kevsim1 Posted September 7, 2013 Share Posted September 7, 2013 Edited the logo based on kevsim1's comment.Much Better. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jmoe12 Posted September 7, 2013 Author Share Posted September 7, 2013 Edited the logo based on kevsim1's comment.Much Better.Thanks. Detroit will be up soon. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jmoe12 Posted September 7, 2013 Author Share Posted September 7, 2013 Feedback on all former teams still welcome, but here is Detroit.The Rev were founded in 1992 and have experienced an up and down ride ever since. They celebrated one league title in 2005, but finished 18th the next year. Right now, the team is facing relegation because their star winger, Torrey Tomlinson, signed with Vancouver. It will be a fight just to avoid relegation for Detroit this year. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kevsim1 Posted September 7, 2013 Share Posted September 7, 2013 Feedback on all former teams still welcome, but here is Detroit.The Rev were founded in 1992 and have experienced an up and down ride ever since. They celebrated one league title in 2005, but finished 18th the next year. Right now, the team is facing relegation because their star winger, Torrey Tomlinson, signed with Vancouver. It will be a fight just to avoid relegation for Detroit this year.I don't really like the giant E. I realise that it is the 2nd letter of Rev, and that there is a R and a V on the other sides of it, but I think that would only work if they were from Edmonton, or Erie, or Evansville, or El Paso. I'm not quite sure what to tell you to do. I do however really like the jerseys. A bit out of the box, but I like em. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
grant1woods Posted September 7, 2013 Share Posted September 7, 2013 Maybe its just my browser but it is a little same for me Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jmoe12 Posted September 7, 2013 Author Share Posted September 7, 2013 Maybe its just my browser but it is a little same for meWhat do you mean? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ThePeam Posted September 7, 2013 Share Posted September 7, 2013 Like the color and the arrangement of the colors. But why is it so small??? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jmoe12 Posted September 7, 2013 Author Share Posted September 7, 2013 Like the color and the arrangement of the colors. But why is it so small???I have no idea, I tried to make it bigger, but this is the biggest I can make it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DS729 Posted September 7, 2013 Share Posted September 7, 2013 The jerseys look cool but the logo needs some work. Make the E smaller, it doesn't look like the team is from Detroit, it looks like the team is from an "E" place (Edmonton, El Paso, Erie, you get the point). Put the R and the V in the middle so the "REV" is in the middle. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jmoe12 Posted September 7, 2013 Author Share Posted September 7, 2013 The jerseys look cool but the logo needs some work. Make the E smaller, it doesn't look like the team is from Detroit, it looks like the team is from an "E" place (Edmonton, El Paso, Erie, you get the point). Put the R and the V in the middle so the "REV" is in the middle.I'll work on it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jmoe12 Posted September 7, 2013 Author Share Posted September 7, 2013 Is this better? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kevsim1 Posted September 7, 2013 Share Posted September 7, 2013 Can you take the italic off? Part of the word ev is out of the circle Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jmoe12 Posted September 7, 2013 Author Share Posted September 7, 2013 Can you take the italic off? Part of the word ev is out of the circleYes I can, I'll fix that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kevsim1 Posted September 7, 2013 Share Posted September 7, 2013 Can you take the italic off? Part of the word ev is out of the circleYes I can, I'll fix that.Sounds good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jmoe12 Posted September 7, 2013 Author Share Posted September 7, 2013 Here's the logo without the italics. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kevsim1 Posted September 7, 2013 Share Posted September 7, 2013 Here's the logo without the italics.Yeah. That's better. The font doesn't look incredible 'sporty', but I don't think it's a real problem Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jmoe12 Posted September 7, 2013 Author Share Posted September 7, 2013 Here's the logo without the italics.Yeah. That's better. The font doesn't look incredible 'sporty', but I don't think it's a real problemOk. Any more feedback on Detroit? If not, Dorado Aguilas is almost done. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kevsim1 Posted September 7, 2013 Share Posted September 7, 2013 Here's the logo without the italics.Yeah. That's better. The font doesn't look incredible 'sporty', but I don't think it's a real problemOk. Any more feedback on Detroit? If not, Dorado Aguilas is almost done.2 in one day!?!?eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jmoe12 Posted September 7, 2013 Author Share Posted September 7, 2013 Dorado Aguilas TC The Golden Eagles were founded in 1990, and won their lone league title in 2010. One of the best teams in NATA, they haven't gotten the respect they deserve because Monterry Athletico and TC Azteca have constantly beaten them. This season, with a solid young core in place, Dorado Aguials TC looks to emerge from the shadows. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kevsim1 Posted September 7, 2013 Share Posted September 7, 2013 Wow! I really like this one! The log is definitely your best so far, and i really like the stripes. I'd say this is probably your best overall set Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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