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Fallen's NHL Concepts - Toronto ft. Vertical Sleeve Stripes Attempt II


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Wow, that's a bright yellow! Try sampling the teams colours from the logo off the site, you'll find it'll probably be much better on the eyes. As for the concept, I personally don't like the shoulder stripes you have going on, they might look better if they matched the sleeve and hem stripes though so maybe try to match those up. Also the logo on the home jersey is blinding, try a different colour set for that.

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Wow, that's a bright yellow! Try sampling the teams colours from the logo off the site, you'll find it'll probably be much better on the eyes. As for the concept, I personally don't like the shoulder stripes you have going on, they might look better if they matched the sleeve and hem stripes though so maybe try to match those up. Also the logo on the home jersey is blinding, try a different colour set for that.

I see what you're talking about for the Home logo, but the Yellow is Pantone that Colorwerx says the team used

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And the shoulder stripe is the same as the Sleeve and Hem stripes, just elongated so that it's just one stripe instead of 2.

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Definitely NO to the white numbers for both the away and alt. If you make the outline thicker on the alt and yellow for the away, I guess it could work, but no one should have a white number on some white jersey (NBA Christmas uniforms are a great example)

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Well, this is bound to turn heads

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I like that the Flag patches are gone but that's about the only problem with the Flames current set being addressed here. In fact, all you did besides that was replace red with an effect that would never work on an actual jersey... Doesn't work here either.

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Well, this is bound to turn heads

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I like that the Flag patches are gone but that's about the only problem with the Flames current set being addressed here. In fact, all you did besides that was replace red with an effect that would never work on an actual jersey... Doesn't work here either.

I don't know I used have a set of sheets for my bed that had a similar look to them.

but I wouldn't like it for a jersey.

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Maybe with a set like that the Flames are hoping it works like camouflage to hide how bad the teams been for the past few/next couple years? :P

...yeah I got nothing. The uh, color palletes on a number of these jerseys are hurting my eyes, Fallen. Try slightly darker or maybe just the modern color sets from color works. Some of their old time color sets seem a little too bright.

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Here's a suggestion: If you're going to use patterns, why not use some for more than just the red base. The black stripes could use it's own pattern to complement the rest. I've pulled it off before with gradients and special patterns, so I know it's possible.

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