ujju2 Posted February 16, 2014 Share Posted February 16, 2014 Love them all, especially the Crusaders! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hugevolsfan Posted February 17, 2014 Share Posted February 17, 2014 Just a thought on the wordmark could you try to bring the inner highlights to a point to make it more like the logo.I think it would really complete this set love the sun you rendered. My Fictional Football League Version 3 My Fictional Football Leagues WebsiteMy Church Website Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lee Noire Posted February 19, 2014 Share Posted February 19, 2014 Here we go, my hometown team!Personally as an Orange County native I would've preferred they embrace the Anaheim name, but it's all good. At least they committed to a place and didn't cop out like the Angels. I like the modernizing of the Sun logo and the wordmark fits pretty well with it. The colors are still some of the best in football past or present so that makes this new logo even better. Good work all around.If I may, I wanted to make a suggestion about the helmets for this team. Maybe go for something out of the box in the same vein as the Rams or Bengals. Maybe have the sunburst, or the top part of it coming out from the front of the helmet, just above the bumper. That might be pretty cool. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BrianVlietDesign Posted February 19, 2014 Author Share Posted February 19, 2014 Here we go, my hometown team!Personally as an Orange County native I would've preferred they embrace the Anaheim name, but it's all good. At least they committed to a place and didn't cop out like the Angels. I like the modernizing of the Sun logo and the wordmark fits pretty well with it. The colors are still some of the best in football past or present so that makes this new logo even better. Good work all around.If I may, I wanted to make a suggestion about the helmets for this team. Maybe go for something out of the box in the same vein as the Rams or Bengals. Maybe have the sunburst, or the top part of it coming out from the front of the helmet, just above the bumper. That might be pretty cool. Yeah, I wanted to go with Anaheim (because I'm a Ducks fan and Anaheim doesn't get much credit) but I went with L.A. because logically L.A. is without major pro football and the marketing appeal for an upstart league in that market just makes sense.As for the helmet, I'll see what I can do. No promises. NYCFC - MLS CUP CHAMPIONS - 2021 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BrianVlietDesign Posted February 20, 2014 Author Share Posted February 20, 2014 Ok, so I have finished the Los Angeles Sun. But, as per request from Lee Noire, I decided to try something with the helmet. I have two versions and will allow you all to vote on it. Here they are:Home Version 1 Away Version 1 Home Version 2 Away Version 2 NYCFC - MLS CUP CHAMPIONS - 2021 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JMurr Posted February 20, 2014 Share Posted February 20, 2014 I like the logo on the back of the helmet. Very cool. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mamiller99 Posted February 20, 2014 Share Posted February 20, 2014 I like the logo on the back of the helmet. Very cool.Second that. That's what- She Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheRicSlick Posted February 20, 2014 Share Posted February 20, 2014 I like the Suns helmet in the back, but the front and ides of the helmet are a little too bland. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lee Noire Posted February 20, 2014 Share Posted February 20, 2014 Here we go, my hometown team!Personally as an Orange County native I would've preferred they embrace the Anaheim name, but it's all good. At least they committed to a place and didn't cop out like the Angels. I like the modernizing of the Sun logo and the wordmark fits pretty well with it. The colors are still some of the best in football past or present so that makes this new logo even better. Good work all around.If I may, I wanted to make a suggestion about the helmets for this team. Maybe go for something out of the box in the same vein as the Rams or Bengals. Maybe have the sunburst, or the top part of it coming out from the front of the helmet, just above the bumper. That might be pretty cool. Yeah, I wanted to go with Anaheim (because I'm a Ducks fan and Anaheim doesn't get much credit) but I went with L.A. because logically L.A. is without major pro football and the marketing appeal for an upstart league in that market just makes sense.As for the helmet, I'll see what I can do. No promises. No worries man, its your concept.Looking at the update I love those uniforms man. Those colors look so good! The LA monogram looks good too. I like that you did experiment with the helmets but i think the logo looks off placed in the back. I have never been a fan of over sized logos. That is really unique though and I wish it would've worked. I think it would look better on the front side where only the top half of the logo really needs to be seen. If you wouldn't go that way I'd just stick with the basic style. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Beluga4 Posted February 26, 2014 Share Posted February 26, 2014 Oh the joys of being able to have an alt. helmet. TOUGH LUCK BUCSLA is cool and so is Milwaukee, May I have the honors of asking, who is next? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
