derschwigg Posted August 5, 2014 Author Share Posted August 5, 2014 Inspiration struck, so in the meantime, here's a re-branded Washington Redskins team. What do you think? My Portfolio | My Store | My Self Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nuordr Posted August 5, 2014 Share Posted August 5, 2014 Not a fan..the W just does not work with Monument. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hugevolsfan Posted August 5, 2014 Share Posted August 5, 2014 I like it but the outside of the W needs to be moved out a little more & more space at the bottom My Fictional Football League Version 3 My Fictional Football Leagues WebsiteMy Church Website Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ramsjetsthunder Posted August 6, 2014 Share Posted August 6, 2014 I like the concept of the logo, but keep the Redskins name the same. Enjoying this series! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
derschwigg Posted August 6, 2014 Author Share Posted August 6, 2014 Not a fan..the W just does not work with Monument. How so? What would you do to fix it?I like it but the outside of the W needs to be moved out a little more & more space at the bottomDo you mean make it more squatty? I wanted to have a subtle football in the shape of the mark as well. My Portfolio | My Store | My Self Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hugevolsfan Posted August 6, 2014 Share Posted August 6, 2014 I did not see the football initially I just thought the shape of the W did not work as well currently. My Fictional Football League Version 3 My Fictional Football Leagues WebsiteMy Church Website Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
derschwigg Posted August 8, 2014 Author Share Posted August 8, 2014 Here's the Bills PRIMARY! My Portfolio | My Store | My Self Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dsaline97 Posted August 8, 2014 Share Posted August 8, 2014 The Bills look fantastic. The colors could use a little more contrast (even though it looks the same as the current). I suggest lightening up the red, it'd make the face look less fuzzy. Great logos, great series. Â Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
derschwigg Posted August 11, 2014 Author Share Posted August 11, 2014 Thanks! I'll darken up the blue a bit on both looks and see if that helps. Anyone else before I edit the Bills/move on to the handful of teams remaining? My Portfolio | My Store | My Self Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
YelichGraphics Posted August 11, 2014 Share Posted August 11, 2014 darken the outline or get rid of it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Edubdesign Posted August 11, 2014 Share Posted August 11, 2014 I've got an idea for Washington.Swivel it a little bit so it looks like the ball's just been thrown up in the air at an angle.Also, if you're going to do the "W-football" thing, you could probably call them the Washington Pigskins. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ren69 Posted August 11, 2014 Share Posted August 11, 2014 Really like the nice clean look of Washington, well done! For the Bills I think it will look just as good if not better without the WHT/GRY outline which is adding extra height & width to the logo. IMO it doesn't need it & will allow you to size the logo to it's full potential like on the helmet, uni, or merchandise for instance. Great job on all these, standing by to see what's next! https://www.behance.net/Ren1969 https://twitter.com/Ren1969_Rene Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HRC4 Posted August 31, 2014 Share Posted August 31, 2014 I had a little bit of time, so I put together this new look for the 49ers. I also had an idea for a fauxback, but I don't have time to do that just yet. So here's San Fran! I'm currently making logos for all of the teams in my fantasy league. Are you okay if I use the SF logo for the team based in San Francisco? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
derschwigg Posted September 1, 2014 Author Share Posted September 1, 2014 I had a little bit of time, so I put together this new look for the 49ers. I also had an idea for a fauxback, but I don't have time to do that just yet. So here's San Fran! I'm currently making logos for all of the teams in my fantasy league. Are you okay if I use the SF logo for the team based in San Francisco?Go for it! All I ask is that you credit me and, if at all possible, drop a link to my portfolio at jordanaschwege.com My Portfolio | My Store | My Self Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
derschwigg Posted September 20, 2014 Author Share Posted September 20, 2014 Here's what I've got for the Jags, but I'm stuck. Is there anything that can be improved on here?? My Portfolio | My Store | My Self Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jmoe12 Posted September 20, 2014 Share Posted September 20, 2014 I think you should make the gold a little less yellow. Also, more spots    Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hugevolsfan Posted September 21, 2014 Share Posted September 21, 2014 I dont like how the black outline cuts off at the neck it looks incomplete to me also what was said above. My Fictional Football League Version 3 My Fictional Football Leagues WebsiteMy Church Website Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kevsim1 Posted September 21, 2014 Share Posted September 21, 2014 Wow... This just might be be my favourite of the series. More spots and complete the outline and you have a beautiful logo. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mamiller99 Posted September 21, 2014 Share Posted September 21, 2014 The Jaguar needs to have a thinner chin, to make it look more predatory. And the eyes look like it's starring at the sun. That's what- She Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
derschwigg Posted September 22, 2014 Author Share Posted September 22, 2014 Thanks everyone for your feedback! I started playing around with the eyes a bit, but I can't decide. Which do you prefer? My Portfolio | My Store | My Self Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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