derschwigg Posted October 8, 2013 Author Share Posted October 8, 2013 Sweet! Maybe make the claw marks and the rest of the D the same color?Can't say I feel this one. Took me a second to catch on that it's a D. I agree that maybe you should make the rest of the letter orange to match the colors.I tried it, but it loses the visual contrast. Otherwise, I think this is one of my stronger identities yet! My Portfolio | My Store | My Self Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Son_ofNun Posted October 8, 2013 Share Posted October 8, 2013 I like the logo; like the different colors on the D, ur right it helps contrast. Maybe you could make the claw marks touch te rest of the D to make the letter a little more recognizable? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
derschwigg Posted October 10, 2013 Author Share Posted October 10, 2013 Here's another two-fer! The Brewers and the Orioles. My Portfolio | My Store | My Self Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kbaker19 Posted October 10, 2013 Share Posted October 10, 2013 As a Brewers fan, I would prefer an M over a B. But I do like the design and wordmark. Thanks Dolphins91 for the jersey avatars. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LAWeaver Posted October 10, 2013 Share Posted October 10, 2013 I agree that an M would be better. It would give the logo some symmetry.As for Baltimore, I like the idea, but the blocky-ness of the bird stands out like a sore thumb. Especially since the bird's chest is round as well as the O. But if you were going for Robo-Oriole, then congrats I also think the view of the bird could be changes a little. We're looking at the side of the bird's, but the chest looks turned slightly. I think I know what you're trying to do, but you may need to add a little detail to the neck. @loganaweaver - Twitter / @loganaweaver - Instagram / Nike Vapor Untouchable Football Template / Logan's Logos Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kevsim1 Posted October 10, 2013 Share Posted October 10, 2013 Not sure why, but I see Baltimore Ravens in Milwaukee Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
eagle98 Posted October 10, 2013 Share Posted October 10, 2013 I second the suggestion about an M rather than a B for Milwaukee.Also, if you smooth out the lines on the bird's head, that would be, in my opinion, the finest logo ever created for the Orioles team. "Jesus said to him, 'I am the way, and the truth, and the life.'" - John 14:6"For God so loved the world that he gave his one and only Son, that whoever believes in him shall not perish but have eternal life." - John 3:16 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
derschwigg Posted October 10, 2013 Author Share Posted October 10, 2013 Alright, I've done both edits, and added a few details on the wing of the O Bird. Thoughts? My Portfolio | My Store | My Self Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
St Louis Cardinals Posted October 10, 2013 Share Posted October 10, 2013 Liked the b a lot better than the m #9 LSU vs. TCU Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AntCurtain Posted October 10, 2013 Share Posted October 10, 2013 That Orioles one is PERFECT!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
derschwigg Posted October 11, 2013 Author Share Posted October 11, 2013 And one more before the night's over! Boston! My Portfolio | My Store | My Self Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
derschwigg Posted October 11, 2013 Author Share Posted October 11, 2013 I've decided to scrap the current Brewers logo and go for more of a brewery crest. Carboys, kettles, maybe hops, more wheat/less laurel. Thoughts? My Portfolio | My Store | My Self Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
St Louis Cardinals Posted October 11, 2013 Share Posted October 11, 2013 All your wordmarks have tteh 2 color pattern than boston has. might want to switch that up a bit #9 LSU vs. TCU Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
derschwigg Posted October 11, 2013 Author Share Posted October 11, 2013 All your wordmarks have tteh 2 color pattern than boston has. might want to switch that up a bitMost of the teams so far have had a dark background - that's limiting the wordmarks to the "white city, color team" formula My Portfolio | My Store | My Self Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
St Louis Cardinals Posted October 11, 2013 Share Posted October 11, 2013 All your wordmarks have tteh 2 color pattern than boston has. might want to switch that up a bitMost of the teams so far have had a dark background - that's limiting the wordmarks to the "white city, color team" formulaI mean all of your wordmarks have the same pattern as the word RED SOX has. With light on top, dark on bottom with the shadow swoop #9 LSU vs. TCU Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
derschwigg Posted October 11, 2013 Author Share Posted October 11, 2013 All your wordmarks have tteh 2 color pattern than boston has. might want to switch that up a bitMost of the teams so far have had a dark background - that's limiting the wordmarks to the "white city, color team" formulaI mean all of your wordmarks have the same pattern as the word RED SOX has. With light on top, dark on bottom with the shadow swoopALL? That's just not the case. My Portfolio | My Store | My Self Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
raysox Posted October 11, 2013 Share Posted October 11, 2013 The first bunch were very very nice, but it seems like yove rushed the last couple. Take some time, work on basic shapes, and balance. I like that you've ignored the classic looks for some teams, just keep refining things like the MIL and BAL concepts @MichaelDanger19 | Dribbble Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
derschwigg Posted October 11, 2013 Author Share Posted October 11, 2013 I had some spare time over lunch to really dive into the Brewers logo - I personally love it. Thoughts? My Portfolio | My Store | My Self Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kevsim1 Posted October 11, 2013 Share Posted October 11, 2013 I love it too. Great work Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jmoe12 Posted October 11, 2013 Share Posted October 11, 2013 That's beautiful! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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