MrWonka Posted November 25, 2013 Share Posted November 25, 2013 Since this is a contest entry for HJC I'm totally listening to critiques and what not. However I will not be changing my sent in version simply because I would feel guilty to know someone else contributed. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
WSU151 Posted November 25, 2013 Share Posted November 25, 2013 Make it a plain yoke and it's 10x better. Smart is believing half of what you hear. Genius is knowing which half. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Orgo Posted November 25, 2013 Share Posted November 25, 2013 Just me, but I think the numbers need a bit more contrast with the uniform. I agree with simplifying the yoke, though.No love for the lighthouse shoulder patch? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
1clkgtramg Posted November 25, 2013 Share Posted November 25, 2013 love it!! dare I say I do like the original Fishsticks with the waves. The colours are definitely special, it would be nice to see it at least as an alternate since Oilers and Islanders look too similar IMO. (much better than the Crayola thing) US and World License Plate Redesign - Fixing the Elite Ice Hockey League - NHL to Soccer Crossover - European Hockey League Twitter Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Around the Horn Posted November 25, 2013 Share Posted November 25, 2013 Since this is a contest entry for HJC I'm totally listening to critiques and what not. However I will not be changing my sent in version simply because I would feel guilty to know someone else contributed.Add the lighthouse patch and you have a winner... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pluggerplugger1 Posted November 27, 2013 Share Posted November 27, 2013 I like the yoke as is, but I would definitely add the lighthouse patch to it. Maybe reverse the colors of the sleeve numbers too, but that might look weird once done...overall a great concept Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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