beruud Posted August 14, 2013 Share Posted August 14, 2013 After viewing Gotpixel's friggen AMAZING thread, I am going to flatter him by presenting the team I made like he does... kind of. LOL. Thoughts? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest darkpiranha Posted August 14, 2013 Share Posted August 14, 2013 Great start! Keep em coming. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest darkpiranha Posted August 14, 2013 Share Posted August 14, 2013 Only thing I'd say is that there's no real connection between the logo and the helmet or uniform. I'd make the logo shield have the same number and configuration of stars that you use on the helmet and make the logo stars solid as well. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
beruud Posted August 14, 2013 Author Share Posted August 14, 2013 Here is the Demons... again thanks to gotpixels and the guy who created the template for the uni! http://rezland.deviantart.com/gallery/Only thing I'd say is that there's no real connection between the logo and the helmet or uniform. I'd make the logo shield have the same number and configuration of stars that you use on the helmet and make the logo stars solid as well. Hmmm interesting... I will have to play around! Thank you for the C&C!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kbaker19 Posted August 14, 2013 Share Posted August 14, 2013 I really like the logo for the Demons. However, there is something about the template that I don't like. The shadowing around the uniforms make them hard to see. Plus you only have a home set and not an away one. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
beruud Posted August 14, 2013 Author Share Posted August 14, 2013 I really like the logo for the Demons. However, there is something about the template that I don't like. The shadowing around the uniforms make them hard to see. Plus you only have a home set and not an away one.I can't argue with that. My ideals for the Demons is to be very dark... so I guess I am sacrificing functionality for design. Trying to capture the real style of the team I guess. I fully agree though, if I was going to be on a real field and this is the uniform, I would adjust it to be much more contrasting.I do need to create aways... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kbaker19 Posted August 14, 2013 Share Posted August 14, 2013 I really like the logo for the Demons. However, there is something about the template that I don't like. The shadowing around the uniforms make them hard to see. Plus you only have a home set and not an away one.I can't argue with that. My ideals for the Demons is to be very dark... so I guess I am sacrificing functionality for design. Trying to capture the real style of the team I guess. I fully agree though, if I was going to be on a real field and this is the uniform, I would adjust it to be much more contrasting.I do need to create aways...No it's not the uniform, but the template. It's the same thing on the Revolution uniform. The shadowing around the uniform makes it hard to see for me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GotPixels Posted August 14, 2013 Share Posted August 14, 2013 Love'em. Very creative and rich colors so far. I agree about the shadowing around the objects. Maybe lessen it a bit, but it is a great start. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
beruud Posted August 14, 2013 Author Share Posted August 14, 2013 A team from Ithaca... the Ithaca Odyssey! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Davidson Posted August 14, 2013 Share Posted August 14, 2013 After viewing Gotpixel's friggen AMAZING thread, I am going to flatter him by presenting the team I made like he does... kind of. LOL. Thoughts?Is 'revolution' a slightly odd moniker for a town more readily associated with a civil war? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dsaline97 Posted August 14, 2013 Share Posted August 14, 2013 Not sure about the angry boat, but definitely replace NEW YORK with ODYSSEY. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest darkpiranha Posted August 14, 2013 Share Posted August 14, 2013 I agree. The moniker for Gettysburg is something you need to address. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
beruud Posted August 14, 2013 Author Share Posted August 14, 2013 How about the Lexington Revolution?The Battles of Lexington and Concord were the first military engagements of the American Revolutionary War. They were fought on April 19, 1775, in Middlesex County, Province of Massachusetts Bay, within the towns of Lexington, Concord, Lincoln, Menotomy (present-day Arlington), and Cambridge, near Boston. The battles marked the outbreak of open armed conflict between the Kingdom of Great Britain and its thirteen colonies in the mainland of British North America. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest darkpiranha Posted August 14, 2013 Share Posted August 14, 2013 That works. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JCRGraphix Posted August 15, 2013 Share Posted August 15, 2013 Much better Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Soarindude Posted August 15, 2013 Share Posted August 15, 2013 Your Revolution helmet is absolutely orgasmic. I would love to see a NFL team wear that, AKA New England Patriots, on a special occasion. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BroncosHeat7 Posted August 19, 2013 Share Posted August 19, 2013 I agree. The moniker for Gettysburg is something you need to address. Wow! Was that supposed to be a reference to the Gettysburg Address? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest darkpiranha Posted August 20, 2013 Share Posted August 20, 2013 I agree. The moniker for Gettysburg is something you need to address.Wow! Was that supposed to be a reference to the Gettysburg Address?Yay! Someone noticed. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
beruud Posted August 20, 2013 Author Share Posted August 20, 2013 Lol I noticed it... Been working on a few more to put up soon Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JJHoser Posted August 20, 2013 Share Posted August 20, 2013 After viewing Gotpixel's friggen AMAZING thread, I am going to flatter him by presenting the team I made like he does... kind of. LOL. Thoughts?Is 'revolution' a slightly odd moniker for a town more readily associated with a civil war?Thank God someone else caught it before me. I was about to get very history geek up in here about the fact that REVOLUTION was a team in a town that had nothing to do with the Revolution. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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