiteMy Church Website Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Clintau24 Posted April 23, 2014 Share Posted April 23, 2014 I think the divide between light/dark blue should be a smoother line that fits with the outline of the body. Sorry that's a little vague; I'm not sure how else to describe it.EDIT: Here's a quick mockup I did to help explain:That's probably a little too rounded by the leg, but that helps explain what I was getting at with the "smoothness" of the divide...especially on the back. It eliminates the little sliver of navy.I was going to post the same thing this would really make it betterThis feels like it's much bulgier and fatter. The original one felt a lot more mainstream and faster and such. "I believe in Auburn and love it!" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest darkpiranha Posted April 23, 2014 Share Posted April 23, 2014 Brain hurts trying to figure out what's going on with the colors. Colors are good, not saying that, but we've got bright blue foreground shank (or whatever that cut of meat is called) with two legs closer to us, and what looks like a background darker-shaded pair of blue legs, that look like they are farther away from us. However, then the head is also the same shade of dark blue, which means... it's also farther away? I'd probably leave the two other legs brighter blue. I know logos don't always display real-world logic, but the graphic cues (darker version of color on items farther away) is a clear indicator of distance. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
colinturner95 Posted April 24, 2014 Author Share Posted April 24, 2014 I'll go back on the legs, but I think I'm going to leave the keyline how it is. When it's one motion like JP did, the leg looks too fat. No offense JP, its just the way I see it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JTswag187 Posted April 24, 2014 Share Posted April 24, 2014 I think the divide between light/dark blue should be a smoother line that fits with the outline of the body. Sorry that's a little vague; I'm not sure how else to describe it.EDIT: Here's a quick mockup I did to help explain:That's probably a little too rounded by the leg, but that helps explain what I was getting at with the "smoothness" of the divide...especially on the back. It eliminates the little sliver of navy.I was going to post the same thing this would really make it betterThis feels like it's much bulgier and fatter. The original one felt a lot more mainstream and faster and such.That's what I meant by separate shapes Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
colinturner95 Posted May 8, 2014 Author Share Posted May 8, 2014 Ok, It took a long time, but I've finally accomplished something. Oh, I was gone because of studying for 3 AP tests.... shoot me. I still have another one left. "FULL STEAM AHEAD"The Bison. Also called buffalo, is one of nature's calmest yet fiercest animals. Ever seen one charge at you? Most people will say no, because those people who do, don't survive. Beware the speed and power of the Bills. The all white pays tribute to the most recognizable throwback the Bills have, with some modern flair. The modern logo adorns the helmet in similar colors to the throwback. The colors on the jersey are lighter, which creates a blur when the players run by (please tell me someone else could see Nike saying that). Speed Kills. And the Bills will be no exception to that. C and C welcome. I'll try not to be away so long next time Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mgdmhl Posted May 8, 2014 Share Posted May 8, 2014 flip the Bills logo on the pants to face the other direction Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gator71 Posted May 8, 2014 Share Posted May 8, 2014 Love your work and the time and effort you put into it! Good luck on your last APRIL exam! I'm a teacher so I have a small understanding of how stressful that is. Sorry meant AP. Darn auto correct. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JHill1225 Posted May 8, 2014 Share Posted May 8, 2014 Ok, sorry it's taken so long, but if you want something to be good and unique, you have to spend some time on it. yes, notice the watermark. my designs have been recently posted on Instagram without my permission and not by me. To say I'm furious is an understatement. "GOLD HAS ITS DAY"The Falcons have ruled the skies of Atlanta since '66. Colors change, players change, but the ferocious style of Falcon football has remained the same. Last season was last season. The skies have cleared. The Falcons are ready to regain their perch on top of the NFC South." (I'm trying to get better at the Nikeish write up. Don't judge.)-red helmet represents the first helmet worn by the team, facemask is a gold/silver gradient, i'll explain that in a second.-look at the wings in this picture, my understanding of them was a silver and gold, which explains the gold/silver gradient sprinkled throughout. -red jersey, with wings based off the logo. -black pants, with wing based off the logo-gold socks and shoes, represent the talons a falcon attacks withC and C always welcome The Falcons concept is awesome love the new look and feel of the uniform. The only thing to change is the gold barrier around the wings across the shoulders of the jersey, if you put a gold stroke around the wings by itself, in my opinion it would put more focus on the wings than having the barrier around them or shorten the barrier to make it fit the shape of the wings on the front side of the jersey like how it is on the back side of the jersey Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JHill1225 Posted May 8, 2014 Share Posted May 8, 2014 added a complete red outlineThe ravens should go with this design hands down, loving the digital camo on the shoulders and pants nice work Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wonderbread Posted May 8, 2014 Share Posted May 8, 2014 added a complete red outline The ravens should go with this design hands down, loving the digital camo on the shoulders and pants nice workthats a black monotone Maryland flag pattern not digicamo Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
colinturner95 Posted May 9, 2014 Author Share Posted May 9, 2014 flipped the bison logo on the pants Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kansas sports fan Posted May 9, 2014 Share Posted May 9, 2014 love 'em Acts 16:31 - And they replied: "Believe on the Lord Jesus Christ and you will be saved, you and your household."John 3:16 - "For God so loved the world that He gave His only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in Him shall not perish, but have everlasting life."John 14:6 - Jesus said to him, "I am the way, and the truth, and the life. No one comes to the Father, except through me." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
@UniformDesigns Posted May 9, 2014 Share Posted May 9, 2014 How do you make logos on photoshop I just got it and I want to know. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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