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NFL Refresh by Derschwigg - Bengals Added : 32/32 (COMPLETE!)

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Thanks, all!

I haven't forgotten about this, I have a lot going on between work and wedding planning. I'll update as soon as I can, but I wouldn't be surprised if it took another week or two to get back in the swing of things.

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A wedding!? Priorities man! Haha. Well congrats and looking forward to more inspired work from you! (More as in quantitative, not qualitative. Your quality is great. )

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I return! I have some time again, and was able to get the Chargers done!

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Oh my...that is a beautiful logo...I want to pet that horse...

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Like the streak of lightning in the horse mane.

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Thanks, man! Any place this could be improved?

Honestly, not at all. The one thing I could pick out if I absolutely needed to, would be that the top of the logo is a bit too rounded, whereas everywhere else is more pointed. But that's nitpicking at that point.

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I like the Chargers logo itself, as well as embracing the lighter blue as the primary. Not sure how well two AFC West teams with horse logos goes over in real life.

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Glad to see this is back! Chargers looks great. This is very much a personal preference, but I tend to think lighter blue functions better as an accent. Only thing I could say is maybe the shield is all dark blue, keeping just that half of the horse light blue.

Regardless, looking forward to the next installment(s)!

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Glad to see you back at it again! Congrats on getting married. Chargers logo looks sweet, good job!

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Thanks, man! Any place this could be improved?

Honestly, not at all. The one thing I could pick out if I absolutely needed to, would be that the top of the logo is a bit too rounded, whereas everywhere else is more pointed. But that's nitpicking at that point.

I had thought the same thing. I'll go in and make those bits pointy later.

Glad to see you back at it again! Congrats on getting married. Chargers logo looks sweet, good job!

Glad to be back! However, I'm not married just yet - got like 3 weeks left! Thanks!

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You rarely see a horse from the front view, so in that sense this is pretty unique. I would consider making the shield smaller. The horse is the focus, yet it only takes up 50% of the composition and there is a lot of empty shield space.

I don't know if the hair has to be yellow. It looks like a flame more than hair for that reason. How does it look in dark blue?

Other than that, great job!

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You rarely see a horse from the front view, so in that sense this is pretty unique. I would consider making the shield smaller. The horse is the focus, yet it only takes up 50% of the composition and there is a lot of empty shield space.

I don't know if the hair has to be yellow. It looks like a flame more than hair for that reason. How does it look in dark blue?

Other than that, great job!

Thanks!

How's this instead?

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This is definitely a logo that's ready to go! Looks like something that would be on the hood of a car, which isn't a bad thing.

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The neck looks awkward

That's part of the reason why a front-facing horse logo is so rare. Most of the head covers the neck.

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I also cranked out the Cardinals over lunch today. What do you think?

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Can't say I'm a fan of the wordmark. I don't like how the state name is under the nickname and I don't really like the font. Looks a little squished vertically. And wonderbread, that's actually what a cardinal's beak looks like...

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