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Yeti Logo Logo *Updated 12/30*

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Well I'm back again trying to design logos for my Fantasy League. Soon, once I begin to learn and create better logos I will create an entire thread dealing with this league. But for now, I'm doing single threads. So, this team is looking to be called the Alaska Avalanche. I wanted to do something with regards to the Yeti or Abominable Snowman. I'm going to be adding a body to this, chest showing the top portion of it. I was planning on adding the wordmark under it then. This is my first attempt at creating a logo with regards to animal so please leave your comments on how it can be improved.

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I like it dude. Interesting thought, throw burgundy in the scheme and get a new look for the avalanche.

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I like it dude. Interesting thought, throw burgundy in the scheme and get a new look for the avalanche.

Thanks man! Ha. Very true, that would look quite nice.

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The U shape in the tongue seems unnecessary, but otherwise it's solid.

Yeah I was thinking that too.

My favorite Yeti logo I have seen so far... most of them look so poor. This one, perfect.

Thanks a lot man! It means a lot.

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Very nicely done! Can't wait to see the rest of the series.

Thanks man. I'm slowly making progress on the teams so hopefully soon I will begin the thread.

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Add me to the list of people who think the tongue looks a bit strange. Other than that, I'm really diggin this.

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Add me to the list of people who think the tongue looks a bit strange. Other than that, I'm really diggin this.

Agreed.

Well I went ahead an fixed the tongue and made it solid. I also added like a background to it and added a few more highlights, but I'm still working on the text portion. Here is the update.

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Not bad, but your colors need some better contrast; it looks very washed out as is.

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I followed Mockba's advice and went ahead by darkening up the color's to make them not look so washed out. Hopefully it looks better.

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The disconnect between the top of the head and the bottom portion really bothers me. You should work into making it look like a head that is one whole piece by working the white fur outside of the eyes and minimizing the amount of black shadow the glare creates.

Additionally, it needs some sense of depth with the level of detail you've got going on. For example, the forehead wrinkles are all the same size, which makes the face look a bit flat. If you make them smaller from bottom to top and shorten the brow strokes, it would help to better round out the logo. Aside from that it's a very nice Yeti logo which you don't see much of.

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The disconnect between the top of the head and the bottom portion really bothers me. You should work into making it look like a head that is one whole piece by working the white fur outside of the eyes and minimizing the amount of black shadow the glare creates.

Additionally, it needs some sense of depth with the level of detail you've got going on. For example, the forehead wrinkles are all the same size, which makes the face look a bit flat. If you make them smaller from bottom to top and shorten the brow strokes, it would help to better round out the logo. Aside from that it's a very nice Yeti logo which you don't see much of.

Hmm I see. I will try and work on creating a whole face rather than two separate sections. Thanks for the feedback, I will do my best.

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Real nice logo, keep up the good work fine sir.

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Real nice logo, keep up the good work fine sir.

Thank you I appreciate it.

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Thanks for the comments. I will be doing an update soon.

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Well here is the updated logo. I made it so the face was not disconnected with the top and bottom portions. Along with this I created more depth within the logo by gradually decreasing the size of the wrinkles on the forehead. Lastly, I smoothed out the shape of the head as it was bugging me. I'm going to continue on making changes so please leave your comments.

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