illwauk Posted February 27, 2014 Share Posted February 27, 2014 I'd just keep the version with the sun on the back. Maybe you could add some small (like, smaller than Alabama) numbers to the sides. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BrianVlietDesign Posted March 3, 2014 Author Share Posted March 3, 2014 Oh the joys of being able to have an alt. helmet. TOUGH LUCK BUCSLA is cool and so is Milwaukee, May I have the honors of asking, who is next?The Florida Blazers were supposed to be next. But, due to a stressful last two weeks, following with me getting some stomach virus I haven't been able to contribute much. My apologies. New concepts will be up soon enough. Thanks for your patience, guys! NYCFC - MLS CUP CHAMPIONS - 2021 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FunnyHeadlines Posted March 3, 2014 Share Posted March 3, 2014 Oh the joys of being able to have an alt. helmet. TOUGH LUCK BUCSLA is cool and so is Milwaukee, May I have the honors of asking, who is next?The Florida Blazers were supposed to be next. But, due to a stressful last two weeks, following with me getting some stomach virus I haven't been able to contribute much. My apologies. New concepts will be up soon enough. Thanks for your patience, guys!Oh, I feel you bro. That bug must have migrated from Nashville to Richmond. I had that thing last month. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DS729 Posted March 3, 2014 Share Posted March 3, 2014 Oh the joys of being able to have an alt. helmet. TOUGH LUCK BUCSLA is cool and so is Milwaukee, May I have the honors of asking, who is next?The Florida Blazers were supposed to be next. But, due to a stressful last two weeks, following with me getting some stomach virus I haven't been able to contribute much. My apologies. New concepts will be up soon enough. Thanks for your patience, guys!Oh, I feel you bro. That bug must have migrated from Nashville to Richmond. I had that thing last month.Yeah, it's been going around my high school, it's not just you Winger. Also, very much anticipating the Blazers when you get back to it. Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tyrano123 Posted March 5, 2014 Share Posted March 5, 2014 Can't wait to see what's next. Been following this series on the edge of my seat!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
neo_prankster Posted March 6, 2014 Share Posted March 6, 2014 I think this series is awesome.One question I have is will the Amsterdam Admirals, Scottish Claymores or Rhein Fire return in expansion? The Fictional Story of Austus Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BrianVlietDesign Posted May 6, 2014 Author Share Posted May 6, 2014 I think this series is awesome.One question I have is will the Amsterdam Admirals, Scottish Claymores or Rhein Fire return in expansion?No guarantees on the first two. But, I'm heavily considering Rhein.But, as an update, college life distracted me big time from completing this project the last few months. But, I fully intend to get back into it over the next week or two. So stay tuned everyone! NYCFC - MLS CUP CHAMPIONS - 2021 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tyrano123 Posted May 6, 2014 Share Posted May 6, 2014 Oh thank god Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
grant1woods Posted May 7, 2014 Share Posted May 7, 2014 Put the logo in the back but add the number on the side. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
neo_prankster Posted May 9, 2014 Share Posted May 9, 2014 I think this series is awesome.One question I have is will the Amsterdam Admirals, Scottish Claymores or Rhein Fire return in expansion?No guarantees on the first two. But, I'm heavily considering Rhein.But, as an update, college life distracted me big time from completing this project the last few months. But, I fully intend to get back into it over the next week or two. So stay tuned everyone!Are you sure? Because Amsterdam was where Adam Vinatieri started before he joined the Patriots. The Admirals were also the only NFLE team to produce a then-future Super Bowl MVP (Kurt Warner)As for Rhein, let's see them first, but I would suggest a flame on the pant legs, kinda like the 1984 Arizona Wranglers. The Fictional Story of Austus Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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