turbo72577 Posted February 24, 2014 Author Share Posted February 24, 2014 Denver updated. Removed workmark from sleeve and added a mouth to logo. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Clintau24 Posted February 24, 2014 Share Posted February 24, 2014 I really like the Broncos. I love the mane on the pants. The Seahawks style file tabs on the shoulder, with and without the "BRONCOS", just feels a bit over kill. "I believe in Auburn and love it!" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Buster Posted February 24, 2014 Share Posted February 24, 2014 The Broncos look great except for the giant Seattle-like numbers. I hate how huge they are on the 'Chickens and hope it doesn't catch on.Everything I tried with the Bengals just didn't seem right. I spent more time on this than any of the others so far, and this is the best I could come up with. I know it's not perfect...or great...but please, I'm asking you, don't make me go back and try something else. Please? lolLooks great on paper, but after how the Jags' fade came out in real life, I have no faith in this looking good on the field.Love this concept though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wonderbread Posted February 24, 2014 Share Posted February 24, 2014 Shouldn't the white be in the bottom, that's the way a tiger actually looks like. Have the fade be like SDSUs old helmets or Arkansas' Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
turbo72577 Posted February 24, 2014 Author Share Posted February 24, 2014 Stay traditional, they don't like it. Step outside the box, they don't like it. And I really don't understand what you mean about big numbers "catching on". Jersey numbers are big now and used to be bigger; they filled up almost the entire jersey. From now on I may just keep these to myself. There are far better concepts on this forum anyway. See you in the graveyard. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DCarp1231 Posted February 24, 2014 Share Posted February 24, 2014 Learn to take the criticism and improve your designs.... the only way to do so is to post your concepts on this site. Go off of what people say. Yeah some may not work out, but that's where your creative mind comes into play. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Somppi Posted February 24, 2014 Share Posted February 24, 2014 Reminds me of why Fraser Davidson left these boards... Auburn University Alum Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JRB14 Posted February 24, 2014 Share Posted February 24, 2014 There's work to be done, but it's fine. A couple comments might be a little out of line, just take it in stride, because these are some quality concepts. Seriously. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
drakexedge Posted February 25, 2014 Share Posted February 25, 2014 I think your concepts are just fine bud. The original Broncos unis you posted are fantastic, and I hate the Broncos.I think you're Ravens set was a little clunky and boring, but that's just some constructive criticism.Keep posting! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
vicfurth Posted February 25, 2014 Share Posted February 25, 2014 Do the concepts the way you like them. The newer members of the board usually cry and moan if you don't make everything "kewl". Sometimes you need a look that's less trendy and more classy. I will agree about the sentiment about criticism. We're not attacking if we think a concept tweak is needed; we're (most people) trying to help you improve. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
turbo72577 Posted February 25, 2014 Author Share Posted February 25, 2014 I appreciate the encouragement. Thank you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Buster Posted February 25, 2014 Share Posted February 25, 2014 Stay traditional, they don't like it. Step outside the box, they don't like it. And I really don't understand what you mean about big numbers "catching on". Jersey numbers are big now and used to be bigger; they filled up almost the entire jersey. From now on I may just keep these to myself. There are far better concepts on this forum anyway. See you in the graveyard.Wow.You need a backbone.I simply stated I think the giant numbers that Seattle uses look bad and you want to curl up in a corner?This looks bad to me. . Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JRB14 Posted February 25, 2014 Share Posted February 25, 2014 Let him do his concepts, or unfollow. Whether he has a backbone or not is irrelevant. Drop the argument, because continuing it is just causing more problems. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
turbo72577 Posted February 25, 2014 Author Share Posted February 25, 2014 "You need a backbone." I have a backbone; you need manners."I simply stated I think the giant numbers that Seattle uses look bad and you want to curl up in a corner?" Please read everything I wrote. Clearly you missed something."This looks bad to me." Your opinion."Do the concepts the way you like them.""Let him do his concepts, or unfollow."Yup. Thank you to those who appreciate a little creative effort. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JRB14 Posted February 25, 2014 Share Posted February 25, 2014 Thank you, turbo72577. I give credit where credit is due, it is most definitely due here. And after another look, I second Kaz's advice. Great work, though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dakotapalm Posted February 26, 2014 Share Posted February 26, 2014 THis is a great series. I like how you are adding creativity to the Broncos/ Bengals type teams, and keeping simple looks for Cowboys and Cardinals type teams. Some really nice work here. http://www.dakotapalmhelmets.blogspot.com Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wonderbread Posted February 26, 2014 Share Posted February 26, 2014 you really need to calm down, when someone says something like, use the old logo because yours isn't any better, or change the white from the top to the bottom because thats the way a tiger looks they aren't attacking you. Part of this board is providing suggestions and critiquing to make the end product better and help the designer. There are some designs on this thread that are really good but the others that are just a few elements away from being truly great and you need to take their ideas into consideration before breaking down and trying to take the role of a victim that doesn't even exist. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JRB14 Posted February 26, 2014 Share Posted February 26, 2014 Oh, my god. Here we go again. Things were fixed. We were talking about concepts, man. Now we're not. See what you did here? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wonderbread Posted February 26, 2014 Share Posted February 26, 2014 i believe i speak for everyone when i say we are only trying to help him, and you sheltering him isn't helping. we aren't saying anything wrong. Like I said we are just trying to improve his designs, and explain the culture here of critiquing and improving. It's not that we have anything against him. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JRB14 Posted February 26, 2014 Share Posted February 26, 2014 Yeah, I don't know what you've said, and I wasn't sheltering him from you in specific, or you at all. I wasn't even sheltering him. I don't know him, it's just that whether or not he has a backbone doesn't concern me. What does is his concepts. I just want to stay on topic. If you want to take this to private messaging, by all means do so. I won't intervene, because that won't show up in my notifications. Not saying anyone's wrong or anything like that. I'm not taking sides. But all I know is he's got some good concepts, and it would be great if we could see some more. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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